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Reviews for Underlying Conspiracy

By : chayron
  • From 66Hiei08 on January 01, 2009
    Wow! This is great!! Do you take crossover requests? lol Everyone should know by now that I have been crawling on my knees begging for great YYH/DBZ crossovers, especially with the Hiei/Vegeta pairing. I just think that pairing would be so interesting to explore as the characters are so similar, yet unique.
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  • From DarkSerapha on January 01, 2009
    Another very funny chapter! Couldn't Goku just have talked to Baba via telepathy? Or does that just work with the kais? I can never rememeber. Don't worry about my Terry-Pratchett-comment. It was meant entirely as an compliment! Copying his style is not what I'd call your work, but you pull off that certain humour of his very well, and it's not many people who can do that. Thumbs up!
    The frog-thing had me simultaneously laughing and cringing in agony. The scene with Goku waking Vegeta up in the middle of the night was brilliant. I really like this story a lot, but I can see what you mean - this may be yaoi, but I honestly cannot envision a lemon in this writing-style. It would be very difficult. Actually, that makes it more of a boys-love- or shonen-ai-story. The difference between yaoi and shonen ai is the amount of sex involved in the story, really. *smirks*
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  • From Zofo on December 31, 2008
    Awww Goku wouldn't let Vegeta eat the boar family, and strangely Vegeta listened to him. Probably couldn't of bared the endless whining if he didn't :)

    Chuckled at Goku not being allowed into the green party even if he went vegetarian, though I bet he couldn't have kept it up for long anyway.

    Oh I loved how calm Vegeta was the next day, making Goku seethe more and more. Guess his plan back-fired, but it was a good plan. Will he try again?

    Glad Vegeta doesn't want to marry Bulma. Hope Goku presses him about the difference between marrying and mating.
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  • From topbear1974 on December 31, 2008
    Hahahaha, Goku tried to push Vegeta to level 3 buy agitate him. He is not dumb isn't he. I laughed my head off.

    Looking forward to find out more about what Vegeta have to say about mating.

    please update soon.
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  • From topbear1974 on December 31, 2008
    Of course I remember you! you wrote a lot great stories!
    I am so glad you are back. I love your stories and the intriguing plots you had.

    this story has a great start. it is so funny and I love goku and vegeta's interaction and coversation. I wonder what the consparicy is, and why vegeta doesn't want to marry Bulma.

    please update soon!
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  • From Zofo on December 28, 2008
    OMG you wrote some of my favorite Goku/Vegeta stories (Come Together, To Hell Together). Such epics, which I've re-read several times. I thought you weren't writing DBZ anymore so am over the moon that you are :)

    This one had me laughing from the get go. Vegeta claiming all the presents in the name of Vegeta-sei was just sooo him! Then Goku eating all Vegeta's eggs so Goku had to feed him was sooo Goku!

    Goku seems fairly intelligent in this one, makes a nice change from other stories I've been reading.

    PMSL at Vegeta annoyed that someone had killed Yamcha before him, and then the final image of Baba straddling the crystal ball to recharge it had me on the floor :)

    I can't wait for more, and welcome back.
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  • From ANON - bob on December 27, 2008
    You know its funny I just finished re-reading a bunch of your stories and I wondered if you were still writing. Oh and I'm very interested in this story thus far its pretty funny.
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  • From DarkSerapha on December 26, 2008
    Oh dear! What a terrific start! I laughed so hard a couple of times. Especially Baba is really brilliant. And I love the banter between Goku and Vegeta. The style of writing actually reminds me of Terry Pratchett in his younger days and that's about as big a compliment as I can give anyone.
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  • From TristaML on December 25, 2008
    So i began reading this story because i thought the summary was fresh and interesting, i didn't even check to see who the author is, and then i sit here open up the window box withthe plan of going to smoke right before i read it, but then i read the first few paragraphs and couldn't stop. i just kept going and going and going thinking to myself what the hell, who wrote this, this is not just some little story! this is intersting as fuck! but i was so familiar with the writing it was wrackign my brains ...

    needless to say i get to the bottom, wanting another chapter lol, and was ESTATIC to see your name :D

    I saw you review something or other ont too long ago and i just knew you were back and was waiting :D you're the very first author i ever read any yaoi on, and have always been one of my very favorites :D

    It's wonderful to see you're back and i can't wait to read more

    Very refreshing- best line "Alright! Go to hell! I'll do it!"

    LOL

    !TristaV!
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  • From cueball2 on December 25, 2008
    Aww. That was hilarious. More please.
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  • From finale on December 25, 2008
    Hahaha it's so fuc... so funny! (Sorry Vegeta is such a bad example, as always ;D) I wonder how will you do a humorous yaoi? Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - PurinsuArashi on December 24, 2008
    OMFG! This is funny as hell!
    Way OOC, but I don't fucking care! HA!

    "I bet nobody else can draw a dead cat like she can!"

    XD

    Please do not stop this fic, just to funny!

    Thanks for sharing your humor with us!

    =#=Storm=#=
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  • From Tru6768 on December 24, 2008
    Yessss!!! I, for one, am ecstatic to have you back "home" in the DBZ fandom. I wish you a warm, warm welcome back :) I'm sure I speak for many when I say you have been missed.

    Well, you already know that i like this story. You are always surprising us with something different and this time is no exception. I think your comedic debut is off to a great start.

    Some of my favorite parts were when Goku assures Baba that no one can draw dead cats quite like her great-great-grandmother, and when Vegeta gets pissed that he has to go on the mission because his Woman just bought him Tomb Raider XV. I LOL every time I read it.

    Nice work and again, welcome back!
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  • From ANON - imherefortheporn on December 24, 2008
    OHMYFREAKINGOD, CHAYRON IS BAAAAAAAAACK!!!! XD And the story is awesome! I actually lauched out loud *counts on fingers* eleven times! I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUU!!!!
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