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The Music Of The Morning
Title: Dominus De Cupiditas
Chapter Title: The Music Of The Morning
Rating: NC-17 Blood, Guts, Gore, and Smut/ Rape
Summary: Everything should to be getting back to Normal for the Z Gang. Vegeta should be letting his demands finally rest. But the things that should be rarely are.
Main Character Focuses: Bulma, Vegeta, Asoreia, Trunks, and Goku
Random Quote: “It’s like a dream you try to remember but it’s gone. You try to scream but it only comes out as a yawn.” Pinch Me by Barenaked Ladies
Things to Know: ~<*>~ means the start or end of a flash back. Vegeta and Asoreia talk in Saiyan (which is un-conjugated Latin) but it will be translated...Goku thinks this story he’d like to give his home language a whirl. (Gods help us)
The soft, gentle sound of the Baby Grand Piano drifted up the stairs, down the hall, through the solid oak door, into the sun lit bedroom, and resonated in his sensitive ears. Purple eyes opened and he for a moment could not remember where he was. A soft growl left his lips when he saw the digital alarm by his bed click to 8:01 am.
“Who in their right mind is playing the piano at eight in the morning?” Trunks grumbled as he swung his legs over the side of the bed. He ran his long, slender finger through his purple locks and yawned. “Ack!”
He followed the music, which had shifted from simple cords into a song, until he stood in the doorway of the dinning room. Goku lay on his stomach on the closed, black, piano lid, his feet bouncing behind him and his head in his palms. Vegeta levitated behind the bench, his legs and arms crossed and his eyes closed. If it were not for the smirk, Trunks would have thought he were meditating. Asoreia’s small delicate fingers danced across the ivory keys, no sheet music to guide her.
Her voice broke his train of thought, “You tell me your in love with me, like you can’t take your pretty eyes away from me. It’s not that I don’t want to stay, but every time you come to close I move away.”
Bulla came running in from the kitchen with a smile that reached her eyes. She whispered in Trunks direction, “This is my favorite song.” Bulma, Christopher, and Bunny followed close behind. Trunks could hear a soft ‘Isn’t this lovely’ from his grandmother and smiled.
Asoreia ignored them and kept going, “I wanna believe in everything that you say ‘cause it sounds so good. But if you really want me, move slow. There’s things about me you just have to know. Sometimes I run, Sometimes I cry, Sometimes I’m scared of you. But all I really want is to hold you tight, treat you right, be with you day and night. All I really need is time.”
Asoreia smirked at Trunks and nodded her head. He spun around and saw his grandfather leaning against the doorframe. He turned back to see his father smiling, eyes still closed. For a moment jealousy crept into his heart, he had never made his father smile that way. Why could she, with that sweet tantalizing voice, bring his whole family together in one room.
“I don’t want to be so shy, every time that I’m alone I wonder why. Hope that you will wait for me, You’ll see that, you’re the only one for me. I wanna believe in everything that you say ‘cause it sounds so good. But if you really want me, move slow. There’s things about me you just have to know. Sometimes I run, Sometimes I cry, Sometimes I’m scared of you. But all I really want is to hold you tight, treat you right, be with you day and night. All I really need is time.”
But by the time she came to the bridge, Trunks could not find it in his heart to hate her. Her voice was so sensual that he found himself longing for her, loving his father’s mate. He realized that he was falling in love with the one person that made his father truly happy. He mentally slapped himself in the forehead. He had to stop this, she was too old and too married to be his.
“Just hang around and you’ll see, there’s nowhere I’d rather be . If you love me, trust in me. The way that I trust in you. Sometimes I run, Sometimes I cry, Sometimes I’m scared of you. But all I really want is to hold you tight, treat you right, be with you day and night. All I really need is time.”
Trunks left the overly cheery room, his head was hurting and his stomach growled. He pushed passed his grandfather, who really did not seem to notice, and made his way into thechenchen. Trunks removed the breakfast, Bunny had been making, off of the stove. He served out plates for everyone while he listened to Asoreia’s sweet voice carry over the piano with another bubble gum pop song.
Trunks slowly ate his meal, alone.
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“Oh man Asoreia that was so cool. I never knew you could sing, dad never said.”
“Well we Saiyans are sneaky like that.” Asoreia smiled at Bulla as she stood up. She stretched, raising her hands over her head. “Where’s Trunks. I saw him here earlier. We wouldn’t want him to miss his breakfast. That’s really not good for the Saiyan body.
