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Reviews for Saiyan Enlightenment

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - Macha on July 02, 2004
    Well, I guess if he wanted to be with Goten when Goten's time came to be dominate it was probably better to experience uke this way than later.

    Of course, I liked the chapter. I was a wonderful lemon. Goten was very nice and gental with a very nervous Trunks.


    And you didn't smell plot when Vegeta thought something about Radditz possibly having a child somewhere? Well, okay, I guess I am still getting use to the different smells. Let me know when I should be smelling plot though, so I know what to look/sniff for.
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  • From on July 02, 2004
    HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~ ~Is now fully awake and grining~ FINALY!!!! Trunks finaly got to be uke, i'm glad about that. Now Goten can finaly have a nice easy dominating time when it happens. Gohan better be using this time to be thinking productevly, otherwise i will have to hit him on the head. ~Brings out her mallet to show she is seriose~ Well gotta go, thanks for the pillow ~Hands it back to you~ Can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on July 02, 2004
    Sorry I missed you yesterday...I was off somewhere getting drunk. *shrugs* You know post summer midterm madness. Heh...heh...I played Soul Calibur 2 and lost. It was because I was drunk...really. Anyway, I would definitely read any sequel you decided to write. I love this stuff. Oh and "The Trunks' first time being uke" lemon was amazing. Me likey.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 02, 2004
    Hmm. I think Trunks liked being uke in that moment.

    Another great couple of chapters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2004
    yyy
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  • From ANON - Plyric on July 01, 2004
    Hell yeah! I could most DEFINITELY continue reading ANOTHER 50 chapters, in addition to MoP and SE! =) Your writing is so brilliant and captivating, that even currently on vacation 3,000 miles away from home, I find I still MUST read your new chapters every week day! (*sobs* no more Saturdays! Oh well, everyone needs the weekend! =) ) However, I personally believe strongly in author's perogative, so if you think it should end now with SE, then it should. If not, then I will keep reading on into the third sequel just as eagerly as the first two! Cheers! Oh, yeah, and Gohan's still an ass.
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 01, 2004
    You know it is a little lao beo be talking about the birds and the bees when the people you are suppose to be talking to about it already know the answers. Lucky Vegeta.

    I smelled plot when you wrote that Radditz may have had a child somewhere, out there.

    And Goku, well I am glad he has learned when enough has been said. If he didn't, it could very well have ended up in another fight.
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  • From on July 01, 2004
    I hope Gohan got that through his thick skull this time, otherwis is is going to feel my wrath, lol. I wonder what will happen when the timees fes for Goten's puberty thing. So Vegeta has been writing memorise down? God i would say more but i'm falling asleep at the computer and i can't think straight, all i have to say is that i can't wait till the next chap, as usual. ^_^ Ja ne! ~Passes out~ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ~~
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  • From ANON - Talon on July 01, 2004
    Poll??? SEQUALNESS!!!!!!!!!

    No ending this...*makes chibi eyes* PWEASE????
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  • From on July 01, 2004
    Sorry for the late review, since Adultff.net was down and i had to go to bed when it came back on. -_- I hate living in the UK sometimes, stupid time difference. Anyway this was a nice chapter, i like how Goku feels content with everything at the moment. I wonder what Vegeta writes in that book of his, i'm dying to know. Can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on July 01, 2004
    Whoa there. I almost missed this. Wow. You know I can't figure out which chapters I love better. The one with the banging or the ones with all the emotional stuff. I'll admit. I am a evil genius with a heart (though you might think otherwise when you read my next chapter.) I like the emotional stuff. The scene with Goku and Chichi was so well done. *sigh* I am in awe of your ability to do stuff like that. In so little words, no less.

    I've been writing all day...and night...and morining. It's five in the morning here. One scene to go. :)
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  • From ANON - EleneK on June 30, 2004
    This one is slowly winding down as well it itt it? *pout* I like it that Goku has finally come to grips and figured out how to meld both his selves. Although Goten and Trunks probably still have a ways to go. What is Vegeta writing? I guess thats the big question now. His memoirs. Those would definitely make for interesting reading but I figure its not something quite so benign. This is a review. I'm going to review Family Therapy now and sleep. -El-
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 30, 2004
    Another Great chatpter.

    Would write more, but I'm on a time limit.
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 30, 2004
    Awh, now even I am content, including the fact there were no lemons. Goku's seeming to come to grasp with the whole situation. Vegeta's journal has my interest peaked though.

    Somehow, I find it hard to believe the boys are actually going to find clothes to wear. I am thinking it's more lemons, despite the fact they are tired, or, they will go to bed naked and sleep. But that is just my imagination.

    Yeah, Bulma does need to get a new social life. She's a fairly stimulating person, I don't think she could be all around haif sif she was a house mom forever.

    What Goku said to Chichi about not leaving Vegeta, I am not certain if I believe that was disturbing or comforting. I found it satisfying either way.
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  • From ANON - EleneK on June 30, 2004
    Feeling Lemony huh? Well, that's what you get for neglecting Family Therapy. I read the bio section and I understand (I'm doing the same thing). I'm not complaining, no really I'm not. They're extremely nice lemons. Some people like water scenes. I personally prefer the kitchen its just such an active room with so many built in ... enhancers of the experience. -El-
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