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Reviews for Hormone Therapy

By : CardDragonBall

From ANON - CrazyGurl on March 16, 2004
I can't believe that is the end! But I suppose all good things must come to an end. Great fic!
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 16, 2004
@_@ *sobs* The...the..end...NO!!! Geta come back!!!!!
Well I must say that was a superb story with a wonderful ending and a nice lemon too!

(This after Goku launched into a discussion on what it was like to be mato suo such a sexy person and not get any sex.) --rofl poor Gohan

�Did it ever occur to you that not everybody spends all their time thinking about sex?�
�No.�
�You�re impossible, Kakarot.� GAH!!! rofl that kind of reminds me of Homer Simpson!

Maybe he liked to see Kakarot trying to convince him. Maybe not. It was a mystery. One that he di int intend to ponder.-- awe the Ouji si so cute he likes to see Kakarott whine...

Spared a moment to be impressed with Kakarot.---heh heh I'm impressed too, and very turned on! WOO HOO GO GOKU!

Vegeta just made a noise. Like he agreed, or didn�t, or didn�t care. Vegeta�s noises were confusing like that.--rofl I agree his noises can be confusing.

I loved it, although I am very sad it's over. *sighs* Your writing is so believable...you made me feel as if these two are really a couple, and I love that!
Thanks for such a wonderful fic!
^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - Getarian on March 15, 2004
"Smelling nice again�not quite as nice as he did when he first drank the hormone therapy�"

Ah memories...those were the days...how Is ths them :-)

"(This after Goku launched into a discussion on what it was like to be mated to such a sexy person and not get any sex.)"

LOL! Poor Gohan, that kid is so going to need therapy :-) Still, if I was mated to Vegeta, I'd be raving about his sexy bod all tim time too ;-)

"that was not a �hey idiot, come screw me until I�m pregnant� type smell."

LOL! I'm loving the whole pleading for sex and pouting scene between Goku and Vegeta...could almost feel the tension in the room after Goku told Vegeta that he sounds like ChiChi. Oooh, that was a low one Goku. LOL!

Love Vegeta...he's messing with Goku! Love the fact that he's not even sure why...I can almost see the evil glint in his eye as he stands back to enjoy the view of pouty Goku...They truly are the perfect couple :-)

God, I love how Vegeta bares his neck to Goku so that he can bite him where he was claimed...it's so erotic.

"Spared a moment to hope nobody went past them, wherever they were." LOL!

�Thanks Geta.�
"Sure, he thought dizzily, anytime."

Indeed :-) That was amazing, as usual. :-)

�He�s Not a GIRL, DAMMIT!�

Again I loved the tie in fr...r...this time with "Cross Eyed" :-)

"Vegeta just made a noise. Like he agreed, or didn�t, or didn�t care. Vegeta�s noises were confusing like that." LOL!

*Sobs* The end...I can't believe it...I am so going to miss this fic. :-(

But I like the nice hapnd :nd :-)

Thank-you for this wonderful journey!

Thanks for the info on dracula :-)

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From ANON - Hecate18 on March 14, 2004
The... the END!!!!
Nooooooooo!

That was a great fic, brilliant! ^_^
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From ANON - jaygoose on March 14, 2004
So you finished another one huh. That's good. You always get your stories down to an acceptable amount of chapters. The History of Kalika as it stands now might be at least 30 chapters. *Sigh* What have I gotten myself into?

I loved how Goku pouts until he gets what he wants. I do that. I am a spoiled little bitch. He. He. I like how the twins showed up. �Hey,� he said, �Go�Da�You!� he said pong ang at Goku. That was cute.

Oh, I used to watch Labor and Deliver on TLC all the time. My mom thought that I was really wierd and wanted to get pregnant. I am weird but I definetly did not want to get pregnant. I think that all parents should make thier teenagers watch the show. It will change alot of thier minds about having babies. It not all cutesy and sweet like that outher show, A Baby Story. You get to see all the blood and stuff. He. He.

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From ANON - Hecate18 on March 14, 2004
This will only be a short review cause I'm gonna be late for work, (I get to walk around the shop looking for clothes because people are too lazy to do it themselves. ::grrr::)

Anyways on with the review... I really enjoy reading your birth scenes, because they are kinda reali, it, it was sooo funny Bul Bulma made them watch that video. (I had to watch a video like that in my child development class, it was... quite trumatic. O_o)

'These parts of Vegeta were his. (And Vegeta's too, but mostly they were Goku's.)' - I had to laugh at that, though I don't think Vegeta would have been too happy hearing that. ^_^

AWWW BABIES!!!!

