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By : Vegetaswriter
Category: Dragon Ball Z > Yaoi - Male/Male
Views: 3552 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: i do not own dbz or make any money from this.
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The wind calls thy name

I was here,

All in one,

Each piece shattered,

I can be whatever you want,

A love or whore.

You took away my innocents,

Destroyed my dignity,

Ripping it away from me,

You made me cold and bitter,

You showed me what hate was all about.

First you were my dream,

Now you’re my nightmare,

Let me go,

Let me run,

Let me hide amongst the darkness.

You came for me every night,

With a gleam in your eyes,

I know your intent,

Your eyes bitter sweet,

Sea green sparkling of lust,

I hate your eyes.

You took away my innocents,

Destroyed my dignity,

Ripping it away from me,

You made me cold and bitter,

You showed me what hate was all about.

I sly into another’s arms,

Feel the love you denied me,

His kisses are firm,

His touch,

His voice,

Love.

You shall never touch me again,

No longer shall you corrupt my mind,

You are just a man,

A man whom hides,

A fake smile,

A fake laugh,

You are not real,

You are a monster with a jackal smile,

The monster whom calls my name in the wind.

Kakarot,

I pray for your death,

And my sanity…

Okay I was planning on doing the three updates today, but the chapter I am currently working is taking a little more time then expected. So I think I will work on another quick one before presenting the last chapter of the vamperic fic… which will be pretty damn long… Ah so, now the reviews.

Fanfiction:

Cara2012: Ah thank you very much for reviewing, it is always good to read what you think of each story, and many times I giggle because I think the same thing. And yes the Gay parade is something to witness indeed, I go every year, and every time I have a damn good time. Yeah I like P/V pairings as well, but I like them being evil little bastards ;)

Mjmusiclover: Thank you very much for the compliment, it means a lot to me, because I don’t think highly of my writing skills, I see others and wow, it is nearly flawless; but I do know as well they have Beta readers to fix their mistakes, and tweak sentences. I would love one, yet I keep finding myself too shy to go to the Beta section and ask for one… Oh well, just gotta keep practicing lol

Ranni-lou: Awe thank you! You’re the first to give the wishes! Just three more days and its my bday! Which means this is almost done! 27 chapters only. I am happy you enjoyed the Gohan x Vegeta fic, I tired to make a lemon, but I wasn’t feeling it, but I tried to! Lol

Piccolo fan: Thank you so much *gushes* it was my pleasure to write this chapter, since when I think of these two as a couple I think of dark dark sexy evil things mmmmmmmmmm.

Adultfanfiction:

Vegetasfangurl: Thank you XD! The things I do to PxV, but it cannot be helped, I like em evil! I tried once to turn one lemon of these two slightly romantic, but fuck! It was so damn hard, ended up with whips and chains and I was like (o.0) nope, cannot do a romantic lemon with these two… lol

Animeslave18: Hahahha, I love it! (Points to action scene in the beginning of review) Thank you glade you approve of Evil bindings, but come on in the series when you see them standing together, I kept picturing them grinning evilly while rubbing their hands. Hahaha. *KISS!*Ah yeah I know the movie, I downloaded it and watched it… I think two or three years ago… *Smacks head! Work brain!* yeah it is a lot like Fright Night, well now a days there is many movies like it now L, originality is becoming hard to come by these days. And yes, you do have a very valid point with twilight, and it kills me to give that franchise an ounce of positive feedback hahahha, but yes the sparkly thing is unique. Okay moving on now… lol Oh a movie you must see (if you haven’t already) The cabin in the woods, oh my the whole concept is amazingly unique! A great breath of fresh air in the horror genre! Oh check your Facebook woman, I sent a request. Back to review…A witch no…. but it would be cool, a real witch witch, fly on a broom an all hehehe, fuck public transit son! I can fly… (That’s the coffee talking…) I do agree the throne of skulls sounds cool and I thought about it, but I am doing my best to stay away from clichés. Yeah I had to make Vegeta that dark lord once again from ‘Life is ironic’ I missed him
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Daily prizes	By : Vegetaswriter Category: Dragon Ball Z > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 3552 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: i do not own dbz or make any money from this.

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