“I saw him head into the kitchen while you were still on the first song. Where on earth did you learn to play like that?” Bunny smiled
“Not on Earth at all. One does not travel the four galaxies to the extent that I have and not pick a few things up. Besides Master Frieza was quite fond of the sound.”
“Oh dear.”
“Don’t worry it.”
Christopher smiled, “Glad to see you’re feeling better darlin’. We had to tell the kids you were suffering from head trauma. It was kinda funny.”
“Glad I could give you a laugh.”
“Oh I was in stitches.”
“Chris stop it. We were all glad you knocked him on his butt. Mr. McMicheals is a big jerk.” Bulla smiled as she ate her breakfast.
Asoreia smirked, she leaned over to Vegeta, “It’s getting stronger you know.”
“Huh?!” His eyes went wide in terror.
“No not Dominus De Cupiditas. Your son’s scent. We need to be very careful. I can still smell him in here.”
“Hey you two break it up. No secretes at the table. If it’s good enough for ol’ ‘Geta there, it’s good enough for all of us.” Christopher smiled.
“Oh I was merely stating that your ego is far too big for a room this size and I was rather suffocated by it. If you’ll excuse me, your presents insults me.” Goku and Vegeta laughed as they stood up.
“Up for a train?” Goku asked as he stretched, his back cracked in the process. Vegeta and Asoreia nodded.
“Don’t get to roughed up, remember the party is tonight.” Bulma called after them.
“We’ll try,” Asoreia smirked
They left, heading towards the Gravity Room, in silence. Once they were in the safety of the outdoors, Goku stopped. “Did you figure out what we are going to do?”
“No.” Vegeta mumbled. His normal pride and arrogance gone for the moment.
Asoreia could hear the two younger men discussing their plan of action, but she was not paying attention. She could hear a dull buzzing noise that reminded her of AI 10,000, as it was being destroyed. Energy, pulsating through metal. The sound grated at her nerves. AI was dead, she could vaguely recall things now, small details, minor encounters. What was that noise?
She followed the sound until she stood outside the small dome known as the Gravity Room. A soft purple glow surrounded the silver metal, Bulma had installed the force field after all. Asoreia smirked.
A soft grunting could be heard from inside the metal dome. She did a quick energy scan but whoever was inside was concealing their power level. She shrugged, never being one to allow curiosity to consume her, and IT herself inside.
The instant her body appeared in the GR, she was slammed against the wall. The wind wnocknocked out of her frail looking body and her head bounced off the metallic walls. Panic surged through her as she looked into the fury filled purple eyes of Trunks, felt his hand on her throat and an forearm pressed into her stomach.
“You did this to me!” He snarled, her body shook with fear.
didndidn’t do anything to you.” Asoreia whispered
“YES YOU DID! You made me fall in love with you.”
She gasped when those words passed his lips. His face twisted in pain and disgust. “Trunks I...”
“Ever since you first came here you have been all I could think of. That night six months ago, when I was in your room. You didn’t scream out, at least not until after I was in there. I just sat there watching you, knowing I would never have the chance to watch you sleep again. Knowing you were here for my father and that hurt. You know he rarely left your side when you were ill? I never had the chance to hold your hand and tell you all the things I wanted to say.”
“Trunks your hurting me, please let go.” His grip tightened on her and she gagged for air.
“You know nothing of hurt.”
“I know more than you would ever care to.” Her voice came out ragged and strained. She could feel her body giving out, to tired to fight for air.
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“Kakorot I really have no clue why he said cheese and........are you ok?” Vegeta, whose comment started out in utter annoyance, asked with honest concern.
“Yeah why?” Goku chuckled. He loved getting Vegeta agitated. He knew Vegeta understood a great deal of his childish behavior was an act, but he didn’t care it was what was expected of him.
“You’re not panicking?”
“I don’t think so...are you?”
“No idiot. Then who is...Where’s Asoreia?!”
“Huh? I didn’t even know she was gone.”
“Search!” They stood there stretching their seances for her Ki. Each taking a different side of the CC compound to check.
“Found her Geta. The GR.”
“Why would she be in a panic in the GR?”
“Maybe she put the gravity to high and can’t get it off, you know it?”
“I don’t think so. You know as well as I do that she can handle more than the two of us Kakorot.”
“Maybe not in her weakened state.”
