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By: Debbie
folder Dragon Ball Z › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 1
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Disclaimer: I do not own DragonballZ, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Revelations

Disclaimer: I don\'t own the DBZ crew, If I did I wouldn\'t be writing fic\'s. Don\'t sue as all I have is my dog and hubby, and I will fight for the hubby!

Rating : NC17, Yaoi, Lemon, some violence. Don\'t like male x male relationships then don\'t read.

Pairing: Raditz x Vegeta

Notes: This fic is my first attempt at Yaoi DBZ. It\'s written for a friend of mine who has voiced their interest in reading DBZ yaoi... this pairing in particular.

/ indicates thoughts/

Feedback is adored and craved. :)

\" REVELATIONS \"

July 2002 Debs-dragon.


The prince watched through the window as the warrior inside continued his training session oblivious to the spectator. Noting again the quick fluid movements of the sleek muscular body as it twisted and turned. Arms raised to block imaginary punches as legs shot out to deliver their own ghostly blows. The long black hair that cascaded down the back to taper out to a point that ended just below the firm backside, swinging with each movement of the body it framed.

Vegeta was mesmerised by the vision before him. Every day for the past week he had snuck down to the training room to watch. He was hypnotised by the saiya-jin to the point of being obsessed. Try as he might he couldn\'t get the warrior from his mind. He had first noticed the other several weeks ago during a demonstration session that had been called to show the rest of the fighters some new techniques. It had been instant attraction on his side.

Licking his lips as he watched the body continue with its exercises his mind wandered. He was a prince dammit! Next in line to the throne, and he was expected to take a mate soon as he neared the age when all the elite warriors were expected to find their chosen life companion. The only problem was the mate he wanted was currently working out in the room before him and was definitely male.

If even so much as a breath of this obsession got out the prince would be exiled. That he knew, and so he watched instead, growing more frustrated by the day. He knew that a lot of the lower class warriors often joined up with the same sex and that was allowable, but not the more elite forces and certainly not the prince! They were expected to mate with the females and produce stronger, better offspring to continue the bloodline of an undefeatable race.

But Vegeta knew in his own heart that while he would do what was expected of him he also wanted a taste of the forbidden. Deciding it was time to put his plan into action he took a deep breath and pushed open the door.

Raditz looked up, annoyed at having his session interrupted. When his eyes fell on the prince his annoyance vanished and he bowed humbly. \"Your highness.\" he said simply.

\"Raditz?\"

\"Yes yoighnighness?\"

\"Those new moves you were demonstrating the other day, I would like to get some more instruction in them.\" Vegeta watched for the reaction of the other.

\"But your highness, classes are scheduled each day for training in the new moves.\"

\"Yes I know that!\" snapped Vegeta, \"But I wanted a more individual lesson. It\'s so hard to concentrate with all those other morons around.\" He neglected to mention the fact that he also wanted to be closer to that muscular frame.

\"Then I can arrange for Riana to give you the coaching you require.\" came the reply. Truth be told Raditz was a little rattled that the prince was demanding individual attention. The sight of that frame in the tight spandex wasn\'t doing much to help the situation either.

\"No. I want you to teach me.\" came the sullen reply. Vegeta was finding it hard to concentrate with the scent of sweat and raw sexuality that exuded from the others body.

Raditz swallowed hard. How could he refuse? This was the prince and the prince\'s orders had to be obeyed. He felt a stirring in his body and tried to quell it. Being a lower class warrior he had experienced his fair share of joinings, both male and female and truth be told he much preferred the male. He had often observed the prince when he trained and held a secret fantasy of being much closer to that hard sleek body. \"As you wish.\" he stated seeing no other option.

\"Good. Lets get started then.\" said Vegeta.

\"Errr.... excuse me for speaking my mind your highness but you want to start now?\"

\"That is correct. Are you hard of hearing?\" growled Vegeta.

\"No. It\'s just that... well... umm... Oh never mind.\" and seeing as how he could not avoid the lesson he moved back to the centre of the room.

Vegeta followed, the nervousness of Raditz had not escaped his attention and he intended to fully utilise this advantage.

\"So where would you like me?\" Vegeta asked cocking his head to one side.

/On the floor writhing beneath me/ thought Raditz. \"Just there is fine.\" he said and moved behind the prince. That spandex clad body standing so close to his own was only serving to heighten his desire.

