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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on March 02, 2004
    I watch Nip/Tuck too!
    It's great!!! ^-^

    Anyways... that was a great chap, it delved deeper into Goku's pregnancy, (lt klt kind sorry for him!) U_U
    Ahhhh! And now the Lust cycles gonna start! - good research you did on it, its the sign of a good writer (or so I've heard O_o)

    Looking forward to the next update! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Luna on March 02, 2004
    *snickers*Continue!It's so cool.NIICE lemon.Not a graphic as others but still.....
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 02, 2004
    Poor, Goku. That lust cycle thing is going to be terrible. I can't wait. Oh and I thought the broom bit with Bulma was genius. I would have never come up with something so funny. I can't wait for the next part. I sure am glad you update everyday. I have trouble keeping to my weekly schedule. Heww! ;)
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  • From ANON - LadyLupin on March 02, 2004
    Suger-coated lime. Hows that for an oxy-moron?
    UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
    MY WORLD WILL END IF YOU DON'T!!!!
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  • From ANON - Getarian on March 02, 2004
    Whoo, I must have just missed your latest update when I last reviewed. I love how quickly you update :-)

    Territorial Vegeta is wonderful, I loved the scene between him and ChiChi, and manipulative Goku is a complete treat, his realisation that Vegeta really responds to his purrs is the best.

    Yamcha's reaction was a hoot :-)

    Thank-you for sending Trunks back to the future. Nothing against Trunks, I just don't want him interfering with Vegeta & Goku's relationship.

    You asked for possible boys names? I looked up on the net for names & meanings...you wanted something that Vegeta would think up, which had me first thinking of Vegetable names...being a Saiyan thing and all, but I couldn't come up with anything, so I considered the possibility that being on Earth has allowed him to think of earth names. Hopefully, the pages I went to are not screwing with the meanings because I really wouldn't know otherwise.

    Anyway, possibilities are:
    From Japanese origin:

    MASUYO: meaning 'to increase the world'
    NIBORI: meaning 'to rise to eminence' OR TAKASHI: which simply means 'Eminence'
    ISAMU: meaning 'Bravery'

    Elsewhere on the net...

    KANE: means: 'tribute, warrior; the do-acc-accomplished, golden; man, the eastern sky; beautiful' From: Gaelic, Japanese, Hawaiian, Welsh.

    Elsewhere still...

    AJANI: means: 'He who wins the struggle' From African origin
    AJAX: means: 'Strong Warrior' From Greek origin
    ALGER: means: 'Noble Warrior' From Old German origin
    BALI: means: 'Mighty Warrior' From Hindu origin

    Obviously there are like a billion more names to choose from but I really have to go soon, so hopefully I have given you something to at least ponder on, even if none are to your liking, itbeenbeen fun checking all these names & meanings out.

    ciao for now :-)
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  • From ANON - LadyLupin on March 02, 2004
    AWWWW!!!!!
    That little part of domestic sweetness was so sickenly sweet.
    POST ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! HURRY!!!
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  • From ANON - Luna on March 01, 2004
    lol good good!Niceeee sex scene.Continue!
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 01, 2004
    *dies of laughter* That was a very funny chap! Vegeta and Goku are so cute ins fis fic. *sighs* I love when Vegeta takes care of his mate, it's so wonderful.
    I totally agree with Vegeta when he said: “Woman,” Vegeta growled, “Your continued tenctence is not necessary.” I love when he makes remarks like that! So cute and hilarious! This story is great! I'm glad you update so often! YEAH!
    Keep up the awesome work!
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 01, 2004
    HAhaa! Yamcha is hilarious. I love Yamcha. I really wish he wasn't such an ass in DBZ. He used to be so cool in Dragonball. I guess as cool as a guy that was scared of chicks could be. But he was sorta cool. Anyway, and poor Trunks. I guess it was for the best that he left for the future. I loved this chapter. And thanks for the special attention...I felt...special. Great fic by the way. :)
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  • From ANON - tatoosh on March 01, 2004
    I've really enjoyed the last three chapters. The purring and comforting behavoirs are fun to watch. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Getarian on March 01, 2004
    Arst rst I wasn't sure if I was going to like this, it all seemed a bit strange, and later, I had the biggest fear that Trunks was going to get together with Goku...Ewwww, but thankfully, Vegeta got there in time and saved my sanity :-)

    I have to say that I am thoroughly enjoying this, I spent alot of the last couple of chapters with a huge grin on my face. Normally, I prefer Vegeta to be uke, he's so adorable like that, but I have to say, I absolutely love him as seme in this one, especially with Goku manipulating him the way he does, it cr me me up.

    I loved the whole kitchen scene and Bulma with the broom...f***ing hilarious.

    I definitely want more; Keep it coming :-)
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  • From ANON - Naruto_Kenshin on March 01, 2004
    Fucking deliciousat iat is going to be kinda funny if Goku wakes up with more kids inside of him than he originally had. Cool!
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 01, 2004
    HOTT SAIYAJIN SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!! I love it! Damn your good! Krillen was making me laugh, and Veggie and Kaka are so cute when they purr and frowl at each other! This story is fucking hot! *smiles* I m proud of my Ouji Sama he didn't run away this time! Of course they is no shame in protecting his preggy mate! I love it! MORE HURRY! ^.*
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on March 01, 2004
    Yay! More smut. It's exactly what the world needs! I loved this chapter and how you showed what was going on in not only Vegeta's head but Goku's hormone crazied . Co. Cool chappie. More please.
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  • From ANON - Luna on March 01, 2004
    That was good.I like this story.Oh...Have more Veggie-Kaka sex scenes!Continue
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