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Reviews for Hormone Therapy

By : CardDragonBall

From ANON - Getarian on March 05, 2004
Okay, I think it might work now, I have removed the two as ons on either side of the partial quote from CardDragonBall's reply. This is where it always seemed to mess up - just didn't connect to my brain straight away. CardDragonBall, if there is anywayremoremove my blunders, then my embarassment factor should drop dramatically :-) Onto the review:

"* well, I could, but that would give it away * so I suppose you�ll have to endure the lemons until we figure out why Goku�s so horny."

LOL! Sigh, well if I *must* I suppose I'll have to just put up with them...oh, the hardship ;-)

Loved this chapter! The only thing missing was the sex, but I guess I can wait until the next chapter :-)

It seems to me that Vegeta seemed to blittlittle disturbed by the fact that Goku wasn't jumping his bones. Who'da thunk that the Ouji would stop a spar to enquire about sex? Methinks he may be protesting too much ;-)

OTOH: Why doesn't Goku seem as interested? Surely no one could ever get enough of Vegeta? Goku did seem a little twitchy though, but he's just giving his mate a rest, right? Right?

I love Goku's paranoia where Bulma is concerned, although, she does seem to pop up only when the Prince is alone :-)
I loved Goku's little taste test on his mate, very cunning and way cute.

"Goku was feelingnaninanimous-and very proud that he even knew how to pronounce that word" LOL! Loved this!

I wonder how long Vegeta is going to be able to hold out on his threat if Goku can't learn more discretion where their sex life is concerned...should be fun to see.

Let the games begin :-)
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From ANON - CrazyGurl on March 05, 2004
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Vegeta is PART woman!!!!?!?!?!? Has hell frozen over, melted, and froze over again creating the most deadly of icicles which one has stabbed me through the heart??? Ok not really that dramatic, this story is F*CKING FUNNY!!!!! Veggies comment on sex in the air, just great, priceless comedy. ::bows to you:: If only I could be half as funny as you.
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From ANON - Hecate18 on March 05, 2004
*Ha ha* Vegeta makes great woman!!!
That chap was great! Goku really does need to learn to be discreet doesn't he!

Sorry I haven't reviewed, so my review for all the chaps so far would be...
THIS STORY'S F*CKING GREAT!!!

Looking forward to your next update! ^_^
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From ANON - jaygoose on March 05, 2004
Once again, fucking hilarious. I wish that I wrote things this funny. I usually can come up with funny dialogue but by the time I type it up. It isn't near as funny as it was when I first thought of it. Hmm. Anyway. I can't wait for the next part. I love how Vegeta thinks that he is the one in control. He's so cute when he's oblivious. :)
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 05, 2004
ROFL!!!!!!! that chap was so funny!!!! I lost it when Goku asked Vegeta if he ever had sex in the air and Vegeta responds by thinking Oh yes, he thought dryly, everday. Sometimes twice. That was great...although sex in the air might not be so bad...

When Krillen comes and says do what...I lost it again... Goku's lack of discretion cracks me up!!!! Poor Vegeta...
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From ANON - Ladylupin on March 05, 2004
What's up with Kakarot? Did the rabbit die?
Good chapter, post MORE!!!
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 04, 2004
Ok, ytryitrying to kill me aren't you!?!?!? I just about died when Goku kept saying mine, mine, mine, etc.... AHHHHHH!!!! I love it sooo much! Oh and I was laughing so hard when you wrote Vegeta tried to kill her with just his thoughts...how cute!!! I wish Goku did just kill ChiChi, but I know Gohan needs her and bla bla bla....
Anywho great chappie!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Ladylupin on March 04, 2004
Sex, Drugs and Male Pregnancy. What more could a girl possably ask for? Good story, write more!
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From ANON - Getarian on March 04, 2004
Ah bliss. I came back here to lighten my mood and found that you have updated already...and two chapters for 'More of us' I'm in heaven :-) I just got through reading a story where Bulma cheated on Vegeta with Goku and I'm not a happy camper, when it comes to het fics, I'm V/B all the way. I need your story so I won't hate Goku or Bulma anymore...and this was a godsend :-)

Starters, I had the hugest happy grin all the way through this one, I love horny Goku, poor Vegeta...sex every two hours, I'm surprised he can still stand let alwalkwalk...thank God for Saiyan physiology...*chuckles*

A fertility drug for Vegeta? Hmmm, I hope Bulma knows what she's doing...Goku may not be so much as interested in impregnating Vegeta as just screwing him silly...he has alot of years to make up for. LOL 'sides, Vegeta is delectable ;-)

Suspicious and Jealous Goku is wonderful...Bulma had better watch her step :-)

Genius Goku is a complete crack up...I love his way around giving Vegeta his much needed extra 2 hours, whilst not actually having to go through the wait himself. ROTFL

Ahh, that glorious lemon! I love the way you write the sexual interaction between our two Saiyans. ChiChi really knows how to stick her nose in at the wrong time, doesn't she? Vegeta's attempt to kill her with thoughts alone was hilarious. Totally love possessive Goku.