Feeling Raditz move up behind him Vegeta had to stifle a moan that threatened to escape. / Get a grip on yourself! Take it slow. You don\'t want to frighten him off./ \"Now what?\" he breathed.

Raditz reached forward and placed the prince\'s limbs into position and proceeded to explain the movement to him, demonstrating a couple of times.

\"Like this?\" said Vegeta as he tried to imitate the moves Raditz has just shown him.

\"Yes... but try not to swing so high or else the opponent will be able to unbalance you.\" said Raditz.

They continued for a while longer but Vegeta still seemed to be having problems with getting the swing right.

\"You need to take more weight on your left leg.\" said Raditz and he moved forward. Grasping the prince\'s thigh he moved the leg back a little. The feel of the muscle underneath did nothing to help the growing problem in his own groin.

Vegeta shivered as Raditz touched his leg, electric shocks went through his body and he tried to control his hormones. He chanced a glance at the other to see what effect, if any, his next worduld uld have. \"Maybe I haven\'t got my pelvis in quite the right position.\" he murmured.

/If only you knew the position I want your pelvis in/ \"Maybe if you tilt it slightly.\" Raditz felt the redness creeping up his face as his mind supplied various images of different positions that pelvis could be in.

\"Like this?\" /Was that a flush I see on those cheeks?/

\"No .. no.. Here let me show you.\" Raditz moved behind the prince and placed his hands on those hips. He grasped firmly and moved Vegeta\'s pelvis slightly to the side and angled it forward a bit more. \"There, thats better.\" He looked over Vegeta\'s shoulder to see if he had moved his hips enough, what he didn\'t expect to see was the definite bulge that was appearing.

Vegeta smirked knowing that Raditz had seen his obvious arousal. /Wonder what he will do about this?/

Raditz was lost in a haze of thoughts. /Is he getting excited by me? Is that what all this training is about?cidiciding to play along and find out, Raditz moved to the front of Vegeta. Looking thoughtfully at his arms he reached out and began to manoeuvre them, letting his fingers brush lightly over the bulging biceps. \"There thats better. Now try the attack again.\"

\"I think I would have more success with this if you were to oppose me.\" said Vegeta.

\"Fine.\" and Raditz took up a similar stance.

They began to spar, Raditz ducking low and bringing his arms up to rain blows as Vegeta blocked and sent his own counter attacks. After several minutes both men were panting hard, sweat running down their bodies.

Raditz moved to one side of the room and removed his armour. Seeing Vegeta watching him out the corner of his eye he decided to tempt fate a little more and hooking his fingers under the hem of the shirt he pulled it from his body. Standing only in his shorts framed by the black waterfall of hair he looked like an Adonis.

Vegeta felt his breath catch as Raditz turned his half naked body towards him. /Two can play at that game/ and he also removed his armour and shirt, revealing a muscular hairless chest. Walking back to the centre of the room he bent over and began to stretch \"Ready for a second shot?\"

Raditz felt himself harden fully as Vegeta\'s rear was presented to him. / Was the prince teasing him?/ \"Oh definitely..re Ire I come.\" / I wish! / and he charged at the prince.

Vegeta\'s senses were swimming. The closeness of Raditz, the smell of sweat, the odour that was uniquely Raditz only sent his body craving more. The touch of the other was electric and Vegeta also noticed with smugness that his opponent was as hard as a rock. / So he does want me... then let him come and get me /

They sparred for a while longer before Raditz was lucky enough to catch Vegeta off guard. Pinning the smaller Saiya-jin beneath him he held Vegeta\'s arms above his head and stared down into onyx depths. \"You need to concentrate better my prince.\"

\"Too many distractions.\" came the breathy reply. Faces began to gravitate towards each other as Vegeta hoped he was reading the signals correctly.

\"Then maybe we should get rid of the distractions then.\" Raditz felt his groin meet that of his counterpart and gasped as his hardness brushed against equal hardness.

\"Maybe we should...\" Vegeta raised his head slightly and closed the millimetre gap that separated their lips.

Feeling the prince\'s lips brush lightly upon his own Raditz did moan. He couldn\'t deny it any longer. He rocked his hips against the prince\'s he wanted the prince and he wanted him now. Damm the consequences!

