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Reviews for Saiyan Enlightenment

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on May 17, 2004
    Chapter 3

    Reading this was somehwat depressing...but not in a bad way.
    I felt very sad. Especially when reading from Goku's POV it is so interesting.
    Just how he feels and what he is going through, how truly hard this is for him.

    He did not want to make people bleed, he did not want to feel Vegeta struggling for his freedom under him he didn’t want to use his mate that way and he absolutely refused to do it. --very emotional...written so well. You really are wonderful at capturing the essence of emotion. This fic just ...ugh...it is so heart wrenching. I love it.

    The truth was, he didn’t know. He had no idea if he controlled it or somehow, but never being part of him, it controlled him.--that is a scary thought.

    “Now its time to figure out if you can handle yourself. There is nothing you have ever done that makes you a bad Saiyan.” --that made me smile. This relnshinship is beautiful..and is probably on of the best portrayals of a yaoi v/g relationship that I have ever read. I love how Vegeta continues to support Goku and vice versa it's just real. I love how neither one of them run away and hide from each other or their feelings...but instead this fic deals with something on a whole other level...real problems, a real relationship...and the task at hand (Goku struggling with his saiyajin side) is just great to read about.

    Because this problem wasn't solved in 3 chapters...it is an actual struggle and you go in depth when it is Goku's POV...just excellent...

    This fic drives me insane and I try to save this one for last when I read fics b/c I love it soo much this one and the one before it The Meaning of Pride.

    So far, their tiontionship had withstood every stone thrown at it, but Goku wasn’t sure if it would survive this. Knew that if it did, than it was forever. --I honestly think it can...but then again I am not the writer. I just think this relationship is unbreakable. But in the instance that I am wrong and itaks aks that should be very heartbreaking and interesting to read about.

    Goku ran his fingers across those scars, ran them down his chest, over his stomach, wrapped his fingers around the erection, watched Vegeta look at him. Watched the way he didn’t say anything but he trusted him. Really did. And it was painful to know that, and to realize that Goku didn’t even trust himself. --wow, I loved that..love how comfotable they are with each other. And to know Vegeta trusts him but he doesn't even trust himself, that is a powerful statement...and gosh *shakes fist at you* I just can not believe how much I love this. It make me all watery eyed...

    Vegeta: MoP Chapter 18.--LMAO!!!

    Beautiful chapter....
    I am off to read the others...

    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - macha on May 17, 2004
    Ouuuh, it's getting closer, isn't it? Blacking out during the fight seems like Goku is letting his insticts take more control. Will he ever be able to work WITH his insticts, instead of just blacking out? Dominating Vegeta wouldn't be all that much fun if he couldn't remember what he had done in the morning. (or maybe I just have a strange sense of fun?)

    Trunks not wanting to have babies? What's he thinking? Is Bra really a poop machine, or does he just not know how to change a cubs diaper?

    Bulma's timing was FUNNY.


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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 17, 2004
    Wow...I loves me and good fight. Poor Goku, what Gohan said is really bothering him.

    I feel for Trunks though, I had to gooughough the same things when my brother was a baby. I don't recall having to throw away that many shirts though.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on May 17, 2004
    More!More! More!
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  • From on May 17, 2004
    Wow....GO GOKU!!! ^_^ Bring out the Saiyan in you. Really cool chapter. Oh and my computer seems to be working better now but i'm still gonna have it looked at just incase. As usual i can't find and thing really to say about the chapter since you always do them so well i'm at a loss for words. lol. But i can't wait till the next chap, i'm practicly bouncing off the walls for it, i wanna know whats gonna happen next. Well gotta go, Ja ne!
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  • From Lenora on May 17, 2004
    *gasp* Goku wasn't thinking of sex??? *facefaults* I never thought I'd see that day. more!
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  • From ANON - macha on May 16, 2004
    *smirks* I showed up, but they didn't see me watching! Nice lemon.

    Seems as though Vegeta wants to hurry this process along. *thinks for a moment* Can't say as I blame him. *drools thinking about a dominating Goku*

    *tries to shake self out of thoughts*

    Sorry, can't help it.

    *still drooling*
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  • From on May 15, 2004
    ~Kicks the computer~ "And if you ever do that again i'll do worse". ^_^ Well its working now, hopefully it will for a few more days. It needs a look at by our own prefesiocompcomputer exspert. LOL acturly he's a friend who offers to help us with the computer if we need it. Anyway to the chapter, very nice chap, wonderfull lemon and great Vegeta thoughts about Bra and what he would tell her if she asked what he did on day day she was born. ^_^ Very nice. Well can't wait till the next chap,
    Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 15, 2004
    Oww....Oww...Oww! That was really nice! I can appriciate Goku's concern though, Vegeta was being very mean. Waving his 'happy time' in his face like that and then snatching it away. Bad Geta! Anywho, Goku does have the wierdest timing..."So what's her name?" you don't mention a man's new born daughter right after he's fucked you silly. But oddly enough Goku makes it seem effortless. Gotta love that Goku.
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  • From on May 14, 2004
    Ok i'm frustrated and ive tried reviewing this chapter to many times alread. Stuid screwy computer. Since this is taking so long i can't really say much exsept that this was a good chap and its nice to see Bra entering the world. ^_^ Well gotta go, Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 14, 2004
    Well, that was a very nice chapter. Have I ever told you that I love the way you write. You have a wierd way of sliding in small details that don't make the chapters seem over stuffed. Did that make sense. Hmm...Anyway, I like the way Goku thinks...especially when he thinks about Vegeta. It's so cute.

    And yes, I did mean fan fic writing. :)
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on May 13, 2004
    Yes! Angst and babies...er baby. My favorite comb am am so tired. So much more reading and writing to do. Sorry for the short review. *waves and runs off*
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  • From cueball2 on May 13, 2004
    The door opened and a nurse came in, all-cheerful and ‘Hello, I have only air in my head’ like. Stopped stock-still at the newcomers that hadn’t checked in at the desk and stared quite blatantly at Kakarot who was just there, showing off how muscular and attractive he was.

    “HELLO!” Bulma shouted. “PREGNANT WOMAN IN LABOR HERE!”

    Turseurse snapped out of her little trance (which was good because Vegeta was going to smack her and his mate for not smacking her sooner) and went back to the cheerful little grin. Went over to Bulma’s side, looked at the print out of the heartbeats and patted Bulma happily. “You’re doing fine dear.” She scooted back out of the room, pausing a moment to look at Kakarot once more, and then departed with a giggle. ROFL

    It seems we think alike. Anyway I just ejoy reading your stories.

    Sorry I didn't revew every chapter, but I get rather busy sometimes.
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  • From ANON - Plyric on May 12, 2004
    mini angst fest? You are too funny! Poor Kakarot, next thing you know, he'll drag Goten fishing or hunting. Ah! Could you imagine Goten attempting to hunt... anything? Besides Trunks, that is! Or better yet, Vegeta could accidentally overhear Trunks and Goten talking about the effects of ecstasy on their love life and decide to try it out on Kakarot right before their next spar... THAT would cure Kaky of his inhibited Saiyan instinct, or rather, his contoverover it. J/k, j/k!!! Either way, ENCORE ENCORE! =)
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  • From on May 12, 2004
    Just pretend that 9 months has passed, i agree that it hasent been long enough really, but hey who cares anything can happen in anime. ^_^ Can't beleve Goten talks as much as a rambaling woman,lol. And Vegeta can't really blame those ladys from looking, is is one sexy Saiyan that deserves to be Appreciated. ^_^; Well can't wait till the next chap,Ja ne!
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