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Reviews for Ancient History: The Forgotten Past of the Saiyans

By : cueball2
  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 02, 2004
    Hmm...so that was what was wrong with Trunks. In a way its funny, but when poor Goten finds out...it going to be quite embarassing.

    I had a feeling that was what was going to happen with ChiChi and Goku...good now we can get on with the Vegeta/Kaki loving.
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  • From ANON - Card on May 02, 2004
    Aw, Goku fell off his chair. *picks Goku up and dusts him off * Wow, I actually don't hate Chichi. *is very shocked * She seemed slightly rational. *scared *

    Yeah! Our favorite Saiyans are thinking of one another!! Yeah! *shoves Goku and Vegeta together * I do feel bad for poor Goku crying, though.

    And... So *thats* why Trunks is being mean to Goten. (Or else ignoring him. ) Poor dear, his little virgin senses have been offended. *pats Trunks, hands him a picture of Goten and locks him in a room filled with aphrodisacs * Yep, a few weeks in there ought to straighten him out.

    Now, back to the seriousness. "Tip of the iceberg" o.O? Oh no! What's this secret that Vegeta doesn't know about the Saiyan's history? And the hooded people? And when are we going to see the rest of the iceberg? *looks pitiful * You'll update soon, right? *more pitiful *

    Alright, I'll leave you alone. (But only because you just updated. )
    ~Card!~
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 02, 2004
    Interesting ficcy...I am waiting impatiently to find out what ChiChi has to talk to Goku about. And what's up with Trunks? I can't wait to find out.
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  • From ANON - Naruto_Kenshin on April 30, 2004
    Just read your fic and I love it. Seems like some exciting stuay bay be happening next. I hate Frieza. But I do wonder who those two people were in the cloaks at the end and how theyjust disappeared. Time traavelers maybe. Now I will be wondering.
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 30, 2004
    Sorry I didn't review...*feels very bad*
    I didn't notice that you had updated or I definately would have reviewed.

    I am reminded of the grip of his Royal Assness, the one that has his scaly hands wrapped around the very foundations of my kingdom.--while I found the royal assness part to be very funny. I really liked this line and thought it to be full of depth, just the very thought of that thing ruling the saiyajin kingdom is disturbing.

    Yes fate does seem to be fairly cruel. That is horrible that Seika went into labor at that time. I have very bad feeling about this.

    Right in front of the Lizard Prince.--like that...lizard prince...

    'One day' she thought. 'You will die by your own pride.' --oh wow, really loved that. And it is so true well at least it is on dbz...as for how he dies in this fic I have no clue. Either way this line was very powerful.

    Two hooded figures appeared in the hall and put a small device on the King's brain dead body, surrounding it with a thin barrier of energy, and the three of them vanished jewels and all.--hm...who are they and what is that about...*is very very interested*

    I really hate Frieza, but then again I always have.
    Great fic! Update soon! ^.^

    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Card on April 28, 2004
    Guilt! Guilt have I!

    I haI had seen this chapter was up and I did not review! *sobs brokenly over this depressing development.* I am sorry.

    Onto the review!~

    Er. Freeza's a bastard. (Hate him!~) Poor Queen. Gasp, Vegeta had an older sister? Poor Queen again. Poor female Saiyans... *sigh* Who were the hooded folks? What happened to them. Where did they disappear?!

    (I hate Zarbon, he just...makes me all *Blech*) Oooo~ No fair you just left it there like that. I want another chapter. Right now!

    Now!

    Riiiiiiiiight.... Okay, I guess I'll wait. But only because I'm such a nice per


    Keep up the good work.
    ~Card!~
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  • From CardDragonBall on April 25, 2004
    Curiousity not satisfied. More curious now.

    Poor Goku and his poor neglected erection. *pats Goku on the back as he gobbles down pancakes, unaware that his wife is FINALLY going to tell him its over. *

    Why is Trunks giving Goten the silent treatment?

    New Hampshire, never been there. Went tstonston once. Didn't understand much of what they said, and that was fine because they didn't understand me either. Got to love those accents.

    Anyway! I need more now. Go forth and write. *sits patiently and taps fingers against computer desk waiting for more to be delivered. * I'm waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiting.
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on April 24, 2004
    Finally!!! I have been trying to post this review for like 20 minutes...kept saying too many connections on line 11 or something...
    Anyway..here I am to review!!! YAY!!!!

    'Why do I let myself be so affected by him?' I ask myself in my mind, with a frown on my face. 'Even in my sleep.' I push the annoying thoughts aside, rinsing my hair.--Because Goku, you love him silly...or at least I hope thats what it is!

    He bent down, picked up the cold bar and pressed it against his member, drawing out another gasp. It worked. No more erection. --LoL...aww as soon as he thinks of Vegeta he will just have another one...^.^

    (she considered herself the 'proper' one and thus slept in them.) ---uh..proper..replace proper with bitch then that sentence will be right..hehe now Vegeta he is proper. j/k I don't really hate ChiChi I just find her very annoying in the show, in this fic she is perfectly fine...

    I open the freezer, the cold air chilling --I liked that chilling air for chilling thoughts...very nice..

    Well it is nice to see..that so far your ChiChi character is normal and not a crazy screaming biotch...but I may have spoke to soon I am not to sure...
    Anyway that was a great chap and I enjoyed it very much. Loved your pov changes...

    yeah I do want to know how Bra was concieved but I Am a patient gal...I cant wait...
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterf on March 03, 1920
    Great start...
    and a very interesting POV, I don't think I have read a fic w/ a pov quite like this in a while.

    Rinsing off the the body wash she realized that there was no mark from Vegeta in the conception of Bra.--hm? I wonder why that is?

    Bra's teacher definately posed a lovely question. I can't help but wonder if that was just for humor b/c she knows what it is like to have a tail, or is that a forshadowing of somekind...or maybe both.

    But just as quickly as it came, he squashed it ---*gasp* No...Vegeta don't squash! You MUST think of Kakarott...*whispers to Vegeta* you must have hot sex with Kakarott...

    Anywho I will be waiting for your update....

    ^.*

    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Card on April 22, 2004
    That's right, 'Geta; think of Kakarot~! Think of him all the time!

    Okay, now that that is out of my system. *cough * Interesting... don't like that substitute feller. Like Bra though. Hope she beats the crap out of that kid that said that very rude thing about giving him her tail. As if buddy.

    Anywho. I liked it. Hope to see more of it. As soon as writerly possible.

    Want to know why Vegeta was thinking of my favorite Saiyan.

    *sits and waits patiently for next chappie *
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  • From ANON - KagomeSango on April 22, 2004
    Hey you are doing a good job so far keep up the good work ok ^_^ !
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