Vegeta’s features twisted as he was bombarded with a powerful wave of fear and defeat. “IT me in there!”
“Umm Ok.” Goku placed his hand on Vegeta’s shoulder and two fingers on his forehead.
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“You do not know this kind of pain, the pain you are putting me through.”
“I’m n-not...doing...this...it’s.....th...the....heat.” Her eyes rolled and her head bobbed. She was on the verge of unconsciousness when air rushed back into her body and the heat of Trunks’s breath was no longer on her neck.
She felt strong, tender arms wrap around her midsection. Asoreia opened her eyes to see Goku holding Trunks up by the back of his shirt. Trunks dangled about five inches off the floor, his lips twitched in anger. Vegeta sighed and pulled her head closer to his chest.
“What the heck was going on?” Goku asked, completely dumbfounded.
Trunks’s eyes went wide in terror. His angered features twisted with child like fear. Asoreia cleared her throat and everyone looked at her. “We were having a bit of a spar and I got a little verbal. It obviously angered him. I could have broken free but I had hoped he would have let up on his own.”
“You were almost dead.”
“But not completely, thank you for your concern.”
“Hn. Let’s go. I am suddenly not in to mood to train today. Let’s just go get ready.” The others nodded in agreement and Goku dropped Trunks. He landed with a grunt on his backside.
“Sorry ’bout that Trunks.”
“It’s fine Goku.” He watched his father shut off the gravity. His gaze traveling his fathers back, letting his eyes linger a little longer than they should on the arteries in his father’s neck.
Goku bounded happily out the door, closely followed by Vegeta and Asoreia. “Hey Asoreia.” Trunks called and watched as the three of them turned around. He chuckled, “Come here, no hard feelings?” He out stretched his hand for her to shake it.
She looked at it reluctantly before she took it. Much to her surprise he pulled her into a tight hug. “You shouldn’t have lied, now no one can stop the inevitable. You will be mine.” He pulled back and smiled at her, his eyes clouded over black. He blinked quickly and the darkness was gone. “Are you ok Asoreia, you look like you saw a ghost?”
*****Sorry this update took so long. Yinz would never believe what went on at Me Casa this past week. Check this, My brother broke his ankle, my 15 year old cat Kimba fell in our 5ft above ground pool and I pulled him out, I took my brother to get his cast put on when I got home my 3 year old cat Scrappy was dead, he drowned in the damned pool, got a new orange kitten named Goku, took him to the Vets and he had leukemia and died, sat down and wrote this up. How about that shiznit?
Well any who, sorry I made Trunks evil. I love his I truly do but it is all part of the greater plot this is merely a minor set back.
Mechanical Butterfly:
Thank you for saying “That has to be one of the hottest lemons I have ever read.” I was all like :) too bad it wasn’t the real Vegeta. But I made sure he got some later. I had noticed that others thought they were married too, but I never really gave them a chance you know, in “To Young” they were going to bond when they got home from the fight but Asoreia passed out. So the children just assumed you know that they were married cause Vegeta sat in the living room for six months....I hope he showered I’ll have to ask. But I had never really given them the chance.
The Tein thing was just for a good laugh so I’m glad you liked that. I needed a bit of humor in an other wise dramatic story....and why it wants to bond you’ll just have to wait...sorry. :(
You know something I like V and A’s relationship too. I wanted to keep him all sassy but make him a soft for her I hope I managed. Ok as for who he is in.....after the next couple of chapters you’ll think you know but it wont be them....someone completely unexpected or maybe it is expected I dunno.
Naruto_Kenshin:
Thank you I liked them. I had a lot of fun writing them and I think that this story is better than To Young. It is easier to write and I have been tossing this idea around in my head for a long time. So I am glad you are enjoying it because I enjoy writing. Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside (J/K)
CrazyGurl:
EPPPPP!!! an MS no sir re bob. I find them to be annoying. *sweat drop* I am going to explain her strength (or lack there of in this fic) in the next chapter or so, everything she and Vegeta went through in To Young was only the very beginning. Thank you for complements. I tried to make this fic funny because like I said before the subject matter will get very dramatic. There are some things that will take place in the next couple of chapters that are kinda rough (for the lack of a better word). And lemons well Everyone needs the tart taste of a lemon every now and then...that was very cheesey on my part.