Looking forward to next chap!!! ^-^
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 14, 2004
YEAH!!! *does a happy dance and cheers* They are born!pee!pee!!!!
Poor Goku having to clean up the mess and poor Geta having to push kids out...*shakes head* not even I had to do that b/c I had a c-section.
anyway I loved this chapter I loved when Goku said you're leaking! How Vegeta yells for Goku to give him his son...how cute! ^.^
this is excellent and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
^.*
-MB-
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From ANON - Getarian on March 14, 2004
As usual...a big grin from the word go :-)

My heart goes out to Vegeta, he so longs to get back into warrior mode and Goku keeps treating him like a woman, and asking him inane questions about the babies...why is it that men don't get that mothers can be maternal AND still possess a functioning brain. I'm not complaining though as far as this fic goes...I like this aspect of their relationship...keeps Vegeta sulky and sarcastic and Goku...confused and dominant :-)

BTW Vegeta...Good luck with the after birth f***ing plan...I can't really see Goku agreeing to that. LOL!

"...And then Kakarot huffed, slid his arms under Vegeta and picked him up. �Come on, Geta. I think we need to go inside.�"

Oh damn, I love this! Completely. He's so bloody loving and affectionate. Sometimes, it's good to be treated like a woman :-)

I loved how Goku was with Vegeta...for someone who didn't want to do this, his instincts certainly kicked in at the right time. Much better choice than Bulma :-)

"These parts of Vegeta were his. (and Vegeta�s too, but mostly they were Goku�s.)" LOL! Loved this!

"�Give me my damn son, you stupid ass.�" LOL! Doesn't motherhood just bring out Vegeta's softer side? :-)

"...and wondered if it would make a huge impact on history if he named him something silly like Hubert or Ernie."

ROTFL! Oh Gods, this was funny!

Yes! The twins have arrived! I really loved the whole birthing scene...it was wonderful :-)

Looking forward to the next chapter :-)

"Mercedes Lackey is a fantasy writer."

Ah, I might give her stuff a look next time I'm in the library...I love fantasy...have only ever read Eddings, Feist, C.S Lewis, Tolkien and Jordan though...many more out there to read.

"...But its good to read to see the origin of some of the vampire myths."

Hmmm, I was told once that the origins came from a real nasty piece of work named Vladimir.
The Vampire myth apparently came from the fact that when the villagers finally rose up against him and killed him, he was thrown off a cliff, but when they went to retrieve his body it was gone.
The stakes came from the fact that Vladimir was a bloodthirsty creature who often, during battle, would impale his victims on stakes of wood...earning him the nickname: "Vladimir the Impaler"

Is any of this referred to in the book...or have I been told a lot of rubbish?
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From ANON - jaygoose on March 13, 2004
Yay! They're born. I bet Geta is glad he's gonna get his figure back. *Sigh* Makes me want to have kids. *Sigh* But I'm not. He He.
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From ANON - Getarian on March 13, 2004
Loved Vegeta's thoughts. Cracked up at:

"(Sheesh, the Great Vegeta, Warrior and Prince of the Saiyans, all sleepy-eyed because he got to have a rousing bout of sex. He could just hear Freiza laughing his ass off at him.)" LOL!

"...Naked�because apparently dominant males had something against wearing clothes."

LOL! Felt Vegeta's teensy touch of being miffed at being the uke in the above line :-)

But got all tingly over the fact that he was now openly (at least to himself) acknowledging the fact that Goku was his seme :-)

Err, still not completely knowledgeable on these terms...do they still apply with two males when female parts are involved? Ah, who cares? The important thing is that two hot Saiyans are having sex :-)

I really love sulky Vegeta! LOL!

"Vegeta had better gver ver this �I can ignore you and fall asleep� bullshit pretty quickly or Goku was going to go back to waking him up every five minutes."

LOL! Deeply love rejected Goku! He gets so pissed off and dominant ;-)

"...Kami�it was like sleeping with Chichi all over again."

ROTFL! Hysterical! Loved this!

"He felt compelled to say something like �of course dear.� Or �I�m fine dear, how are you?� or �Oh. Yes. That. Was. Good.�"

LOL! If only Vegeta knew what was running through Goku's head :-)

Oh God, I love when Goku doesn't get sex almost as much as I do when he does - almost :-)
He gets so pouty, I love that he hates masturbation, compares it to ChiChi sex and is even considering lowering her on the scale to the negative...he can be damn funny when he's horny. LOL!

