The Meaning of Pride

Trunks:
*pout *

Gk: I agree
that there should be more sex for me.

Vegeta: You
do realize that this story is about the emotional development and what not,
right?

Gk: *blink
* I thought it was so we could get
together and *looks at warnings at top of the page * ‘bump uglies’?

Vegeta:
Well, it is. But our ‘bumping
uglies’ is significantly augmented by our deep relationship.

Gk: *Blink
* So can we have sex now?

Vegeta:
*sigh * After lunch.

Saiyajin Neko:

*eyes
bug out of head * Wha? You mean this fic won’t end before Pan and
Bra get old enough for a side plot?
*falls over and dies * Actually,
not sure about that. Not sure how much
longer this fic has. *looks at plot
line, and sees where it was supposed to have ‘ended’ several times. * Hn.

Yes,
I did like Louis. I really liked
him. Poor angst little guy. *pats Louis and he bemoans his misfortune to
have met Card. * I was very proud that
Goku managed to get out of doing his laundry.
Am waiting for those chapters.
*waits patiently * *still trying
to be patient. * *eye starts twitching
*

Mechanical Butterfly:

Wow. Poetry.
I was pretty proud of that chapter; but dear, don’t you think you should
leave the keyboard in one piece? I
mean, if you break it by banging your head on it than what are you going to
type with?

I
felt a bit bad for abusing Yamcha that way, but all in the name of humor. ;)

I’m
like that with movies. People hate to
watch movies with me. *sigh * Which is fine; but if I don’t have someone
else watching the movie, I generally just wander away from it. Leave it playing and come back when it gets
interesting.

*Trunks
and Gina look at one another. *
Meanwhile… *Card jump up and down and shouts: I KNEW HE WAS EVIL! I
KNEW I KNEW! *

*Twins
inch away from writer, accidentally get too close to MB and are suddenly sucked
into her deranged world *

Getarian:

Wow. That is a lot of reviewing.

Yeah,
in chapter 30 I thought even Goku realized he probably shouldn’t have stepped
in, and at the same time, I couldn’t see Goku doing anything less.

In
chapter 31; really? Pressure
cooker? Yeah. That is what it was supposed to be like. (This statement is a bit weird to me only
because I helped my mom make jelly and jam and we used a pressure cooker to
seal the jars, so when I visualize this ‘pressure cooker’ thing I’m seeing Goku
and Vegeta trapped in little mason jars.
O.o. Floating around in
strawberry jelly.)

Chapter
32: Yeah, Goten could have a touch of that ‘precognitive’ gene. (Weird that you said ‘sense’ it because in
my originals there’s this girl who’s father was a Prophet and she can ‘sense’
the future through her emotions. *realize that might be off subject * But weiiiiird, that you phrased it that way… ) Or cou could just be a worry wart. Only
time shalt tell.

Oh,
yeah, Goten was thinking if it came to an all out battle, (between Goku and ‘Geta)
than him and Trunks would have to keep them from destroying the planet. Th, th, they would have to fight their own
fathers out of fighting. O.o did that make any more sense?

*shivers
* I was so mad at Tien when he said ‘Where’s
your pride’ I was totally rooting for
Vegeta to kick his stupid ass.
*Realizes that she is author, still pretends as if she just read it, and
thusly could root for what was going to happen. * Hn. Gotta love Goku and
his dirty clothes.

Chapter
33: AHHHH! The Godfather! I love
that movie. I love Michael! I always felt so bad for him, working so
hard to get away and then being so very good at being the Godfather, and having
to stay in all those years.! (really
likes that movie. And the second
one. Sort of liked the third one, but
not as much.) Oh. *sigh *
… *realizes she is suppose
be
be responding to fic reviews. *

Yeah,
I loved the way Vegeta’s POV turned out.
I really do. *sighs * Glad you liked it too.

I
figured it up and in order to have actually typed that chapter (which I did, I
wasn’t lying, I had a stop watch and everything) in twenty minutes my typing
speed had to be around 100 words a minute.
I felt pretty darn impressed with myself. (Of course I was ‘angry’ because of the Vegeta mindset I was
writing and thus I typed faster (because I always do when I’m angry) so that
probably had something to do with it.

Alrighty,
that looks to be the end of the responses.

Hectate 18:

*Has
never seen more people for someone’s death than people that are happy that Tien
is dead. * Oookay then. Well, I don’t have a medal, but I do have a ‘spin-off
Queen crown that Jaygoose gave me a while ago.’ *Fic runs away and hides because it’s afraid of the hugging.* *Card blinks a few times and pats Hectate on
the back * Thanks dearie.

Haven’t
read your ficcie yet (this is about an hour after I got it ) Because have been busy avoiding writing this
chapter. But I will get to it! SOON!
*vows this. *

Seeeeeyaaaaa Foooooooollllllllllllllllks!