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Reviews for Hormone Therapy

By : CardDragonBall
  • From Amara_Sakae_ on June 17, 2018

    Where is the rest of chapter 12


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  • From ANON - Ariel on February 06, 2013
    The hell is wrong with this story?! There are all kinds of weird symbols or weird things. What is up with that?
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  • From ANON - XxJinxTheCatxX on February 15, 2012
    Ummm...I'm not too sure if it was part of your plan or not, but chapters 11 and 12 are blank? I don't want to start reading chapter 13 until I'm sure it is next to be read. Please reply to this when you can, as I am very anxious to continue reading this story in the correct sequence. ^_^ I am enjoying it greatly, otherwise.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on January 10, 2011
    Half the chapters seem to be corrupted D: I would looove to read this story many times more, but can't with it the way it is now....
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2007
    Hey, I went against your advice and read Cross-Eyed before this one, simply 'cause I'm crazy about Goten x Trunks, but after I read I just became too curious to read this one, you being a wonderful writer and all.

    I didn't use to like m-preg, I guess I still don't but now I know that it doesn't make a story less fun, and I enjoyed this one pretty much, the only thing I thought it was weird is not even about the story, it's just that... I didn't see the part about the birth. My internet explorer is crazy or did something happen? 'Cause it just went from

    "Vegeta opened his eyes, looked at his mate. Who was pointing at Vegeta. More specifically at his legs."

    to

    "Having seen what his sons would be like, Goku was astounded to find that they were perfectly peacefully little babies."

    and while reading some reviews I realized that I actually missed the birth part, I knew you wouldn't leave that part out of it. Now I know that it's been almost four years you wrote this, and I don't even know if you still hang around this site anymore, but if there's anyway you might tell me what happened or if I can find the full story somewhere I'd apreciate very much.

    Great story, I'm off to read the others now.

    Nana
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  • From Lici on June 27, 2007
    Having babies is very messy...

    And you are only insane if people point at you and stare because you are only wearing underwear...on your head. Other than that, "normal" is only relative. And sane is not real.
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  • From ANON - Michiru Loves Haruka on November 30, 2005
    bwahahahaha.. Goodness this is hilarious, sooooo funny *chuckles* Goku can be such a baka
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  • From ANON - Mikai on November 05, 2005
    Ah, the great pastime of Chichi Bashing...how could I forget it? You know, at first I didn't like her, now I just dispise her character completely...

    oh! And poor Goku! Sex is a great thing! If he couldn't enjoy it...think of the catastraphies!!! At least Vegeta taught him how to do it RIGHT!! And Bulma! that devil...*smirks* I admire her brain power, and bravery. Like anyone in their sane mind would give THAT to Vegeta. Prince of All Saiyans, etc...

    Heh..I quite enjoyed this fic...And I read the other sequels(except Cross-Eyed, but that was before i realized it went into the group of Therapies). It took me from Tuesday Morning til Saturday evening(mind you, I had no work to do...)

    Anyhow, I just thought I'd let you know how much I enjoyed that fics, and the others, but I'll go review those too!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 19, 2005
    its sad that he doesn't give a fuck about gohan. talk about being a bad father!
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  • From on June 20, 2005
    O_O.....If Vegeta is part girl now is it still considered slash? Hmmm? I found this story rather disturbing as apposed to humerouse. (Don't know if I spelled it right) ((Not a flame. simply my opinions.))
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  • From ANON - bunnicle on June 16, 2005
    oh, love it! but is it done? yes, no? if so, that means i can get on to the next part but if not, HURRY UP!
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  • From ANON - malcara on November 03, 2004
    well i've allready read all of the "more of us" stories and i was waiting till i reached a story that wasnt completed but that doesnt seem to be happening anytime soon so i'll just make my presence known and say that i've thoroughly enjoyed all the fics i've read so far (more of us series and hormone therepy) and i'm looking forward to reading more. i've written 2 fics of my own that are (as of yet) incomplete i havent published them anywhere yet because they are not finished and i have a bad habit of re-editing over and over again(yeah i'm a bit of a perfectionist) but should u be interested i could send them to u (i'm desperate for feedback, which is strange since i havent published them i seem not likely to get feedback,but i'm lazy and dont get much time to write so i'd prefer not to be cruel and keep readers waiting for months) one is DBZ the other is original......this is a long review......anyway i loved more of us(and its various sequels) although it was a bit confusing after the 12th kid but i think my favorite part was the little notes at the end they were hilarious. Mercedes lackey is my favorite author and the last herald mage trilogy are my favorite books by her i also like lyyn flewelling and.......i read too much....i should end this now.....its turning into a babble.
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  • From ANON - Lady Blue on August 11, 2004
    Goku: *points* That's mine.
    Vegeta: ......
    Goku: But it is!
    Vegeta: *shakes head despnglyngly*

    Oh, this was nice. Me liked the sex, especially. Lemony lemonish lemons, for the lemon'd lemon-lemon devourer of lemons. Lemon. Wow. If you say lemon that many times, it stops sounding like a real word. Anyways, I really liked the sex. And I really liked Goku's sort of he-man attitude. And I liked the lemon. A lot. Lemony lemon. Man, I'm going lemon. I mean nuts. Ah, heck.
    If you want to make me really happy, you'll have to continue this someday. I love lemons. And lemons love me... 0.o; Er, on the other hand, Goku sort of pissed me off sometimes. What with his whole, stupidness. I felt like Vegeta... "He may be an idiot, but he's MY idiot, and god, he's great in bed." *pouts childishly*. Why oh why was the Chichi squishing so short? I wanted her to suffer, yesh, precious, suffer...
    Mercedes Lackey? Dude, I have all those books too. Vanyel and Tylendel/whoever that redhead thing was rocked the socks off of me. Hotness. And of course the gayer than gay Hawkbrothers, "Moondance" and "starsomething". Hey, Vanyel, I like ya, I think I'll snog you in the tub. Kay, nice meetin ya! Hm? My name? Well, I decided that if I couldn't get gayer *physically*....
    Hah, Moondance, my darling little bishounen. *huggles imaginary bishie* Er.. don't mind me, just sort of... you know... hugging the not-there guy.... oh come on, we all do it, don't we?! *crickets chirp* Oh. well. In my opinion, Mercedes Lackey could have used a little lemon there, with Vannie and his lifemat An Another good author for yummy slashy stuff is Tanya Huff. Yum. Slash. Less romance, but man the angst the angst the angst. So hawt. *drools* *cough* *choke* *awkwardly sponges up the drool* No one saw that.
    Heh. You write nice lemon. How many times have I said it? Oh well. Not gonna bother countin. Too long. Much better to just worship at your feet. I loved the way you managed to develop the baka's personality without making him learn long words, like "modesty" or "abstinence". And I love how Vegeta is still a bitter, mean old bastard to everyone, even a little bit to Kakarott. Yeah! That's my boy! Go get em! *slaps geta on the back* Never quit leaving the sour taste in their mouths, m'laddo. It's so you.
    Ho hum. Gah, to think that I might have skipped this... lemony goodness.... *shudders* Well, luv ya, bye bye!
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  • From AJAngelique on June 03, 2004
    bwahahahahahahahaha! That was great! I can't wait to read more fo your work KEEP IT UP MAN
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  • From ANON - MrsSesshoumaruJaganshi on April 16, 2004
    I am declaring myself your biggest fan. More of us and its sequel were great and this is just too hilarious. It took me a while to deal with Vegeta's submissiveness, people have actually been banned from my house for not respecting the Prince of all apa-- I mean Saiyans. Keep up the goodwork, I have more of your story to read. : )

    ~Angel
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