I hope to have the next chapter up with in the week bearing of course unforeseen circumstances. ~*Noel*~ *****
Chapter Title: The Music Of The Morning
Rating: NC-17 Blood, Guts, Gore, and Smut/ Rape
Summary: Everything should to be getting back to Normal for the Z Gang. Vegeta should be letting his demands finally rest. But the things that should be rarely are.
Main Character Focuses: Bulma, Vegeta, Asoreia, Trunks, and Goku
Random Quote: “It’s like a dream you try to remember but it’s gone. You try to scream but it only comes out as a yawn.” Pinch Me by Barenaked Ladies
Things to Know: ~<*>~ means the start or end of a flash back. Vegeta and Asoreia talk in Saiyan (which is un-conjugated Latin) but it will be translated...Goku thinks this story he’d like to give his home language a whirl. (Gods help us)
The soft, gentle sound of the Baby Grand Piano drifted up the stairs, down the hall, through the solid oak door, into the sun lit bedroom, and resonated in his sensitive ears. Purple eyes opened and he for a moment could not remember where he was. A soft growl left his lips when he saw the digital alarm by his bed click to 8:01 am.
“Who in their right mind is playing the piano at eight in the morning?” Trunks grumbled as he swung his legs over the side of the bed. He ran his long, slender finger through his purple locks and yawned. “Ack!”
He followed the music, which had shifted from simple cords into a song, until he stood in the doorway of the dinning room. Goku lay on his stomach on the closed, black, piano lid, his feet bouncing behind him and his head in his palms. Vegeta levitated behind the bench, his legs and arms crossed and his eyes closed. If it were not for the smirk, Trunks would have thought he were meditating. Asoreia’s small delicate fingers danced across the ivory keys, no sheet music to guide her.
Her voice broke his train of thought, “You tell me your in love with me, like you can’t take your pretty eyes away from me. It’s not that I don’t want to stay, but every time you come to close I move away.”
Bulla came running in from the kitchen with a smile that reached her eyes. She whispered in Trunks direction, “This is my favorite song.” Bulma, Christopher, and Bunny followed close behind. Trunks could hear a soft ‘Isn’t this lovely’ from his grandmother and smiled.
Asoreia ignored them and kept going, “I wanna believe in everything that you say ‘cause it sounds so good. But if you really want me, move slow. There’s things about me you just have to know. Sometimes I run, Sometimes I cry, Sometimes I’m scared of you. But all I really want is to hold you tight, treat you right, be with you day and night. All I really need is time.”
Asoreia smirked at Trunks and nodded her head. He spun around and saw his grandfather leaning against the doorframe. He turned back to see his father smiling, eyes still closed. For a moment jealousy crept into his heart, he had never made his father smile that way. Why could she, with that sweet tantalizing voice, bring his whole family together in one room.
“I don’t want to be so shy, every time that I’m alone I wonder why. Hope that you will wait for me, You’ll see that, you’re the only one for me. I wanna believe in everything that you say ‘cause it sounds so good. But if you really want me, move slow. There’s things about me you just have to know. Sometimes I run, Sometimes I cry, Sometimes I’m scared of you. But all I really want is to hold you tight, treat you right, be with you day and night. All I really need is time.”
But by the time she came to the bridge, Trunks could not find it in his heart to hate her. Her voice was so sensual that he found himself longing for her, loving his father’s mate. He realized that he was falling in love with the one person that made his father truly happy. He mentally slapped himself in the forehead. He had to stop this, she was too old and too married to be his.
“Just hang around and you’ll see, there’s nowhere I’d rather be . If you love me, trust in me. The way that I trust in you. Sometimes I run, Sometimes I cry, Sometimes I’m scared of you. But all I really want is to hold you tight, treat you right, be with you day and night. All I really need is time.”
Trunks left the overly cheery room, his head was hurting and his stomach growled. He pushed passed his grandfather, who really did not seem to notice, and made his way into thechenchen. Trunks removed the breakfast, Bunny had been making, off of the stove. He served out plates for everyone while he listened to Asoreia’s sweet voice carry over the piano with another bubble gum pop song.
Trunks slowly ate his meal, alone.
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“Oh man Asoreia that was so cool. I never knew you could sing, dad never said.”
“Well we Saiyans are sneaky like that.” Asoreia smiled at Bulla as she stood up. She stretched, raising her hands over her head. “Where’s Trunks. I saw him here earlier. We wouldn’t want him to miss his breakfast. That’s really not good for the Saiyan body.
