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Reviews for Slave

By : vegetagoddess
  • From ANON - LadyDuggan on June 29, 2012
    I have basically stayed up and ignored all my responsibilities as a mom, student and wife to read this. I love it! Keep it comming!
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  • From ANON - Maria on April 15, 2012
    Hi, I REALLY like the story. You two did an awesome job! Some of the sex scenes were a bit too much, but I kept on reading because of the anticipation of what would happen next! That is why I must ask you: Are you going to continue writing this story, or is it finished? Vegeta is a total douchebag, and I believe you two should definitely find a way for Kakarot, to keep Bulma all to himself, and make Vegeta pay for what he did to them both! :-)
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  • From ANON - M.W on April 03, 2012
    WOW this story is so engrossing, I read all the chapters in one sitting! I've read many B/V fanfics that portray Vegeta as a little cruel and sadistic but never have I read one like this where he was THIS twisted! You've given the name "dark prince" a whole new meaning. You really WENT there. I must admit, I was a bit apprehensive about the yuri, the yaoi and the incest but in some sick twisted way it all makes sense and fits into the story perfectly, it didn't seem like it was just thrown in needlessly. As I read all the chapters I did notice all the constant excuses you had made about not finishing the story and I thought how lucky as was to have bypassed all of that, and would get the finished story...WRONG lol you must finish this story, you've really got something here and you must continue, I hope you plan to. Of course I want to see what happens next! I'm very intrigued by this and I won't satisfied til I've read the story to completion!
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  • From ANON - Charlee on March 09, 2012
    Wow, this fanfic realy captured me, I just read all capitels without interuption! :D But I noticed that some capitels doesnt have a content. Where they deleted? I would like to read all of them. Well apart from that, very very good work! A story how I like it. It really isnt that easy to find something like that. I really appreciate that you uploaded this and hope you continue writing!

    PS: I have to admit that after a short time reading, I imagined that the story was about another couple and not about Bulma and Vegeta...They were my heroes since childhood and over the years I really took them to my heart, so I just couldnt stand imagining Bulma suffering like this! I also always adored Vegetas dark and cruel personality (I was a bad 10 year old girl! xD ) but this version of him was way too hardcore for me!^^
    But don't bother, I can't wait to know how the story continues! ;)

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  • From ANON - Tanisha Willis on January 11, 2012
    Been waiting so long for updates for this. XD Where are ya girly? Your fans wanna know what happens!
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  • From ANON - Woah. on October 01, 2011
    Wow, this story was one emotional one. Just how I like it. I like dramas. But the only thing that I didn't like was the evil things Vegeta had done to Bulma. Wow, he really is a monster in this one. But otherwise, great job. I liked it.
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  • From ANON - Friend_Or_Foe on September 06, 2011
    Great story, except for one little problem, IT'S BEEN FOUR YEARS SINCE YOU UPDATED!!!! You kept promsing to finish it, and then you decide to drop it when you only have a few chapters left? Come on! Don't leave me hanging! *sniffles and gives puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - Crowax on August 16, 2011
    wow that last part was really something cant wait to see how will things go form here on keep up the good work.
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  • From ZeroUnit on July 21, 2011
    Well chapter looks nice so I hope to see new one any time now. ^^
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  • From ANON - ZeoUnit on April 23, 2011
    I was wondering will you make more of this story when you get some time in the near future?

    in any cease thank you for you time and good luck with the story.
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  • From BerryCoffeeCake20 on April 18, 2011
    This story is excellent. Muy Caliente. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep them coming! I like how you wrote Bulma's character. She's so much tougher, and more reliable sounding than how a lot of other people usually write her. She's not just another Bella. She's somebody who puts up a fight! And Vegeta...Vegeta's is just fifty million different kinds of sexy. I never used to see him in that light until I started reading your story. Again, great job, and I can't wait to read more. :)
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  • From Unolai on August 29, 2010
    Absolutely loved it. Spend an entire day reading this fic from the start, it was so captivating! =D
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  • From ANON - jenno on August 25, 2010
    goood goooood
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  • From animelover6000 on May 26, 2010
    OOOO I can't wait until a update!!! I forgot how much I LOVE this story!!! Until next time, bye hun! ~.^
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  • From XXKuramaXXGirl on April 24, 2010
    this story is amazing
    i love your style of writing
    im a big Vegeta/Bulma fan!
    Great first 5 chapies!
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