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for The Senses

by mystikal

person Anon
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please continue!! i loved the part \" daddy doesnt lone mommy any more, in fact, daddy love vegetthatthat he was thinking. update soon!! soon soon soon!!!
person gemini66
schedule September 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really like this fic ......and i like the way tiy ended ch6 with goku seeing the prince and the kids as his ideal faimly....as for chi its good she can see things from the outside now when it comes to what she had ...... go.....vegeta .....keep goku happy
person darkgoodess09
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are very evil!! Chi-Chi is a bitch, and Bulma is a wench interrupting their time togerther like that. But the story is really really good. Update soon!
person Rainbowskittles
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UGH!!!that Chichi stupid woman,always getting in the way between Goku and Vegeta,let\'s
just hope that Goku n\'tn\'t chose Chichi over Vegeta{if he does I\'ll slaughter him}.
Anywhoo,this chapter ROCKS!this fic is super cool,and I give it two thumbs up;I\'ll be
checking in for an UPDATE everyday,see ya.
person amaterasu
schedule September 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay! two updates in row!!!
nice chapter, specially because Goku didn\'t say yes to Chichi.

And for the chapters ...Keep them comming!
person amaterasu
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! I like the way you write Vegeta, and liked the way you wrote Goku\'s outburst with Chichi.
Update soon ok?
person megitsune
schedule September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey hurry up and wrtie faster. i wanna reit\'it\'s good. ja ne
person Celipa
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! Let the rut BEGIN!!!!
person Chirusa
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::Confused::.... Did he try to see if he would get pleasure from his tail?...oh well... hold on...wait.. [snarls] Chichi hurt Akagou!..Death to the shrew!
person Chirusa
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...........DAMNIT!! Damn you woman! Your timing is worse then...then... well Bardocks...a and Greph\'s mother! I wanna read the next chapter!

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