What May Be.... | By : Nelfie14 Category: Dragon Ball Z > AU - Alternate Universe Views: 1935 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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So this chapter is from Goku's POV. I just want to let everyone know that I will be jumping POV's sometimes just so there is no confusion. Also I noted quite a bit of grammatical errors and I think some spelling ones as well.
I was really quite excited since this is my first fanfic. I am trying to pace myself and not make so many errors this time. Please feel free to review I will be taking your criticisms with all the intentions of using them to help build me as a better writer. :)
Oh and Italicized content is the POV's thought. Just to let you know. If I can do that...LOL I know last chapter when I uploaded didn’t do that... Meh.
Warnings: The usual, I don’t own anything associated with DBZ.....
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Wow. Another Saiyan and a female one too boot. She's quite young really. Shem might just be the same age as Goten.
"Wow" a whisper escapes my lips. I rest my chin on my arms. The chair I'm straddling seems a bit small now. Cocking my head to side I study her. Not only is she young, but she's quite cute too. Then in a familiar pose I raise my hand behind my head and laugh. If Chi Chi ever heard me say that she'd kill me for sure. I give another quick laugh. But still its hard not to notice. Her lightly tanned skin, long jet black way locks. A bit unruly, though it only seemed to enhance her beauty.
I laugh again, in classic Goku pose. Man if Chi Chi ever knew what I was thinking Vegeta would be the only male saiyan left. Speaking of the devil. He's coming this way. He probly wants a look at this female. He probably doesn't even believe she is a saiyan. I gaze at her once more. There's something about her.
I've seen cute girls before, so why can't I stop staring at you? Maybe its because you're the first saiyan female I've met.
"Hmmm." I moan, better move back a bit. I'm way to close, and I slide my chair back a couple of feet. With my head cocked to the left and my chin resting on my arms I still can't figure out why I can't turn my gaze away.
Maybe its just the lighting.
The sun is setting and the orange rays of the setting sun seems to make it look as though she's glowing. "Hmm.." Yeah thats probably it. Just then Vegeta and Bulma enter the room.
"So how's our patient?" She asks.
"She seems to be doing alright." I answer, still staring at her.
"I can't believe she's a Saiyan?"
"Me too..." I whisper.
"Hmph" Vegeta snorts as he stands in the corner arms folded and same old scowl on his face. His eyes on Nelfie. "I highly doubt she's a saiyan. You and I Kakarot are the last two pure blooded saiyans left in the universe."
"Yeah but Vegeta I’ve told you about the tail." I interrupt, "Doesn't that argue the contrary?"
"Well if she's a true Saiyan, why is she so young Kakarot? You and I are both much older than that child there. Remember the last Saiyan child to leave the planet Vegeta was well over 40 years ago, and the last one was you!" He retorts quite vehemently.
"Yeah.." I pause and then quickly answer "Well what if she was on a planet that aged you slowly?"
"Preposterous!" He yells.
"Well she does seem to be a real Saiyan Vegeta. I mean, well look at her. That thick jet black hair and we’ve already mentioned the TAIL. I know I can’t read ki like you gusy can, but from what Goku explained of the crash site, she might be quite powerful as well." She trails off.
Vegeta just snorts at Bulmas statement knowing full well that if he voiced his denials once more it would just start an argument with her.
I glance over at him. He too can't seem to stop himself collecting quick glances at her. I wonder if he finds her attractive as well. But knowing him he'll never admit to it. Just then he shoots me a glare.
Oops. he must of sensed me staring at him.
I turn quickly from his 'quit staring at me or else' scowl. I turn back to the sleeping girl. Still there IS definitely something about her.
"She really is stunning isn't she?" Bulma adds. Trying to play the fool to avoid any suspicion I fall back on the old hand behind my head clueless routine.
"Oh really? I hadn't noticed?" still laughing with that darn hand behind my head.
"Well, that's not surprising." she states "but I thought that even you would have grasped the obvious. But don't you think so Vegeta?" she asks as she turns to him. He instantly turns a light shade of pink which gives him away. So he did notice. Sly dog.
"I, I don't know what you're talking about woman!" he protests.
"Oh surely you must have noticed Vegeta. That perfect skin, petite well toned frame, her somewhat delicate features, and that gorgeous long hair. If I wasn't such a beauty myself I would almost be jealous." She said checking over the sleeping girl.
Yes Bulma was right. Despite the scrapes and bruises from the crash, her skin seemed to be flawless and her body was very well toned. Then Bulma starts up again.
"Not to mention look at those..." she says as she holds up the blanket the girl is using with one hand, while the other hand is poking her left breast with a finger. The shocking site of what Bulma was doing was enough to send Vegeta and I falling to the floor...
"Bulma!" I protest. "What, what are you doing?"
"What?" She asks looking up at me from the side of the bed. "They are really quite perfect. Almost as good as mine." She states.