Vegeta responded by pushing his own hips to meet those of the taller man. \"Raditz?\"

\"Yes?\"

\"Tell me you don\'t want this and I will stop.\"

/ Stop now and I wont be responsible for my actions!/ \"Please my prince... don\'t stop.\"

Rolling Raditz off him Vegeta raised himself up and straddled Raditz\'s hips. Staring down he reached for another kiss. Hesitant at first he lightly brushed across. Feeling the response he tried again.

This time Raditz took control. His tongue caressed Vegeta\'s lips as he sought permission to enter. Access granted he slid his tongue past teeth and began a lazy exploration of Vegeta\'s moist warmth.

Vegeta\'s tongue shyly came forward to meet the intruder and return the caress to Raditz\'s mouth. ing ing they pulled back.

Raditz could tell from Vegeta\'s glazed eyes he had never been kissed like this before. Feeling bolder in the knowledge that Vegeta wanted this his hands began to roam the planes of the prince\'s taunt body. Pushing Vegeta back Raditz once more took charge. He rolled the prince onto his back and hovered over him. Fingers traced their way over the collarbone and along the smooth muscles of the ch Fin Finding a dusky nipple he began to toy with it, rolling and squeezing gently between his fingers enjoying the small whimpers of pleasure that were coming from Vegeta\'s mouth.

Vegeta let himself be taken with the feelings. Never had he felt such pleasure and he moaned his delight. The ache in his groin intensified as Raditz lowered his mouth and began to suckle on his chest. He began to buck his hips in an attempt to find some form of friction.

Chuckling softly to himself Raditz began to move lower, kissing a trail from nipple to stomach. He smiled as the muscles fluttered under the gentle assault. Moving lower he ran his tongue over the edge of the waistband of Vegeta\'s shorts. Spandex hid very little and he was almost eye level with the proof of Vegeta\'s desire.

Feeling that mouth kissing lower made Vegeta shiver with anticipation. Surely something that felt this good shouldn\'t be confined to the lower class only. Then this thought flew out the proverbial window as he felt Raditz begin to slide his shorts from his body.

Removing the prince\'s garment was proving to be a challenge in itself. That rock hard erection making it damm near impossible to slide the cloth free, but Raditz managed. Throwing the offending item into the dark corner of the room Raditz allowed his eyes to take in the wonder of the prince\'s revealed body. If he lost his eyes for this at least he would remember, every dip, every curve, having burnt the image into his brain. Licking his lips he lowered his head to taste the droplet that had gathered at the centre of the prince\'s desire. Lapping gently the taste was sweet, like honey. He wanted more.

Vegeta nearly screamed as he felt Raditz\'s tongue graze over him, tasting his essence. It felt so good. He bucked his hips again in frustration.

Knowing what the prince wanted Raditz lowered his head and took the prince into his mouth. Gently sucking and licking at that hard shaft, coaxing more whimpers and moans of pleasure from the body beneath, Raditz was enjoying every moment.

Vegeta opened his eyes and gazed at the erotic sight before him. Raditz\'s head bobbing in his lap as he nursed on Vegeta moremore than his mind could stand. He felt the fire in his groin begin to spread, as his orgasm began to take hold. Burying his hands in that dark mop of hair he threw his head back and screamed as pulse after pulse shot from his body to be eagerly swallowed by that warm mouth.

Raditz drank every drop the prince had to offer him before releasing the softening shaft. He pulled himself up to lie flush against the other warrior and idly traced patterns on Vegeta\'s sweaty skin.

As his heeat eat slowed and his breathing returned to a more normal rate Vegeta stared at the long haired warrior before him. Hesitantly he moved his hand to stroke the cheek. \"I have never felt anything so good.\" he said softly. \"Thank you.\"

Raditz shifted slightly and his hardness pressed against the prince\'s thigh, reminding him that he had yet to obtain his release. Staring back at the other man Raditz asked the question he knew he had to, \"Why? And why me?\"

\"I like and admire you. You have a strength about you and not just physical. I can trust you. Besides you have a great body too.\" a smile accompanied the words.

Raditz was stunned. The prince never smiled. If anything he was well known for his ruthless if not brutal tactics. Raditz knew then that he was being entrusted with more than just a sexual encounter. The prince was allowing him to see the real man behind the warrior. Knowing this was something important and an honour non the less Raditz felt a sense of un bidden pride swell in his chest. Of all the members of their race the prince could have his pick, he had chosen him. Raditz vowed then that the prince would never regret his decision. He reached forward to steal a tender kiss.