Oh dear, poor Vegeta, now Yamcha knows as well...still, gotta love Vegeta's equally territorial nature, Yamcha's gotta learn to look away when a naked Goku is present. *chuckles*

Need more, but will patiently wait 'cause you're so good with the updates already. *hugs*

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From ANON - Getarian on March 03, 2004
Hot! Very Hot! Lots of hot Saiyan sex, even with female parts added, Vegeta is still the number one hottie :-)

Goku is a scream. Now I know why Goku kept wandering in the series...having sex with ChiChi is like a hand j LOL LOL

I loved how Goku was considering messing with Vegeta and flustering him, but decided against it 'cause it would only delay the sex...Vegeta created a monster when he decided to show Goku that sex could be good...even if the poor guy was driven to it by mating hormones...heh heh heh.

I cracked up when all Bulma said to Vegeta w"So."So..." and Vegeta responded with "Shut up, woman" That's the Vegeta I know and love :-)

I'm pleased that Bulma at least felt bad enough to give a hint to Vegeta as to how he could possibly prevent that total compulsion to obey Goku...although, I am going to miss some aspects of that :-)

As for discretion not being Goku's strong suit...good, I am so hoping for some fun in that area ;-)

You're the best!
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From ANON - jaygoose on March 03, 2004
Ok, now that was damned hilarious. I love the way that Goku's mind works. And Vegeta's is even funnier. I love this one. But I still can't decide which one is better. So I won't. You know I totally forgot about ChiChi. Hmm. Wonder what she will think of this.
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 03, 2004
Ok....maybe it was a bad idea to read this while I am still in class. I was again laughing and fainting! My friend thinks I'm insane. I loved the part about the cataclysmic battle *shakes head* I need to calm down. When Goku thought what is Vegeta going to to with this alleged time, I was nearly falling out of my chair. These are the two hottest saiyajins in the world, and they only get hotter when I read your fics!
You always have sme nice and juicy lemons, that make me die and wish I was Goku...uh..except I'd still be a girl, so nevermind I don't wish I was Goku, I just wish I could have sex with the OUJI!!!!!!!

Well I am happy and sad that Vegeta doesn't have to be totally obdediant to Goku...as much as I was turned on by that it just wasnt fair to Geta.

I love the little notes between Goku and Vegeta that you always have at the end of your stories, they are very funny!
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From ANON - Getarian on March 03, 2004
Woo Hoo! Another update. You're the best :-)

I am so loving the way Goku is turning out. 'Can we do it again, now?' Can't blame him, Vegeta is such a turn on ;-)

'Better than food' For Goku...the ultimate compliment.

I love how he realised that Vegeta still had his 'male needs' seeing to, and wanted to do that for him. So sweet, yet still, at the same time, he really just wanted to get back to the 'nicer part.' So Goku :-)

Goku is so protective of Vegeta now, wonderful! I love a dominant, possessive and protective Goku where Vegeta is concerned. :-)

Goku is turning out to be quite the horny little bugger and I love this...feed his mate, then ask for sex. Dinner and sex. LOL Still, the completely open way that Goku is about sex, I can see some pretty embarrassing situations for Vegeta if he doesn't learn to look around before asking. LOL!

Keep it coming :-)
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on March 03, 2004
!!!!!! ch2 was so hilarious! I loved it! but I do have to admit I am a preggy Veggie hater...but I liked your other fic soooo much, I couldn't resist, I had to read! Needless to say I wasn't dissapointed. I just loooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeee dominant Goku, I love Vegeta being protected! *sticks tongue out at everyone who hates dominant Goku* It's just so sexy! Like when he says he doesn't want anyone seeing or sniffing his mate, I could sooooooo picture him saying that...especially as a super saiyajin. He just looks, so dominant and in control when he is like that. Like the evil kid baga,aga, I think in episodes 263, or 264 and there is this lightning behind him...*drools* he is sooo hot! but VEGETA IS HOTTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well you are corrupting all my morals of hating preggy Veggie...even though he isnt pregnant yet...but I love this fic too much to stop reading it! So update soon!
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From ANON - jaygoose on March 02, 2004
I really like this. It's good to see the other side without it seeming to much like the other story. Poor Vegeta! I can't decided which one of the fics is funnier. So I won't. Great fic. This one might even have more 'Banging' than the other one. Cool.
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