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Reviews for Much Like Suffocating

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - macha on May 19, 2004
    That was a sad and scary tale that Goten told to Trunks. The gist of it being, Bardock, trying to prevent the futuresaw,saw, ended up making it happen. I guess even foreseers have their downfalls, ne?

    Ah, to have the abilities of a telekanetic lover. That would be wonderful.

    I can see/feel how Bulma is reacting to having Chi Chi babysit her. She is a grown cat woman after all. I am glad she is using her idel time with thinking about the voice on the ship.

    Yah, I missed Vegeta and Goku, but this was still a very good chapter, as always.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 19, 2004
    Oww...pieces of the puzzle. Cool...it had almost forgotten that this story actually had a plot. That a good thing when you don't even miss the plot. Because when there is a plot that means that the story will end...and i don't want it to end...its too good.

    What's up with Chi and Bulma anyway? *grins evilly*
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  • From ANON - EleneK on May 19, 2004
    I still love this fic. But then again I happen to really like darker fics.

    At least the little wimp was honest. (At this point, his only good trait.) ----- Just when I thought he was getting a spine too. He really needs to come up with something else to do. As it is he’s just wasting air. I know, I know, you’ve got something planned and I should just be patient.

    I think it’s cool that Chi Chi has a maternal instinct and is taking care of Bulma, especially s she she couldn’t care less about anybody else. It’s always fun when you find such behaviors in the most unexpected places.

    Yeah!!!! Bardock’s motives are made clear, mostly at least. I’m sure your plot monster is still keeping stuff hidden but … “Bardock really does love Goku. And he really hates him. It’s the most stunning paradox I have ever seen.” ----- That’s just a cool statement. Why doesn’t Bardock see Trunks or Goten. If the visions were gifts from the Saiyan gods, then that would mean that either the gods don’t find them important, which is hard to believe since the Juro Gods seem to take great pleasure in torturing Goten (Which in itself almost makes you wonder if Saiyan gods are mad at the Juro Gods for messing with their subject and are helping keep Goten alive just to piss their counterparts off. After all, which sets of gods are the demis responsible to anyway? The theology is just mind-boggling.), they are being shielded, or Bardock is not paying enough attention to all his visions (although why he would trust visions he can easily change I don’t know). I’ll shut upon this subject now before I give myself a headache.

    ing ing forward to reading more tomorrow.

    -El

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  • From DietDirtyPop on May 19, 2004
    Ok I so guessed (but didn't say anything) that Gohan was part Ice-jin GO ME :) any who I brought that up to bring this up. If you can;t figure something out (in the case of the kitten hehe) Blame Gohan. Yeah that's it Just blame Gohan. Bradock (SP) hired his Grandson to build that thing with the help of a ummm errr CAT and they used Let me see here hmmm *scratches head* OH OH They used Ice-jin material and it was uhhh ommm ehhh Designed by a Juro and ahhhh the placement in ship was uhhh errr BY THE SPIDERS! ok probably not but hey you never know hehe well you most likly do I just don't. HEHE

    ~*Noel*~
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  • From ANON - angry monkey on May 19, 2004
    Count Fudgular- Blewh, I vant to suck your fudge! (Hmm- I can see were this could go) Lemon Fudge?
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  • From ANON - macha on May 18, 2004
    Two, two lemons! Ah Ah Ah Ah.

    Very daring of Vegeta to touch Goku after he was all icy cold from his washing.

    I think it is adorable the way Chi Chi thinks of Bulma as 'her' kitten.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on May 18, 2004
    Finally Vegeta can overcome the nighmares of Freeza.

    Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 18, 2004
    Oww...two lemons for the price of one. This be a joyous occassion! Me oveactiacting again. Heh...Heh...Anyway, Goku is truely an amazing man. Still being able to preform after taking the mother of cold showers. Heh...Heh...
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  • From ANON - macha on May 17, 2004
    *does a dance* Frieza is dead! Wahooooooo! *gets suddenly serious, and rubs hands together* "Is Bardock next?"

    Weird sort of sympathy dream that the Juro Gods gave to Goten. The wording in this chapter made it seem like they do that often.

    I like Chi Chi's peoples custom of bring the head of the defeated. It may have given Vegeta some of that closure that he was worrying about, and no one can get the bright idea to try to cyborg Frieza back together.

    No Bulma and no Krillin, I understand that they wouldn't have much to do with what is currently going on, and really, the time frame isn't much more than a couple of hours.


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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 17, 2004
    Eww...Frieza's head. That is extremely creepy. I am glad to find out that there wasn't really a choice for our Saiyan Prince. Oddly it make me feel a bit better about the whole thing.

    Aww...poor Gohan...*rolls eyes*...sure having your pet frog blowed up by your daddy is a good reason to be a traitorous ass clown. But I'm sure there's more, right?
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  • From ANON - macha on May 16, 2004
    So the Juro Gods, dare I say it, jealous of Goten's power? Hmmmm, interesting.

    *brings pom poms out for fferfferent occasion* Go Goku, beat his ass to a bloody pulp! (Okay, lousy cheer, but I was never really a cheerleader, I just like the pom poms!)

    Really smart of Chi Chi and Trunks to yse their cooling abilities to slow the flow of Goten's blood.

    I hope that Vegeta can make SSJ.
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  • From ANON - Ferret on May 15, 2004
    And I quote from disclaimer, section B:

    "ALL RIGHTY. *rubs hands together and looks up terms for the list of warnings: * Sadly, this is AU, but folks, don’t run away already screaming. You can read it. I swear It’ll be chocked full of lemony goodness. LEMONS (Not talking about the fruit here, either. I’m talking about the sex ones; although how did it come to be a ‘lemon’ anyway?) Homosexuality (er…duh.) Also (warnings I’ve never useforefore! Gasp): bondage, shady professions, and graphic descriptions. (Hopefully graphic anywho.) Also, dirty language doubtlessly. DARK. BAD THINGS HAPPEN HERE FOLKS."

    Or to be more specific...:

    "...I swear It’ll be chocked full of lemony goodness..."

    ...

    Thmon mon countage has gotten too low... viewers need smut! *crosses her arms and pouts* DON'T U EVER LISTEN TO YOUR BISHIES!? >_
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 15, 2004
    Me favorite story...did I tell you that? Anywho, Bardock is the worst fucking father that I have ever heard of. I am glad that Goten kept the ass clown Frieza from telling Goku that. It made me so sad. *sigh* I glad you're stretching out the bastard death too. He so deserves it. Also very DBZ.
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  • From ANON - EleneK on May 14, 2004
    Soon, he would face Bardock, enslaver of Juro, and he would call down the Juro Gods to free the minds that Bardock held, to rip away whatever protections the asshole had taken from the unthinking of his kind that lived in their pit of hell. ----- And Krillin gets a spine. It’s about damn time too.

    felt the bones crack (referring to Freiza’s tail) ----- Yummy. *did I mention that I was sick and liked torture?* Go Goku *shivers with delight*

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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 14, 2004
    Oww...Goku is kicking ass and he's so cocky about it. I love a cocky Goku. Heh, Heh...okay that was just terrible, I know. The end notes was cute too.
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