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By : Vegetaswriter
Category: Dragon Ball Z > Yaoi - Male/Male
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Goodbye

          Irregardless of what you may believe of me, I feel, I feel pain, pride, and the furious rage of a Saiyan, love and heartbreak… I feel. Witnessing something so precious to you fade away from the world leaving you behind with nothing but a smile and wave is devastating, an emotion I know I have given many; lost. I have no right to mourn; I have no right to cry over my own lost.

          I watched him wave to the crowd, with a smile, and all I could do was nod…

          I find myself staring mindlessly into the skies above, praying one day I would see the green magical serpent-like dragon coil downward, and that waving smile once again, only saying hello. It would leave me hollow inside, and wonder why I still stay in this place; every passing cloud would leave me in a daydream reminiscent of the times where nothing truly mattered, only the sky, the air in your lungs, and our bodies pressed together entwined in a unbreakable hold. The things we shared, sacred and unholy.

          I watched him wave to the crowd, with a smile, all I could do was nod… whilst my lips moved, whispering you’re name, …

          I can see him nearly everywhere I roam, the flashbacks of a happier time burns my brain, threatening my self-compulsion, setting me ablaze from the inside out. Just to hear the echoes of your light-hearted chuckle bounce in my head haunts me nightly… I miss you. You’re youngest, I despise you’re youngest, his face is yours, his eyes hold your gaze, and it kills me to stare; I hate him, he reminds me too much of you.

I watched him wave to the crowd, with a smile, and all I could do was nod… whilst my lips moved, whispering you’re name, …I pictured you still above me, your brow line covered with small beads of your own sweat, while you…

I scream sometimes, scream until my voice is cracked, and throat raw, the taste of blood heavy on my breath; in those moments, when the pain cuts deeply I feel you here, I remember a time when I would only taste my own crimson fluid from your mouth. At times I swore I felt your tongue slide over mine, making me shiver, and forget you were gone; those moments were perfect, for that millisecond my anguish was gone, and you were here. Only a split second after I would remember in addition that weight came crashing down my chest making me crumple to the floor.

I watched him wave to the crowd, with a smile, and all I could do was nod… whilst my lips moved, whispering you’re name, …I pictured you still above me, your brow line covered with small beads of your own sweat, while you…filled me with your love. Why?

You gave me the highest level of pure untouchable love, a very thing I knew nothing about, you held my hand tightly within your grasped and opened me, filled me with beliefs and hopes. You touched and changed me on a level I thought impossible; I’ve done too many wrongs, I did deserve your love, impure… tainted. Yet, you never gave up, coming to me in the late night, sweeping me away from my home, warming then stealing my iron heart. Our love secretive, but perfect, we didn’t need the outside world to complicate what we have…had.

Those many nights under the stars could never be taken away, distorted, and never to be tainted. Uncaring that it was I under your might, no shame, no wounded pride; it was an act of love, we didn’t destroy what we had with vile words, it was pure, it was right.

The looks we shared amongst your friends, once we found ourselves in dire situations were victories, the playful coy looks, and sly banter gave us both a thrill, while the others look upon us, believing it all just uncomplicated egotistical jabs; it’s a shame really that no one seem to be able to ‘read between the lines’ but a blessing all on its own. We could never be tainted with their disturbing input, or dim-witted enquiries.

I miss that, I miss our banters, our role playing; I missed my role of the bitter rival, and you trying to be the supportive friend. I couldn’t believe they really bough it, then again, they never knew me like you did; did they? You on the other hand knew me the best, I believe from the very beginning, didn’t you? Just a small gesture of my eyes, and you knew my emotions and my thoughts, moreover, you knew how to deal with my confusions, how to fully understand me. For that I gave you my heart. Then you left me to save the universe.

The Majin incident came with no surprise, as well as my resentful attitude, you left me, left me behind consumed with emotions and feelings I didn’t know what to do with, you left me for seven years, and I believed I would never see you again; I bottled them up, releasing my frustrations with training and family life. All of a sudden you popped right back up, heralding your one day only grand return, it instilled the return of the raw emotions of your departure years ago, and I hated you. I gave myself to a darker power, praying my emotions would quell, just enough for my revenge; I wanted your beating bleeding heart in my hands and crush it in my palms. Instead, I laid you out, and begged forgiveness, in my own way, sacrificing myself with the hopes I would gain access to heaven and greet you in the afterlife.

And now once again you are gone, after so many years made up, so many years holding one another, our love bloomed in leaps, untouchable, unbreakable…but your gone, for good this time, you wouldn’t pop back up, and the world would be righted once again.

I watched him wave to the crowd, with a smile, and all I could do was nod… whilst my lips moved, whispering you’re name, …I pictured you still above me, your brow line covered with small beads of your own sweat, while you…filled me with your love. Why? Why didn’t you take me with you?

Very depressing; a complete flip from the last chapter. Wow, I’m caught up, and tomorrow’s chapter is almost done! Okay technically it’s today since it is pass 12pm. But I am not staying up any later… hmmm… no I am not. Thank you for rating and reviewing I love you guys so much, xoxo, many of you make me snort and giggle, and you all know how much I adore your input! Keep it up! No pressure *pokes with a fork annoyingly* Muahah.

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Cara2012: Lol thank you for reviewing, and happy you liked the kink ;)

Mjmusiclover: Thank you hun, glad you liked, and cockslut Gohan is always a treat to see, especially if he is the top in the end *drool*

Boukenbee: Hehehe thank you for the show of enthusiasm *high fives* I’m having soo much fun writing this! And yes this will be multi pairings, vegeta X everyone I desire that is male :P thank you for reviewing

Ranni-Lou Xs 3: Thank you for all three reviews :P You should know never to dare a dirty mind such as myself, because I would try to accomplish the task! And Ha! Yes I am glad I got you with the twist muahah, intentional, oh yes, very intentional! And thank you, I’m not very good with humour, blah, I got to get ‘humour for dummies’ hehe. LIKE A BITCH! Yes, Vegeta was fucked like a bitch, because… im twisted… dirty… and just… dirty… lol enjoy the up-coming chapters.



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Animeslave19: hehehe, reviewing every chapter *sticks out tongue* my plan worked perfectly muaahahha! I’m awfully silly tonight XD And oohh you picked out my fav part as well, gave me chills writing it, damn I wish Vegeta was real… ohh yes indeed. Actually a picture like that did inspire the sentence, it is done by The World Upside down DBZ Yaoi, Vegeta in a planet Vegeta styled dress suite, and licking a bloody whip… mmmmm *shudders violently* I’ll post the link on my Facebook page for you ;) thank you for reviewing, love hearing from you.

Vegetasfangurl Xs 2: Awe thank you hunni bunches of oats :D I am not a big writer of bondage but I do occasionally like to write my dark kinky smut, and if people are enjoying it, it makes me want to write it more. I am happy I was able to make you giggle, I was picturing the women sneaking in the kitchen, and I couldn’t help but snort from time to time with the image alone, and ohh yes, I am also pleased to know my little…well big “ahem” rockstar and model Vegeta was able to make you blush. *Sits in front of the A/C* I know what you mean.

KaptajnBellaMus: hehehe, Thank you soo much *gushes brightly* I am happy I can make someone laugh! Thank you for your lovely review :D Enjoy future chapters :P

As always, rate, review and enjoy. Until next time in a land far far away V.W
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