Loved Goku's thoughts on hands and their application for fighting and not f***ing. LOL! loved them even more when he applied his thougto sto sex and Vegeta yowling...wonderful imagery :-)

Ahh, he really loves Vegeta doesn't he?

"And Goku figured if they were talking about Vegeta, he was definitely one-hundred percent an ass man.)"

Oh definitely! Gotta love that ass!

Oh, Vegeta is the sweetest! I love that even though he is ti he he is so attuned to his mate that he sensed his discomfort and need, so he roused himself to go and see to him :-)

Loved this even better:

"...Found the large idiot trying to masturbate..."

LOL! Funny, yet showing a closeness in their relationship that allows such thoughts to be applied in a loving manner.

I can't say it enough! I love your lemons!

Loved everyones reaction to the home birth tape. Amazingly, the only one not disturbed by it was Vegeta :-)

Loved Bulma's thoughts:

"Kami, she hoped Vegeta wasn�t going to lick his sons clean. She would never be able to dream about him again."

LOL! But ahh, she dreams about him. Sweet :-)

Loved her thoughts a little further on when she was reminding herself that Vegeta's voice was still sexy...Youcha cha :-) and cracked up at Gohan's relieved fleeing of the scene when he realised that he didn't have to watch the tape :-)

Loved the 'discussion' between Goku and Vegeta, interspersed with Bulma's thoughts. It's scenes like this that really 'flesh out' the characters, and you do that well!

Definitely never, ever want this to end...I think this is my favourite of the lot, and I love all your stories :-)

Never heard MerdMerdeces Lackey...Set genre author? All-rounder? Any good?

"...(Except when I read Dracula and I ended up taking a week to get through it because I didn�t really want to read it that much.)"

I take it you mean, Bram Stoker's "Dracula?" Ironically, being a lover of Vampire stories, I have never read Dracula. I got hooked on Stephen King's "Salem's lot" Wour our lack of interest because you're not really a vampire buff or because BS's Dracula was different to modern vampire stories?...assuming it is, that is...I heard it was pretty dark...was it?

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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 13, 2004
YEAH!!! Great chap!
Aww, Vegeta let Goku have sex anyway, that was very sweet of him!

Ahh, look at the mommy licking its baby. Kami, she hoped Vegeta wasn�t going to lick his sons clean. She would never be able to dream about him again. - @_@ rofl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I died when I read this!!!! That is totally great and it would be adorable yet funny if Vegeta did that, and sad that Bulma would never see him the same again...

See, his voice was still sexy�well, as sexy as you can imagine anything being when werewere watching a slime-covered bloody, squished faced baby being squeezed out of a very screechy woman. - *dies* that was hilarious! squished face baby...love that!

This was definately an entertaining chapter. I loved Goku's whining at the begining that he didn't get to finish. You really are very wonderful with character interaction and thoughts of a character, I enjoy reading your fics.

^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - jaygoose on March 12, 2004
I defintely understand Geta's pain. You just can't ignore your whe when they are in need. The guilt just isn't conduitive to peaceful sleep.

Oh, and everytime I see a stuff pig, I buy it for my mom. Hmm...my roommate asked me if there was hidden message behind it. I don't know. It could be a subconscious thing.

Vegeta and Goku are so cute. They remind me of my parents when my mom was pregnant with my little brother...not the sex part of course...thank god I have no idea what that was like.

You did a great job with that.
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From Ladylupin on March 12, 2004
I can't wait to read about this birth.
Good chapter. Goku was so funny!
UPDATE!
And please review my new story, 'Devine Introvention', as well!
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From ANON - Getarian on March 12, 2004
Mechanical Butterfly.
"...and Getarian goi going to have to say NO ONE not one person is a good enough pick to be Vegeta for me!!!"

I totally agree! It's what I meant when I said "Is anyone?"

"...I see very cheesy looking 80's graphics and very uncool, un-saiyajin like hairdo's, ppl flying on strings, A VERY SUCKY VEGETA WITH A BAD VOICE!!!! I need that husky Geta voice!"

LOL! Pretty much my fears as well. Plus, for some reason, I don't expect anyone to be in character...I think that they're going to ruin the series for me. But my biggest fear is that they're just going to make Vegeta out to be a loser and not consider his redemptive arc at all...not that they gave it too much thought in the series either, but it was there. That's why Vegeta is my favourite...his ability to overcome his past, to show a good side, yet hold onto that bad ass attitude. Plus he's so damn Sexy!
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From ANON - Getarian on March 12, 2004
*chuckle* Okay, no hot naked Vegeta for Bulma :-)

I absolutely loved the little argument between Goku and Vegeta about who should be there at the birth. I think poor Vegeta is feeling a tad rejected because Goku doesn't want to be there.