Vegeta had placed his cards on the table and hoped that Raditz would see what he was telling him. The tender kiss he received confirmed he had been right. He could trust Raditz. He returned the kiss with a passionate one of his own.

Feeling the prince respond to him Raditz knew that his unspoken pledge had been accepted.

Vegeta his his hands over the taunt muscular chest, toying with the nipples as Raditz had done to him. He was rewarded with soft gentle moans. Feeling bolder he decided to take the plunge and let Raditz know exactly what he wanted.

\"Raditz?\"

\"Yes my prince?\" came the breathy reply.

\"I want to learn more. I have admired you for some time now and although I am unclear in exactly what it is I am feeling I am following my instincts and my instincts led me to you.\" he swallowed, \"I want to spend my time with you, get to know you better. I want to learn more and I want you to teach me.... please?\" It was more a plea than a request.

Feeling his heart soar at this admission Raditz claimed those lips in a searing kiss before replying. \"I would be honoured to teach and serve you my prince. I too have admired you from a distance but as you are fully aware this is forbidden. If we are to be caught you will be exiled and I will surely lose my life. As terrible as that proposition is I am prepared to oppose it. I want you my prince. I want to take you to heights you have never dreamed possible. I will show you how to climb to the pinnacle of pleasure.... I want to make love to you.\" There he had said it.

He waited for the prince to react to his words, expecting to be at least disciplined for wanting to make love to non other than the prince himself but the reproach never came. What did come only cemented his love and devotion further.

\"Oh yes... yes... I want to feel all of that.... teach me, show me, make love to me.\"

With those words of consent Raditz moved smoothly into action. He set about teasing and tormenting Vegeta\'s body, causing it to experience pleasure it had never dreamed possible. Working his mouth lightly over a nipple his hand made its way southwards to caress the re awakening hardness. Stroking the shaft until it swelled again in his hand Raditz moved lower.

Leaving those now hardened nipples he kissed his way down Vegeta\'s stomach to where Vegeta\'s world was currently centred. As his tongue teased and toyed with the head of that erection so his hand moved lower. Cupping the soft sac he gently rolled and squeezed, causing the prince to moan and whimper with need. Having played enough his finger traced lower still until he found the small hidden entrance he was looking for. Rubbing his finger gently he began to tease and loosen the tight muscle.

Unable to keep his hands to himself Vegeta began an exploration of his own. Fingers traced the lines of muscle on Raditz\'s chest before moving downwards. Reaching the hem of the shorts he could feel the proof of Raditz\'s desire through the cloth. Tugging impatiently he pulled the fabric off and finally revealed his soon to be lover to his eyes. What he found only heightened his desire. Running the pads of his fingers over the long elegant shaft, he mapped out the previously unexplored territory, delighting in the softness of the steely hardness.

Raditz thrust his hips into that teasing touch, enjoying the princes fingers on his flesh. Gently he pushed a digit inside his soon to be lovers body.

Vegeta squirmed slightly at the invasion. There wasn\'t any pain just a small amount of discomfort, but that was forgotten as Raditz\'s mouth continued to lave the head of his arousal.

Gently Raditz worked a second finger inside, moving them around to stretch and prepare Vegeta\'s body to receive him as he continued to worship the smaller Saiya-jins manhood.

Wrapping his hand around the thick shaft, Vegeta began to pump, hardening Raditz even more. Suddenly he froze as stars danced behind his eyes. A low groan escaped his throat. \"Ohhh god.... so good..... more.... \" he panted as Raditz stroked something within him.

Finding that small gland deep inside Vegeta\'s passage Raditz began to rub his finger over it sending shock waves of pleasure through the prince\'s body.

Vegeta began to buck his hips wanting more of that sensation that sent liquid fire racing through his veins. \"Please Raditz... take me.... I need it... now...\" he screamed is vis vision exploded once more.

Removing his fingers Raditz allowed a small chuckle to escape as the bereft cry of the writhing form beneath him found his ears. Realising he didn\'t have anything with which to lubricate himself he spat into his hand. Pulling Vegeta\'s fingers away from his shaft he rubbed the saliva over himself. \"On your knees my prince.\" he whispered.

Eagerly Vegeta obeyed, positioning himself on all fours.