“I saw him head into the kitchen while you were still on the first song. Where on earth did you learn to play like that?” Bunny smiled
“Not on Earth at all. One does not travel the four galaxies to the extent that I have and not pick a few things up. Besides Master Frieza was quite fond of the sound.”
“Oh dear.”
“Don’t worry it.”
Christopher smiled, “Glad to see you’re feeling better darlin’. We had to tell the kids you were suffering from head trauma. It was kinda funny.”
“Glad I could give you a laugh.”
“Oh I was in stitches.”
“Chris stop it. We were all glad you knocked him on his butt. Mr. McMicheals is a big jerk.” Bulla smiled as she ate her breakfast.
Asoreia smirked, she leaned over to Vegeta, “It’s getting stronger you know.”
“Huh?!” His eyes went wide in terror.
“No not Dominus De Cupiditas. Your son’s scent. We need to be very careful. I can still smell him in here.”
“Hey you two break it up. No secretes at the table. If it’s good enough for ol’ ‘Geta there, it’s good enough for all of us.” Christopher smiled.
“Oh I was merely stating that your ego is far too big for a room this size and I was rather suffocated by it. If you’ll excuse me, your presents insults me.” Goku and Vegeta laughed as they stood up.
“Up for a train?” Goku asked as he stretched, his back cracked in the process. Vegeta and Asoreia nodded.
“Don’t get to roughed up, remember the party is tonight.” Bulma called after them.
“We’ll try,” Asoreia smirked
They left, heading towards the Gravity Room, in silence. Once they were in the safety of the outdoors, Goku stopped. “Did you figure out what we are going to do?”
“No.” Vegeta mumbled. His normal pride and arrogance gone for the moment.
Asoreia could hear the two younger men discussing their plan of action, but she was not paying attention. She could hear a dull buzzing noise that reminded her of AI 10,000, as it was being destroyed. Energy, pulsating through metal. The sound grated at her nerves. AI was dead, she could vaguely recall things now, small details, minor encounters. What was that noise?
She followed the sound until she stood outside the small dome known as the Gravity Room. A soft purple glow surrounded the silver metal, Bulma had installed the force field after all. Asoreia smirked.
A soft grunting could be heard from inside the metal dome. She did a quick energy scan but whoever was inside was concealing their power level. She shrugged, never being one to allow curiosity to consume her, and IT herself inside.
The instant her body appeared in the GR, she was slammed against the wall. The wind wnocknocked out of her frail looking body and her head bounced off the metallic walls. Panic surged through her as she looked into the fury filled purple eyes of Trunks, felt his hand on her throat and an forearm pressed into her stomach.
“You did this to me!” He snarled, her body shook with fear.
didndidn’t do anything to you.” Asoreia whispered
“YES YOU DID! You made me fall in love with you.”
She gasped when those words passed his lips. His face twisted in pain and disgust. “Trunks I...”
“Ever since you first came here you have been all I could think of. That night six months ago, when I was in your room. You didn’t scream out, at least not until after I was in there. I just sat there watching you, knowing I would never have the chance to watch you sleep again. Knowing you were here for my father and that hurt. You know he rarely left your side when you were ill? I never had the chance to hold your hand and tell you all the things I wanted to say.”
“Trunks your hurting me, please let go.” His grip tightened on her and she gagged for air.
“You know nothing of hurt.”
“I know more than you would ever care to.” Her voice came out ragged and strained. She could feel her body giving out, to tired to fight for air.
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“Kakorot I really have no clue why he said cheese and........are you ok?” Vegeta, whose comment started out in utter annoyance, asked with honest concern.
“Yeah why?” Goku chuckled. He loved getting Vegeta agitated. He knew Vegeta understood a great deal of his childish behavior was an act, but he didn’t care it was what was expected of him.
“You’re not panicking?”
“I don’t think so...are you?”
“No idiot. Then who is...Where’s Asoreia?!”
“Huh? I didn’t even know she was gone.”
“Search!” They stood there stretching their seances for her Ki. Each taking a different side of the CC compound to check.
“Found her Geta. The GR.”
“Why would she be in a panic in the GR?”
“Maybe she put the gravity to high and can’t get it off, you know it?”
“I don’t think so. You know as well as I do that she can handle more than the two of us Kakorot.”
“Maybe not in her weakened state.”
