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for Wings of the Dragon

by Chimeradragon

person Tsuki Doriimaa
schedule December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say I twas a bit weary of the beginning and sort of in disbeliefe... Thought it was kinda korny, \'cause of how ya had Heero and Fei proclaiming their love so fastly and like a start-struck couple stuck in a soap opra... ::chuckles:: I hate soap opras... lol ^_^

BUT! Please don\'t take that the wrong way, as something negitive.. it sounds like it yeah, I agree. But it\'s the truth! lol \'Sides, I like the story! I guess I just don\'t really like how it\'s moved so fast and how Heero and FEi were so OOC in the first chapter. Second chapter was much better!!

I see i bee been a while since this has been updated... Will thbe mbe more to it, you think? I hope there will be. Dispite my thoughts on it based on the first chapter. I really like the idea of Heero being a Dragon-human. That\'s never been done before that I\"ve seen. I do hope that ya continue with this one!! ^_~ I\'ll be watchin\' for it! Much luck!!
person Jo
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the story please complete it!!!! I hate it when authors start something and dont finish it! So please finish it i want to see the end.
person nikki
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cool please update soon tyhanks loved story wrie more coz you made me feel better by what happened in school i hate these fressman at my school they thred to cut my hair it was so worng any way love your story keep up the grat woprk
person storm
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story, i like your plot too you must write more! ^_^x

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