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Heart Problem
By : havenoclue
Category: Gundam Wing/AC > Yaoi - Male/Male
Views: 1807 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0Disclaimer: I don't own Gundam Wing and all the characters and I don't take any profit from it. - Chapter List
A/N: This is my first attempt to write GW fiction and also my first attempt to try this writing style. So please read and review. Thank you.
This story un-beta-ed, so I'm really sorry for any mistakes. English is not my first language.
Heart Problem
"Agent Yuy?"
"Agent Po."
"It's a surprise."
"Hn."
"Can I help you?"
"I believe you can."
"Is it medical?"
"I'm not sure."
"That would be a first."
"Hn."
"Please… tell me what's bothering you."
"It's my heart."
"Your heart?"
"Yes. Recently it does… things."
"Things? Such as?"
"Sometimes it beats very fast… when I don't think it can get any faster, it beats faster and faster."
"Did it happen after exercise?"
"No, that would be normal. It just happens."
"Okay… go on…"
"Sometimes it stings."
"Stings?"
"Yes. Feels like electricity jolts."
"Oh, that could be bad. Are you in pain?"
"Not really. Just feel odd."
"Any other symptoms?"
"Yes, it would sound crazy but I swear that's what I feel."
"What?"
"I feel like my heart gets bigger…. like it would explode or something."
"Whoa… since when are these symptoms starting?"
"About two months ago."
"From all those three which one happened first? The jolt? The abnormal beat or…"
"Now that I recall, I think the last was the first indication."
"The swollen? You must feel very uncomfortable and it's difficult to breath, right?"
"Yes, but… it only happened for a second. I couldn't breath, my heart felt like it about to explode… then it was all over and afterward I feel… warm."
"Warm? You mean you had fever?"
"I… I don't know. I didn't think my temperature high enough."
"Hmm… it gets more and more bizarre."
"…"
"Is it all?"
"No, there's another thing."
"Tell me."
"Sometimes it hurts."
"Oh?"
"Just like this morning. It hurts so much I feel like I could kill somebody."
"That bad?"
"Hn."
"Could you describe the hurt? Is it sharp? Or dull or…"
"It feels like something squeezes my heart very hard… usually happened when I saw him talk to Maxwell."
"Him?"
"Agent Chang."
"I'm sorry I don't get that. What's Agent Chang got to do with this?"
"I think he's related with all of this somehow."
"Why?"
"Because he was there each time the symptoms came."
"Oh my…"
"…"
"Let me get this straight… Agent Chang was there when your heart beat faster… when you feel jolt in it or when you feel it's swollen and about to explode?"
"Hn."
"Oh my…"
"…"
"And this morning when Agent Chang talked to Agent Maxwell, your heart hurts so bad you want to kill someone?"
"Yes."
"Wow."
"….."
"Can I ask you a question?"
"Yes."
"When did Une assign Agent Chang to be your partner?"
"Two and a half months ago."
"Aaaah…. it makes sense."
"So you agree with me? It's got to do with Chang?"
"Oh yes… It's all got to do with him."
"You think I'm allergic to him?"
"W-what?"
"Allergic."
"…."
"I know it's weird because usually allergic messed up your respiratory organ or make your face swollen…."
"…."
"But I did have that once... the difficulty of breathing."
"…"
"I never know that allergic can caused heart problem."
"..…."
"That's why I need your help. Is it medical?"
"Pffff… ehem… sorry about that…
"….."
"If it is, Agent Yuy… it's certainly a very interesting case."
"Hn?"
"Never mind that. I think I know the cure for your heart problem."
"You do? Thanks."
"Let me just write it down…. Here we go."
"Talk to Wufei? How can this cure my problem?"
"Trust me. Just tell him what you just told me."
"And I would heal?"
"Yes."
"Just like that?"
"Just like that."
"Thank you, Agent Po. Good day."
"Good day, Agent Yuy."
A/N: This dialog between Heero and Sally have been on my mind for weeks and refuse to leave. I decided to write it down. I hope you all like it. Do you think I should write more GW? Because I never have the nerve to write it until now. Please let me know your opinion. Once again thanks!
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