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By : vegetagoddess
  • From ANON - Omek on April 22, 2010
    Your back!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I hope more frequently than intermittently.
    This story is freakin' awesome. Please keep up at it.
    Seriously, of all the DBZ fan fics I've read, this is by far, above and beyond, head and shoulders above my favorite one.
    Just, wow.

    PLUR

    Omek
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  • From ANON - ingrid on April 10, 2010
    i absolutely love this story from start to finish. i haven't missed one chapter. if you can keep a story going this long then it's definately a good storyline. i'm just getting anxious for the next chapter. i can't wait! =].
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  • From kwaniesiam on November 08, 2009
    I stumbled across this story a long time ago, and just found it again so I re-read everything. I hope there will be more soon, it's by far one of the best I've ever read.
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 24, 2009
    I didn't review this story until I sat down and read through the whole entire thing and when I reached the final chapter..IM on the edge of my seat going "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" because there aren't anymore chapter's for me to burry myself in! GEEZUS this story has to be now my NUMBER one top favorite that i've had the greatest pleasure of reading in a mad long time. And obviously it's taken you a long time to get this fair with it! I know you probably have a million other people asking you to keep them updated when you add more chapter's and im going to be another! PLEASE when you add more email me and keep me informed so I can come back and continue to read this!

    -Angel
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  • From ANON - Babzy on October 08, 2009
    I was searching up fanfics about Bulma and Vegeta. And i found your homepage, reading almost all of your stories. They are like, fricken! addicting. Especially slave, the way you make the scenes in my mind. Honestly with the way you describe it i can't imagine the very distinct style. I see real people which is absolutely awesome. Keep it up!

    & pleaseee make another chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Siog Danni on August 28, 2009
    Please tell me its not the end! Please let there be more! I'm seriously so addicted to this story. It is AMAZING to say the least. Everything about it is perfect. The style, the characters, the cliffhangers. I was completely blown away by it.
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  • From ANON - Siog Danni on August 26, 2009
    I'm only on chapter 6 so far but I have to say that this is one of the best if not THE best V/B slave fanfic ever!!! I'm so hooked already! Everything about it is so enjoyable. The words get a bit missed up in places with odd spellings but it doesn't change the fact that this is an AMAZING story!!!! I can't wait to keep reading! ^.^
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  • From ANON - shadowgirl on July 23, 2009
    I have come back time and time again,and still there are no updates!!! come on you have to keep the story going!!! i know life is busy but u are one of the most famous B/V and overall dbz fanfic writers of all times! u got a whole crowd of people around the world waiting for you to update the story. i will keep coming back here and to ur website even if it takes years for u to finally start writing again!
    no disrespect intended but I WANT AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - pieniaurinko on May 15, 2009
    Hey Vegeta Goddess,
    I hope you're still working on this story - I was glad when you started to update after such a long time - don't do this to me, to us, again ;-) !
    Have a great weekend,
    pieniaurinko
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  • From ANON - DeminiSSS on April 11, 2009
    Let me tell you, I love this fiction. I found it about a week ago and could not stop reading. Your life has been quite a trip hasn't it? When I first started to read, you were talking about your man and being in college, then a break up and now married and teaching for 2 years. That was a fun trip. And reading what your brain brought together on the computer, that was great. I hope you do update soon. I enjoyed this tale thus far. :)
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  • From ANON - Shira on March 02, 2009
    I‘m sorry that I review just after I read the first 27 chapters. But anyway, I do so now.
    I have to admit that it was not always easy for me to read your very interesting piece of work. But as said, it IS very interesting indeed. First of all I'm not very much into masochism... and to be honest it is hard for me to imagine that Bulma actually gets turned on by such horrible pain. I do understand her reason, but I don't really can empathize here. I love the whole biting, blood drinking idea (I write an AU B/V vampire story myself... so I really DO like that). Anyway, these parts were sometimes hard to read, especially the one with the whip, for me.
    But curiosity drives me on. This story is different and that alone makes it very special. I also do like your writing style and especially your plot ideas. I don't often am in the situation that I wonder what will happen next because I often can imagine it. But here I really don't have a clue.
    Ilandra also impresses me in some way. I absolutely didn't like her from the very beginning but she is a very interesting character anyway. And the whole yuri thing.. I really was like - OMG, Bulma's cheating. But had to giggle about myself after that. She was/is a slave after all and Vegeta used her in a cruel way and since I can't empathize with all that pain-crazy-sex I understand. Maybe she can need some fluffy girl love now. My fan-loving B/V heart has to accept that ;) . Well, maybe it woun't be that way too. I guess I just have to go on and read more.

    Oh, and I worry about the lovely Vegeta. I hope his mind isn't too crazy after all. Well, I do like him crazy.. but not too much of that :D . And not to forget - what an amazing idea. Prince eats fathers heart (and stuff) to gain the memories, brilliant.

    Your story is very special and I could read all day and night long. (51 Chapters.. I at least am in the middle, thanks to my nightshifts and quiet patients - but that is WOW).
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2009
    I love this story
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  • From ANON - jim on December 14, 2008
    hey, i hope you update soon


    you know ix been a while and well

    the story is awesome
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 21, 2008
    HOT. Wow. That was HOT! Please!! PLEASE! Update soon!! PLEASE!!!!
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  • From Typicalteen on November 12, 2008
    Hey, well, I can't stay up any longer to keep reading, because unfortunately, I have to work in the morning...and I have a few things to do before bed. It would be better if I had gotten out of work earlier, but...anyhow >< not here to talk about me. Your story is so exciting. I know how Bulma and Vegeta both feel. I have a little sado-mas tendencies myself. I did find a few mistakes in a few chapters where it looks like part of a sentence had been deleted, and the new idea continued, but they merged together forming 'false' words. Just a jumble of letters. Other than that, it has been really enjoyable so far. The concept is so..intoxicating. I'm enjoying it entirely too much I think :P. Sorry that I do not review EVERY chapter, but it would keep me from continuing on as fast as I would like, so I'll stick to reviewing after I'm done reading the chunks I can at a time. Furthermore; Chapter 10...what happened? I'm getting all excited over Vegeta wanting to be her demon and it suddenly ends. Is that an error? I hope so, if it is, please post or email me at amber_potter87@hotmail.com. Or perhaps it's just my computer? Either way, give me a heads up. Also, in pairing with your actual review (sorry, I write a lot in reviews)the description is sensatinal and definitely pulls me into the story. Vegeta is potrayed very well and Bulma is a perfect (as you said) 'yin to his yang.' Keep up the very good work, you're a terrific writer and I applaud you. *claps* Good job. *slowly sneaks over to Vegeta and kidnaps him* XD
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