Raditz moaned loudly at the sight before him. The prince open and exposed and literally begging to be taken. Grasping Vegeta\'s hips he positioned the tip and leaned forward. \"This may hurt a bit as I don\'t have any lube but I promise it will feel better really quickly.\" he said as he proceeded to push the head of his erection past the tight muscle.

Vegeta felt his body resist, trying to keep the invader out. He relaxed as much as he could and whimpered softly as the tight ring yielded and permitted Raditz to enter.

Inch by slow inch Raditz buried himself into the warmth of Vegeta\'s passage. The velvet walls stroking and caressing his length with each forward push. Finally he was seated to the hilt and paused to allow his prince to adjust to his size.

Vegeta hung his head, panting. He was a mixture of emotion. He felt so full like he was split in two. There was a little pain but more discomfort than anything. He shifted his hips to let Raditz know he was ready.

Taking a firm hold of Vegeta\'s hips Raditz began to slide gently outwards.

Vegeta whimpered at the loss but the whimper was soon replaced with a cry of pleasure as Raditz once more thrust in.

Circling his hips and giving shallow thrusts Raditz felt Vegeta\'s body soften and accept the intrusion. Angling his own hips slightly he began to thrust long slow and deep, searching for that sweet spot. He knew he had found it when Vegeta arched back into him and a primal scream tore from his throat.

\"Ohh thats.. o.. oh god... more... I want all of you.\" screamed Vegeta.

Raditz was only to happy to obey his prince and began to set a rhythm. His strokes increased in pace and depth as he pushed towards the sky. The warmth of that hot channel sending shock waves through his system.

The relentless pounding on his sweet spot stripped Vegeta of all coherent thought. He was reduced to pure lust as instincts kicked in and he became a creature of need. Achieving his release was the only thing he could focus on as the dance continued.

Feeling his own orgasm building Raditz reached underneath and took Vegeta\'s weeping erection in his hand. Pumping in sync with his thrusts he strived to bring his lover to his peak.

Vegeta pushed his hips savagely back to meet each thrust as he rode the crest of his impending climax. When Raditz began to stroke his length he screamed. Within seconds he felt his blood turn to fire as the snake uncoiled in his belly and made its way through his groin to pulse out onto Raditz\'s hand and coat the floor below. Stars exploded inside his head as the sheer pleasure of his release washed over him.

Feeling Vegeta\'s body tense and shudder Raditz knew his prince was about to come. The scream of pleasure as his sprayed himself was music to Raditz\'s ears. Those walls began to spasm around his length, squeezing and pulling his own release from him and with one more thrust he buried his seed deep within Vegeta\'s body, marking and claiming him.

Vegeta trembled with the aftershocks. Never had he experienced a climax so utterly mind blowing. Behind him Raditz slumped as his body tried desperately to regain some oxygen to starved tissues.

Rolling off and to the side Raditz pulled Vegeta with him and the pair lay boneless on the floor
as they attempted to recover. Reaching out Raditz placed an arm around Vegeta\'s waist and pulled the prince towards him. They lay locked in an embrace which neither had any wish to break.

Feeling pleasantly sated and a little sore Vegeta finally pulled himself free and locked eyes with his subordinate. Gently he caressed a cheek as he spoke softly. \"That was the most incredible feeling I have ever had the pleasure to experience....\"

\"I\'m glad I was able to be of service to you my prince. It was mind blowing for me also.\"

\"Oh yes you were certainly of service... In fact I would like to share your services a lot more in the future.\" smiled Vegeta.

\"Then I am yours to do with as you please my prince.\" came the quiet reply.

\"Good. I need not remind you that what has happened here today is not to be revealed to anyone.\" said Vegeta.

\"My lips are sealed.\"

\"Then I suggest we get dressed and proceed to my chambers. I think a shower is in order.\"

\"As you wish.\"

They stood and retrieved their clothing, dressing quickly. Pausing at the doorway Vegeta turned to the warrior behind him. \"I will inform the Captain that you are as of now my personal trainer and assistant.

Raditz cocked an eyebrow.

\"You will train me and refine my fighting skills. As for personal assistant... you will assist me in the more shall we say delicate matters of mating rituals and the like?\"

\"I would be honoured your highness to serve you in this way.\"

\"Oh Raditz... serve me you will...\"

Leaving the innuendo hanging in the air the two Saiya-jins moved down the hallway to Vegeta\'s chambers to take that much needed shower and explore a little more.....

~ Fin ~

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