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By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - pixydust on February 29, 2004
    wow! i really like this fic! And i really wish there were more then 1 new chapter being posted everyday......you know you wanna post more......post more. well that didn't work! i'm gonna happily check this fic everyday and read your new offering :)
    well, yeah, i can't see vegeta going off and sleeping with bulma to make trunks when he has a pregnant purring goku right there who if he doesn't take care of will go off and pur and claw someone else so i hope like in the anime, goku get get all better :)

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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on February 29, 2004
    Sorry for taking so long to review! ^_^

    The last few chapters made me laugh! I really like the way Vegeta is handling this, but especially the way Goku is handling this, a pregnant Goku is so funny!!! ^-^

    And Gohan, he's soooo cute, just like his dad, foods the first thing on his list!

    And it looks like Trunks is brewing some trouble... naughty naughty! U_U

    Looking forward to the next chap! ^_^
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on February 29, 2004
    Thank you soo much for this. I love this story. It really is getting good. I like how Gohan just came in and started eating like it was nothiHe rHe reminds me of my little brother. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. This is a great fucking fic! *Sigh*
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on February 29, 2004
    Another chapter!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very nice chap! I was laughing when Gohan was like "Dad why is our house destroyed?"onlyonly he knew why! Love it, I love it! Vegeta is so cute while he is trying to struggle with these new emotions that he is feeling for Kakarott, like when Goku purrs for Bulma and Vegeta thinks that purr should be reserved for him...that was soooooooooo cute.
    ^.*
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  • From ANON - kitkat on February 28, 2004
    yay, Mirai is here!!! ^^ I foresee a little contest for the Baka between father and future son??? Say yes, but not now, say it as the plot thickens along the story. I'll really be waiting for more chapters.
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  • From ANON - Mechancical Butterfly on February 28, 2004
    You update alot! What a nice chapter, Trunks is in the story! YAY! I can't wait to see what is going to happen when Goku finds Vegeta. Gosh, I never wanted to kick Vegeta more for being such a jerk to Goku!!!! *kicks Vegeta then hugs him* I still love him!!!!!!!!! I just don't want him treating Goku like a !!!!!!!! I can't wait for next chap, I like this story a lot.
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  • From ANON - jaygoos• on February 15, 0000
    As always...That was great...I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I'm glad Trunks is in the story. I love Trunks.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on February 27, 2004
    That was fanfuckingtastic. That lemon by far had to be one of the best I have ever read. It was so fucking...uh...primal. Kick ass! I can't wait for some more. I love this fic. And Trunks and Goten so have to be in this. I love them. Great fic!
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  • From on February 27, 2004
    Very hot lemon. So I have a question, is Vegeta going to stay with Goku now that he bit him, or his he planning on doing exactly what he said and giving Goku the kids to raise? I hope they will be a couple, but whatever happens, happens, and I will read on anyway. I just love Seme Geta! It's such a rare and beautiful thing, that it is!
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  • From ANON - Mechancial Butterfly on February 27, 2004
    Alright RAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Vegeta and Goku are mated! That was a great chap! I thouroughly enjoyed it. Gosh, I can't wait to see what happens whenChiChi finds out. Will they all live at Capsule Corp together since they basically destroyed Goku's house? The lemon was awesome!
    Update soon ^.*
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  • From ANON - Hecate18 on February 27, 2004
    Yummy chap! ^-^
    So Vegeta and Goku are mated, I wonder what everyone else will do when they find out??? ^0^
    Especially Chi-chi ^_^
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  • From ANON - LadyLupin on February 27, 2004
    The only thing I know right now, is that I really need to change my underware.
    UPDATE!! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - Nirvana on February 26, 2004
    **does a little dance**Go Goku,go Goku,yeah kick ChiChi's butt,out of the house.
    This story rocks,you have to write more.Vegeta's smelling Goku's scent,well I'm smelling
    lemons,I can't wait for the third chapter,for it.
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  • From ANON - vejika on February 26, 2004
    so far so goooood.......... can't wait till you update
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  • From ANON - Coldpaws on February 26, 2004
    i really like it, and i hoe that you continue to update on a regular schedule. so exited! goku vegeta yaoi yumminess!
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