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Reviews for Heavy Bond

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Guice on February 12, 2007
    Nice Chappy. To answer a early question, a hoe...ho watever, its an american term for whore but with a lighter meaning. Back to teh review. The begining threw me off, but I guess thats what it was supposed to do. damn sx dreams. I laughed at Kak overreacting to everything and then the f-bomb started dropping nd it just made me smile. I was imagining King Vegeta's face the whole time and it looked priceless. I really enjoyed the chapter. Now the things I got away with... well, I think I might keep that a secret 0_o.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on February 12, 2007

    Chapter 6


    I loved this chapter. I hope Vegeta helps Kakarott soon. That dream was interesting. And Vegeta's reaction at the dinner table was pricess- running away. lol


    I look forward to your next chapter.


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  • From ANON - Black's Crystal on February 12, 2007
    ooh another chapter dam vegeta and being so dam stuborn! hope you update soon
    BC xx
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  • From ANON - Tristalynn on February 12, 2007
    Hahahahahahaha, heh, i actually meant to type "ho", which is like a slut or whore, but was just kidding lol (for the most part) that was my mistake- sorry to cause all the trouble! And ah yes, i will say i loved this chapter, i love this story, you do a good job of the whole missunderstanding, misinterpretation thing- i find it beautiful, compelling, controversal and interesting. I can't wait till Vegeta's fat assed self just gives in to Kakarrot. *sigh* Tell your beta to hurry up!
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  • From ANON - kuroineko on February 10, 2007
    Hi chayron.
    I reeeeeeeeally love your new story. Not that I didnīt love the other ones as well, I adore them all.
    Whatever, the last events in 'Heavy Bond' are very intriguing. I canīt wait to see whatīs going to happen.
    Will Kakarott in the end accept the deal and sleep with this Jaron or maybe he ended in Velariīs bed? Or will Vegeta come to the rescue?
    Poor Kakarott, abandon on a forein planet and nobody to trust.
    Oh, thatīs gonna be interresting!
    At the moment I think Vegeta is a bastard and doesnīt deserve Kakarott. I would like to see that Kakarott getīs stronger and beat the hell out of Vegeta, maybe turn supersaiyan? That would be a nice surprise for that conceited prince, whoīs asking for his ass to get whipped, donīt you think?
    But whatever will be, I hope it will be soon! (Making a baby perhaps, or at least steaming SEX?)
    Am I be too pushy????
    Sorry, donīt be mad at me, pleeeeease? ^^,!!!

    kuroineko

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  • From ANON - Rourinu on February 06, 2007
    Yay! I love this story more and more with each chapter. Yikes, so now Kakarotto is going into heat, eh? Interesting...
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  • From ANON - Guice on February 05, 2007
    And the plot thickens. Very nice ending to the chapter. Velari is a crafty one isn't he, though I wouldn't mind what he was trying to do at all.... but then agian thats me and my life isn't being threatened. Anyways overall it was amazing, as always.

    Good to hear you didn't have sourses that week and no bodies were found. Yes, the gay package. I hope you didn't take that in wrong context. I met the many things that you can get away with or do while being gay. Though, there are several cons. Well, great chapter and all. Can't wait till the next installment. Your country friend, Guice
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on February 05, 2007
    wow nice chapter though kakarott needs to find someone to spend his heat with.
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  • From ANON - Tristalynn on February 05, 2007
    oh my gosh, graaa! you kill me sometimes, such angst, such emotions, i have a hard time waiting- (such impatience) ;p but i suppose i will, seeing as how i have to.

    ahh I'm so glad I was right- Velari's a hoe!

    Wonderful chapter, just wonderful
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  • From ANON - Black's Crystal on February 05, 2007
    can't wait for an update! very good story i love au's
    BC xx
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  • From ANON - Draxidean on February 01, 2007
    wow this story is amazing I rely love it
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  • From ANON - Guice on January 30, 2007
    Verrrry nice. Rather enjoyed the teeth thing. I don't know what it was about it, I guess just the whole act of independence and not acting as some spoiled rich person... although he was rich on Hetela and is still rich... lucky bastard. The ending to this chapter was exciting. Everyone likes a Vegeta who takes his anger for one person out on another, makes for a great explanation speech. Well I hope life treats you well my friend and I'm glad you think my fantasy was interesting. I just have random thoughts, comes with the gay package I guess. Have fun with with the computers and don't have blunt objects around you, it always ends horribly.
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  • From ANON - Tristalynn on January 30, 2007
    Oh My GOSH! I loved this chapter, loved it! we're getting somehwere- sweet!

    Lol, was I right?

    Ahh, i'm even more excited about this than i was before, fabulous! *sighs* Yes well, that would make sense, that Velari isn't perfect, and i just thought I'd say that your desription of him suprised me very much.. i don't know, i thought he was the shorter slimmer... just all around "chibi" young version of Vegeta but nooooo he's bulkier and taller, damn. You got me there, feel good about yourself, lol

    Again, great chapter, great story, come on with the next one
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on January 30, 2007
    wow vegeta attacked kakarott..now kakarott is really going to think vegeta wants to kill him.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on January 30, 2007

    Chapter 4


    Wow the rapport between Velari and Kakarott, is nice. Something to bridge the gulf between Vegeta and his mate. Everything was well described, and I could visualize the scenes clearly. Great job!


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