PLAYTIME | By : Tyrana Category: Dragon Ball Z > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 8216 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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I started this just to know if I was capable of writing smut, but
I think it isn't very good. Then I decided to add more chapters to
develop a more complex story. So,please,tell me what you think, if
you like it I will post more chapters. I will use all the topics you have seen
in many dbz yaoi fanfics ,but I hope to make it interesting. English
isn't my native language,so there will be many mistakes.At least,I
hope that you can understand it
Disclaimer:I don't own dragonball/Z/GT.They're property of Akira
Toriyama,TOEI yFUNimation.
PLAYTIME
Chapter One
The wind was carrying the most wonderful scents: rain, forest and
something musky and sweet.
"That scent...must follow that
scent". Vegeta muttered, unable of restraining himself.
After
flying for some minutes, he found the most beautiful sight. Near the
lake, bathed by the sunbeams, Goku was laying on his stomach,
sprawled on the grass, completely naked. And his tail was swaying
seductively, spreading that irresistible musk.
"Wait...tail?
When has Kakarot regrown his tail? Ummm...that scent...that
body...Shit! The bastard's in heat. That's why I've been so restless
lately, my body itching." Vegeta glared down angrily at his
nether regions, where a stubborn erection was very
evident.
"Damm,Kakarot. It's all your fault." Vegeta
looked again at the younger saiyan, enjoying immensely the
display.
"My,my,Kakarot, It seems that you've been a naughty
boy. Look what you've done to your prince. You deserve a punishment."
And he smirked evily, flying to his oblivious prey.
Goku was breathing raggedly, his skin burning. He had come to the
lake to cool off his body with the fresh water, but to no avail. So
he was laying on the grass trying to rest. He was so dizzy, almost
unconscious to his surroundings. But suddenly, he was very aware of
two hot hands roaming all over his skin; caressing, groping and
pinching all the right places. Yes, this was all he had been craving
for since all this madness began.
Vegeta kissed his neck tenderly, rubbing one of Goku's nipples, as
his other hand grabbed the younger saiyan's erection. “You're
so sweet, Kakarot” Whispered huskily Vegeta, before nipping
Goku's earlobe. Then, that talented tongue went all the way down,
licking the delicious neck, the collarbone and stopped at that
sculpted chest to suck the other nipple, while pumping Goku's length vigorously. Goku screamed in bliss as he spilled his
cum all over Vegeta's hand. The prince licked said hand clean,
enjoying the taste of Goku's essence, as he undressed, never keeping
his eyes apart from the younger saiyan. Then, he laid atop Goku,
kissing him furiously. Tongues wrestling restlessly, both delighted
in the other's exotic flavor, until they were breathless. After
breaking the kiss, Vegeta positioned his head between Goku's thighs
and began to suck his weeping cock. Goku panted and groaned, the
suction beeing too much. When he was near the edge, that wonderful
mouth stopped and he cried at the loss. “Ssshhh, my love”,
whispered the prince, lifting and spreading Goku's legs, as the tip
of his cock rubbed Goku's entrance, making
the younger saiyan go crazy. Then, the prince pushed forward
forcefully, till he was compleately sheathed inside of Goku's tight
heat. Both saiyans scream at the overwhelming sensation, then
remained still for a while. When Goku was relaxed enough, the prince
began to move. Slowly at first, then increasing the rhythm whith every
thrust. Making the younger saiyam scream in ecstasy, as he touched
Goku's pleasure spot, over and over again. After a long time of
pounding the younger saiyan senseless, Vegeta ascended stretching
more the hot channel with his now larger cock. At the same time, he
was pumping frantically Goku's erection, until the younger saiyan
released his seed for the second time, clenching his inner walls
painfuly over Vegeta's cock. With one last thrust, the prince came,
screaming his lover's name. Vegeta collapsed atop the younger saiyan,
remaining inside of him. When the prince recovered his breath, he
looked up at his partner
Goku's face was shining all covered with sweat, eyes closed, lips parted, cheeks reddened.
“Gods, Kakarot. You're beautiful” He whispered, caressing
tenderly that lovely face. Then he groaned, feeling that he was hard
again. “Time to play again, Kakarot”
AN:I'm new at this, so I would appreciatte that you would tell me
what I do wrong and give me advices to improve my writting.
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