�Do you want to have thesbiesbies or not?�

LOL! Typical Vegeta. Sorry my Prince, you don't have a choice in this...they're there and they're coming out whether you win this argument or not :-)

"Hey, but like this, they were almost the same height!"

Loved this! Typical Goku to take time out of an argument to notice something like this :-)

Actually, the height difference is more than likely one of the reasons that I prefer uke Vegeta to seme Vegeta, I know that it's actually more about personality than height, but there are a number of positions (such as lap dancing) where uke Goku just doesn't fill ill in my head and definitely not uke Radditz. LOL But uke Vegeta, I can imagine him being gathered up in strong arms and just being adored :-)

"Goku stood on the stairs, watched his mate walk away from him. Enjoyed the show. Very much."

LOL. Yeah, that's our Goku :-) Damn Gohan and his bad timing!

"Go run to your little human wifey-poo and make sure she doesn�t DIE from some illness because Kami knows that is more IMPORTANT than the Saiyan PRINCE that is carrying YOUR TWINS."

LOL! Ah, the proud Prince is definitely feeling rejected at this point. I loved the "wifey-poo" comment. LOL. We are definitely being shown the insecurde ode of a very pregnant Prince.

"The baka left the bathroom." "Vegeta didn�t ca"

"

Well expressed! I absolutely felt Vegeta's sense of being abandoned. Admittedly, he is over-reacting, but he's pregnant, he's allowed too :-)

"...But he�d be sparring with Gohan or Piccolo, and he�d wander off. And they would find him hours later, with Vegeta. As ifhadnhadn�t disappeared while they were sparring."

This was wonderful! Absolutely! A wealth of emotion is expressed completely in this simple statement :-) I can picture a big ol' tree somewhere with a heart and "Goku loves Vegeta" carved within :-)

...And Vegeta coming across said carving, scratching out Goku and replacing it with Kakarot :-)

Loved Gohan's thoughts on Vegeta, his dad and his mother. Nice little "fly on the wall" overview on the current state of V&G's relationship :-) Absolutely agreed that Gohan shouldn't tell Vegeta that he is acting somewhat like ChiChi. LOL!

"And mostly he loved her (when he didn�t have to clean her house or bring her tissues or stuff like that.)"

Yup! Typical teenager. LOL!

"Vegeta was Goku�s. Goku was Vegeta�s and no snivelly little earth woman was going to change that. "

Shivery little goosebumps! God I love it when Goku gets like this :-)

"Heard an exhaled: �Dammit.�"

LOL! Vegeta can *try* but apparently, he can't resist :-) I love this! Expressive :-)

"Goku considered this for a moment as he pushed inside of his mate."

Arrgh! You're killing me with the imagery...but what a way to go :-)

Freiza...ROTFL! I love the way Goku's mind works! And he's right, I don't think Freiza has the necessary equipment either, if he does, he hid it well. LOL!

Absolutely loved the way Vegeta shook him out of his thoughts...he has definitely adapted well to his additional parts ;-)

What can I say about that lemon? Everything and nothing...It was superb and it took my breath away! You are the queen of lemons! It's not just about the sex, the feelings that drives the two lovers into each others arms are so well expressed, their absolute need for each other. Wonderful!

No need for apologies about the lateness, gee, you update at a beautiful pace! Sorry you're not feeling well...something definitely seems to be going around. I haven't got the sneezies but I was as sick as a dog and last night a whopper of a headache set in...which is why I myself reviewed this story later than the rest...I barely finished revig "g "Even more of us" and was ready for bed.

Once again, I seem to be all okay. I hope you get better soon. and everyone else who is feeling under the weather too!

LOL! Loved the dialogue at the end. "Vegeta: I liked it." "Gk: well, peachy for you!"

"...Although some times its har mak make him the appropriate level of sulky without making him whiny."

You do it well! He's not whiny at all :-)

"...(no kidding, they gave me like twenty six books by the same author and told me I should read them, and then I had to because I said I would. Sheesh.)"

LOL! I'm a voracious reader myself, and my 'favourite authors' list ranges far and wide, but if I don't like an author, there's no way I could read 26 of their books... I hope that you find them an enjoyable read. :-)

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