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Reviews for Dance Monkey Dance

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2008
    i couldn't stop laughing. you are a special person, that's all i have to say
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  • From ANON - melissa on August 17, 2006
    Love you. Seriously.
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  • From ANON - Twilight-Abyss on May 27, 2004
    Too funny! I love it! When I first started to read it I did have that scene from planet of the apes in mind. Although, the next time I see that movie I'll probably be thinking of Goku and Vegeta. I do want to read more of your writing but since this one is a one shot I guess I will just have to go to your other y. y. No problem..as long as there is more for me to read. Great job. When I catch up to your most recent chapter on your other story I will review.

    ~Kira~
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Buterfly on May 07, 2004
    But now he was starting to think that maybe he shouldn’t have eaten the rice too. It might have been overkill for his poor tummy.--lol love how the rice is the overkill.

    although he had fallen out of the sky so that was a common misconception and people needed to stop making fun of him for it. --LMAO

    (Remember all those pants he tore up fighting people? They were now sleeping shorts.) --lol

    (Why he was listening to a part of his body that in fact did not think he did not know, but for now he was willing to just go along with what it seemed to want.) --rofl, I love that he is willing to go along with it for now. Love that they seem to be controlled by these erections of theirs.

    (Which was stupid because he did have a toddler floating around his house, and he should turn around and close the door, but his erection gave a throb and reasserted its control of the situation.)--!!!!!LMAO!!!!!

    (and his bossy erection) --lol

    Kakarott & Vegeta dancing!!!!*falls out of chair from fits of laughter*

    And he sat straight up, turned and looked at the big idiot sleeping happily (and NAKEDLY) next to him.--lol what a nice surprise for Vegeta to wake up to and Vegeta only wearing a pair of socks!!!!lol

    looking at his son and his wife who were just sitting down to eat as they said: --ROFL!!!! *pats Goku on the back and says sarcastically* Good Job...

    that was hilarious!!!!
    ^.*
    -MB-




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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 06, 2004
    Oh my god! that was hilarious. I hope that you were trying to make it hilarious. Very creative and hilarious. Poor Geta...Monkey noises...ha ha!
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  • From ANON - Hudine on May 06, 2004
    Love it lol :D Would be quite a funny sight to see a couple saiyans acting like monkeys. Hope there is going to be more.

    -Hudine-

    www.darksaiyan.com
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  • From ANON - Ladylupin. on May 06, 2004
    I like that story. It was cute.
    Was it a one-shot or a series starter?
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on May 06, 2004
    Planet of the Apes?

    Never saw it.

    Hilarious fic though.

    When Goku gets home he will probably have to deal with a LOT of bitching from Chichi. (Bulma and Chichi gossip.)

    Both of them appearing in the kitchen naked. ROF
    Wha
    What's next? Vegeta getting "His turn?" LOL
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  • From ANON - Getarian on May 05, 2004
    LOL! Okay, it's official woman... you're insane. :-D

    This was hilarious, in a very strange way... I love parodies.

    I loved both Goku and Vegeta's thoughts as they were being ruled by their erections.

    Gotta admit though... that dance, that arm waving thing, the hooting and such was more than a little strange, to say the least... but it was incredibly hilarious at the same time... Hahahahaha...

    The following morning was a hoot! Loved the way Vegeta was real pissed off with his nether parts for getting them into that mess in the first place. Totally loved how he reminded himself that they never actually got into anything. :-D

    But my favourite part was when he demanded that Kakarot never speak of this to anyone, and then told him to take them back to Capsule Corp: where no one could see them... and he IT'd them into the kitchen right in the middle of a family breakfast. :-D

    That should have been embarrassing, but I loved the way that were both pretty cool about it. Loved how Vegeta dealt with it after he heard Bulma screaming at him.

    "Took the steps three at a time, managed to make it to the bathroom before she did and slammed the door, locked it and smirked at it when he heard her start pounding on it."

    "No way would anyone ever, ever, ever know about what happened yesternight."

    LOL! If anyone can make it seem like nothing happened, Vegeta can. I totally loved this! :-)

    Deeply enjoyed the end dialogue. :-)

    Re: Canon things:

    The only canon thing I came across was this:

    "...the moon was insignificant. That it affected only the ability to attain transformation."

    ...but then I was laughing a fair bit and I might have missed something... I don't know, but I don't think so... because mostly... this was very strange. LOL!


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