Vegeta’s features twisted as he was bombarded with a powerful wave of fear and defeat. “IT me in there!”
“Umm Ok.” Goku placed his hand on Vegeta’s shoulder and two fingers on his forehead.
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“You do not know this kind of pain, the pain you are putting me through.”
“I’m n-not...doing...this...it’s.....th...the....heat.” Her eyes rolled and her head bobbed. She was on the verge of unconsciousness when air rushed back into her body and the heat of Trunks’s breath was no longer on her neck.
She felt strong, tender arms wrap around her midsection. Asoreia opened her eyes to see Goku holding Trunks up by the back of his shirt. Trunks dangled about five inches off the floor, his lips twitched in anger. Vegeta sighed and pulled her head closer to his chest.
“What the heck was going on?” Goku asked, completely dumbfounded.
Trunks’s eyes went wide in terror. His angered features twisted with child like fear. Asoreia cleared her throat and everyone looked at her. “We were having a bit of a spar and I got a little verbal. It obviously angered him. I could have broken free but I had hoped he would have let up on his own.”
“You were almost dead.”
“But not completely, thank you for your concern.”
“Hn. Let’s go. I am suddenly not in to mood to train today. Let’s just go get ready.” The others nodded in agreement and Goku dropped Trunks. He landed with a grunt on his backside.
“Sorry ’bout that Trunks.”
“It’s fine Goku.” He watched his father shut off the gravity. His gaze traveling his fathers back, letting his eyes linger a little longer than they should on the arteries in his father’s neck.
Goku bounded happily out the door, closely followed by Vegeta and Asoreia. “Hey Asoreia.” Trunks called and watched as the three of them turned around. He chuckled, “Come here, no hard feelings?” He out stretched his hand for her to shake it.
She looked at it reluctantly before she took it. Much to her surprise he pulled her into a tight hug. “You shouldn’t have lied, now no one can stop the inevitable. You will be mine.” He pulled back and smiled at her, his eyes clouded over black. He blinked quickly and the darkness was gone. “Are you ok Asoreia, you look like you saw a ghost?”
*****Sorry this update took so long. Yinz would never believe what went on at Me Casa this past week. Check this, My brother broke his ankle, my 15 year old cat Kimba fell in our 5ft above ground pool and I pulled him out, I took my brother to get his cast put on when I got home my 3 year old cat Scrappy was dead, he drowned in the damned pool, got a new orange kitten named Goku, took him to the Vets and he had leukemia and died, sat down and wrote this up. How about that shiznit?
Well any who, sorry I made Trunks evil. I love his I truly do but it is all part of the greater plot this is merely a minor set back.
Mechanical Butterfly:
Thank you for saying “That has to be one of the hottest lemons I have ever read.” I was all like :) too bad it wasn’t the real Vegeta. But I made sure he got some later. I had noticed that others thought they were married too, but I never really gave them a chance you know, in “To Young” they were going to bond when they got home from the fight but Asoreia passed out. So the children just assumed you know that they were married cause Vegeta sat in the living room for six months....I hope he showered I’ll have to ask. But I had never really given them the chance.
The Tein thing was just for a good laugh so I’m glad you liked that. I needed a bit of humor in an other wise dramatic story....and why it wants to bond you’ll just have to wait...sorry. :(
You know something I like V and A’s relationship too. I wanted to keep him all sassy but make him a soft for her I hope I managed. Ok as for who he is in.....after the next couple of chapters you’ll think you know but it wont be them....someone completely unexpected or maybe it is expected I dunno.
Naruto_Kenshin:
Thank you I liked them. I had a lot of fun writing them and I think that this story is better than To Young. It is easier to write and I have been tossing this idea around in my head for a long time. So I am glad you are enjoying it because I enjoy writing. Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside (J/K)
CrazyGurl:
EPPPPP!!! an MS no sir re bob. I find them to be annoying. *sweat drop* I am going to explain her strength (or lack there of in this fic) in the next chapter or so, everything she and Vegeta went through in To Young was only the very beginning. Thank you for complements. I tried to make this fic funny because like I said before the subject matter will get very dramatic. There are some things that will take place in the next couple of chapters that are kinda rough (for the lack of a better word). And lemons well Everyone needs the tart taste of a lemon every now and then...that was very cheesey on my part.
I hope to have the next chapter up with in the week bearing of course unforeseen circumstances. ~*Noel*~ *****