Reviews for Uncontrollable Lust: Multiverse Takeover

BY : Best-Lemon-Writer-in-Training


  • From ANON - on July 08, 2016

    I wanted to see more Maron, maybe in the sequel.

     

    You can also use othe girls from dragon ball like Ranfan, Hasky, PiePie the Mermaid, ETC.



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  • From ANON - Ultimate guest on May 13, 2016

    Its been a long time since you updated. It is my favorite Gohan lemon and I want to see more chapters, please release new ones as fast as you vam

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  • From ANON - Darrius Key'Shawn McGavock on March 04, 2016

    Hello my name is Darrius and I want you to please continue updating your story it's getting better and better now that I can't wait till you update your story but yeah Please continue to update your fanfiction it's getting better and better now so please continue to updating please and thank you.

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  • From ANON - Guest on March 01, 2016

    could you add Maron to the story

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  • From ANON - Anon on October 16, 2015

    Nice

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  • From ANON - Old Fan on September 30, 2014


    Would it be possible to re-add the missing scenes in uncontrollable lust?
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    I wish to keep my "Goddesses" with me, with the exceptions of all the women who joined me after I became "God", the exceptions being Erasa, Lime, and Videl.

    gradually, over time, Gohan let some of the women go.
    Piiza reluctantly returned to managing stars at Gohan's urgings, yet she insisted on visiting Gohan often.
    Maron left with Launch, she gave him goodbye kisses for almost 20 minutes until Launch reminded her to leave.
    In said visits, she, like Launch, would often give affectionate hints towards him about how she felt towards him. As for Maron, she was the most resistant by far to return to her daily life. She would beg Gohan to let her stay, but with her own pleas failing to But again, she ended up rather forcibly kissing him whenever he passed by.

    Maron yelled to Gohan, "You're the only guy that doesn't view me as a sex object to fool around with." The others look in Maron in surprise, Maron adds "Just because I'm a ditz, doesn't mean I can't realize that. Gohan, I promise I can share you with the others."


    Maron's child, who was being breastfed at the moment, was a blue haired baby girl, whom she had named Chatain
    This led to him letting all three return to being his partners very quickly.
    Soon after, the other five joined in with them; Erasa sucked at her nipples, while Zangya and Chi-Chi took turns french kissing Gohan, clones filling their holes as they all did this.
    Maron and Piiza were on their knees, putting kisses on Gohan's penis before putting it in their mouth, as he cums inside of them. Pulling his still rock hard length out of them, Gohan lifts his shaft and slaps Maron's forehead with the bottom of it, Piiza on the other hand was crawling on top of Gohan, him holding her sides as he pounds into her, her ample breasts bouncing in his face. Then soon after, Gohan started holding her thighs, unleashing his full power into his thrusts, Gohan forcing his cock into Piiza's womb. As for Maron, she was being pushed up against a tree moaning with pleasure as Gohan spreading her butt cheeks, thrusting into her ass hole, her flat ass making it easy to put himself fully into her rectum. Gohan fiercely fucks her orifice, until finally he reaches climax, throwing Maron on her back on the ground, mounting her and putting his length between her breasts, tit-fucking her until he blows his load all over her grinning face.

    Maron was breastfeeding a green haired babygirl, she had named Chatain.
    While Piiza was cradling a golden eyed, orange maned girl known as Lazagna

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  • From ANON - ZeoUnit on August 04, 2014

    Well so far it seems that this story will have more then just Adult parts. :P
    Stuff might be a bit rush but seems it would be made in to more then just short story. The possible plots and twists are there, so hopefully the adult pat will be stay in current track while add more depth to the current plot development.

    in any-cease best wishes and good writing From ZeoUnit

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