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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say I twas a bit weary of the beginning and sort of in disbeliefe... Thought it was kinda korny, \'cause of how ya had Heero and Fei proclaiming their love so fastly and like a start-struck couple stuck in a soap opra... ::chuckles:: I hate soap opras... lol ^_^
BUT! Please don\'t take that the wrong way, as something negitive.. it sounds like it yeah, I agree. But it\'s the truth! lol \'Sides, I like the story! I guess I just don\'t really like how it\'s moved so fast and how Heero and FEi were so OOC in the first chapter. Second chapter was much better!!
I see i bee been a while since this has been updated... Will thbe mbe more to it, you think? I hope there will be. Dispite my thoughts on it based on the first chapter. I really like the idea of Heero being a Dragon-human. That\'s never been done before that I\"ve seen. I do hope that ya continue with this one!! ^_~ I\'ll be watchin\' for it! Much luck!!
BUT! Please don\'t take that the wrong way, as something negitive.. it sounds like it yeah, I agree. But it\'s the truth! lol \'Sides, I like the story! I guess I just don\'t really like how it\'s moved so fast and how Heero and FEi were so OOC in the first chapter. Second chapter was much better!!
I see i bee been a while since this has been updated... Will thbe mbe more to it, you think? I hope there will be. Dispite my thoughts on it based on the first chapter. I really like the idea of Heero being a Dragon-human. That\'s never been done before that I\"ve seen. I do hope that ya continue with this one!! ^_~ I\'ll be watchin\' for it! Much luck!!
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October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the story please complete it!!!! I hate it when authors start something and dont finish it! So please finish it i want to see the end.
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September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cool please update soon tyhanks loved story wrie more coz you made me feel better by what happened in school i hate these fressman at my school they thred to cut my hair it was so worng any way love your story keep up the grat woprk
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story, i like your plot too you must write more! ^_^x