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September 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter please! I have to know what happens next. Pretty pretty please. You write really good btw. Thanks for what you have written so far. Hope you update soon. :)
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June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
when will the update start again??? XD
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!! Please continue writing!! I started reading it and then i got hooked, i really love it!!
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the feZ stZ stories I have come across that I like. Please update soon!!!! I wanna know what happens next!!!
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sighs...Thank you so much for those chapters. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter.
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay yout wo when are you updating? it ebtter eb soon cause that was fucking fantastic what can i really say? Great plot, great characters and Chi Chi and Bulma are tha main characters! there usualy so over looked!
you had a few spelling errors snd a few grammer issued but nothing major you guys just need what we all do a beta! (that isn\'t to busy with school like mine is *sigh*)
update soon!
you had a few spelling errors snd a few grammer issued but nothing major you guys just need what we all do a beta! (that isn\'t to busy with school like mine is *sigh*)
update soon!
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December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please update again i love it very good
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December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mega col story so far cant wait for the next chapters
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! Don\'t put Bulma with Goku! Chichi goes with him! Please! I love this story, by the way. Keep up the good work.
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October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well? Where\'s the rest?