"You can't just touch her there while she's sleeping!" I yell.
"Why? We're both women and it's not like I'm being a perv and grabbing it with my whole hand."
"Are you crazy women?" Vegeta buts in.
"Oh really you two are such children. Like the both of you have never seen breasts before." She adds. That statement alone was enough to send Vegeta and I into more protest and we both were berating her with arguments trying to hide our embarrassment.
We didn't even notice that others were actually entering the room, until someone seemed to break the endless jabbering coming from our mouths.
"So is this her?" asks Trunks.
"Yeah, this is her." Bulma answers, thank god.
"How is doing? She doesn't seem all that bad." He says as he walks over and examines her.
"She seems to be fine. Her vitals are steady. She might have a bit of a concussion, but after a crash like that. I'm surprised she's alive at all from what Goku told me." She motions over to me.
"Was it really that bad dad?" asks Goten.
"Yeah it was son. Her ship was completely destroyed. When I found her she was under a lot of debris. I thought I was going to be recovering a body after I sensed to initial impact. But I was surprised when I could feel her ki afterwards." I pause thinking about how I found her. Under that pile of hair. She looked like giant hairball at first glance. I thought she was some sort of hairy alien until I heard her groan and she moved her arm. "Yeah, she's powerful too, I mean you can't sense it right now, but I think she's able to hide it even when unconscious. The amount of damage on her pod she should have been killed, at least suffered more serious injuries."
"Could she really be that strong?" he asks yet again turning and looking at me with disbelief on his face.
"She might be the third or fourth most powerful person currently on the planet."
"Oh get off it Kakarot!" Vegeta jumps in "That is absolutely ridiculous and you know it!"
"I'm telling you, she's a lot more powerful then she looks."
"Really? Wow dad. That’s incredible." he says with an air of excitement in his voice as he looks over at her.
"Not really considering she's a Saiyan." I announce and as soon as I do gasps and more questions fill the room. But that statement seemed to annoy Vegeta and he wasn't going to let that go.
"I've already told you Kakarot, she can't be a saiyan she's way too young." he protests.
"Yeah, she looks about our age hey Trunks?" Goten chimes in.
"Uh huh. But I thought your dad was the last saiyan to leave planet Vegeta before Freiza blew it up." he questions and raises an eyebrow.
"Thats what I've been trying to tell you!" Vegeta roars.
"Yeah, but what if I wasn't or maybe she was sent out before I was?" I add.
"But then wouldn't she be older?" Trunks answers back.
"Exactly!" insists Vegeta.
"I can't explain it." I say, "But I honestly think she really is a saiyan. Not just because of the tail, but because she admitted so herself." Vegeta was gonna protest more but we were all suddenly distracted by a soft groan and movement from the topic of our discussion.
"Where...where am I?" she whispers. Bulma leans down and grabs her hand.
"You're here at my home, I'm Bulma. How do you feel?" She inquires.
Nelfie lets out another groan as she tries to sit herself up. "I think I'm alright."
"Don't try move."Bulma insists."Here let me help you." and she pushes a button on the side of the bed that raises Nelfie into a sitting position.
"HI there." I say as I move my chair closer to her. "So do you feel any better? You had me worried when you fainted." I cock my head again to the side and smile. She looks at me for a moment then returns a soft smile. It startles me, she really is beautiful, and those eyes are at the center of that beauty. I didn't really notice after the crash. But now that things are calmer here they are really entrancing. The way the sun hits them they look gold, but before they were alike milk chocolate.
"You're, Goku? You pulled me out of the crater." She says looking me directly in the eye.
"Yup, thats me." I tell her reassuringly with a grin and I break eye connection by closing mine. As I do she looks around the room to each person there staring at her. I open my eyes again and see the puzzled look on her face.
"Oh these are my friends." I tell her. "The one beside you is Bulma. Next to her is her son Trunks. The grouchy guy in the corner is Vegeta, he's Trunks' father. This guy," I smile and push him closer "is my son, Goten." The introduction seems to have worked her face softens once again and the smile returns.
"HI, I'm Nelfie" she whispers with a sweetness I hadn't noticed before. A slight blush on her face creeps up, and she lowers her head with a bit of embarrassment.
"So my dad says you're a Saiyan?" Goten inquires while moving a step closer. Vegeta snorts in the background but no one seems to really mind. Her cheeks grow a little brighter with the question and she folds her hands on her lap.
"Yeah, I am...." she admits softly, and just as soon as she does, the room falls silent with disbelief. I just grin at the looks on everyone's faces. The simple admission was able to drive them all speechless, and their expressions were priceless.
I could tell though, something in her ki. Something that all the Saiyans I’ve met have, its hard to explain, though to convince Vegeta later I’ll have to try.
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A/N- So I guess thats it for this chapter. I will get the next one up soon. So in the next one there might be a little wink wink nudge nudge....maybe just some light petting or a little friendly groping XD.
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