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Reviews for Saiyan Enlightenment

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 10, 2004
    Gohan is such a jerk!

    Aff keeps giving me line 11 errors. *shakes fist at computer*

    So I will keep this short. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - joseÊose on June 10, 2004
    Oh wow, that was so sad. Gohan said that Goku wasn't his father anymore. It is true though isn't it.
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  • From ANON - EleneK on June 10, 2004
    I Hate the Server here on AFF. It never lets me review. I haven't abandoned your fics I promise. My reviews. just. never. go. through. Anywho....

    Ok that was an interesting end. Even if Trunks still has a messed up view of what happened. Gohan walked in on a situation that looked much worse than it was (like Trunks was trying to get Goten to do something he didn't want to), he tries to protect his little brother and gets beaten up for it. Trunks doesn't realize what it looked like to the older boy so I can understand why he is a little mad. Even Goten, who was the only person who understood the intent of all parties involved is mad at his brother? I'm confused. I bothers me that not even Vegeta took the time to figure out what was happening and just jumped to the conclusion that Gohan was threatening Goten. I'm still looking forward to Kakarrot's reaction in the next chapter when he realizes how badly he overreacted. Have fun straightening this out.
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  • From on June 10, 2004
    0_0 Gohan...what is going through that mans head? He needs to take a looooong look around him cos if he dosent he wont have anything left. I wanna know what is going on with Goku and Vegeta, is Goku really angry? Or upset? I wanna hug him ;_; poor Goku-san. ^_^ And i will keep pushing as long as i feel it is needed, lol. I do it for the good of the people. Hehe, can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Plyric on June 10, 2004
    Oh YES! Go Goku and Trunks! Yeah! Beat the shit out of that completely stupid, idiotic, half-assed moron! YEAH!

    Oh, um, yeah, I guess the moron has to live, right? But, can can we beat the bloody pulp out of him, anyway?

    Wow! Goku just jumped into a fight without asking, "Hey, Gohan, why'd you kick your brother in the head?" Just jumped right in. YES! I love that Saiyan side!

    MORE! MORE!
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 09, 2004
    Oh my god. Gohan is going to die. Poor stupid prejudice ass clown. I love how you began the chapter with the fight and then turned around and explained how it happened. That was really good.
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  • From Shan on June 09, 2004
    Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die!

    Actually, now that I think about it, I'm not all that fussed. Oh, oh, what if Goku hurts Vegeta by accident? That would be interesting. Anyway....

    Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die! Die Gohan, die!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 09, 2004
    Exciting chapter. More!

    Trunks is really agressive this time, Goku as well.

    Love it all.
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  • From on June 09, 2004
    ~Is back, looks at you being in little pieces and sweat drops.~ o_0; errr, pull your self togetheran yan you need to do more story and awnser reviews. You have a duity to fulfill, now get up and show us what your made of. ^_^ Hehe hope Gohan gets what's been comming to him all this time, a big wake up call or just getting his butt wooped. Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - macha on June 09, 2004
    I think I am of the same mind as Vegeta on this one. "Why?" Why stop Goku from killing Gohan? Oh, alright, I get it already, but that doesn't mean that I'd like that boy to get an attitude adjustment.

    Oh, they were sooooo close to having sex in a public place. Now mind, I don't ever want to have sex in a public place, but two hot sayian guys going at it? In a place that has binocculars no less. I'd have rings around my eyes were I was trying to implant the sight improvers to my face permanantly. (I guess that would look rather funny, huh?)
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  • From Shan on June 08, 2004
    I knew this girl once who was so bothered by the thought of her parents having sex that secidecided they must have found her in a box of cornflakes.
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on June 08, 2004
    Loved Vegeta blushing that always adorable!
    and the whole conversation between Goku, Vegeta, and Trunks was hilarious I loved it.
    I thought the begining was really cute too with how tired they were only pingping 10 hours out of three days...sounds like me-_- but I don't do fun stuff like them. lucky saiyajins!
    And Goku is going to talk to Gohan I am dreading that...I wonder what will happen.
    and I wonder what will happen with Goten and Trunks since Trunks is having those saiyajin urges...
    *thinks of Vegeta blushing and dies* awwww
    and again sorry for short crappy review...just very tired 5:30 a.m. now...blah

    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - macha on June 08, 2004
    I don't know what Trunks's problem is. I would lov hav have those two sayians smirking at me in a hentai manner. (Well I guess one IS his father.....Too bad for him!)

    Very brave(?) of Goku to want to go talk with Gohan. I hope the poor boy makes it through this alive.
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 08, 2004
    Poor Trunks. I hope he doesn't have as much trouble with this as Goku did. I don't see Goten being as patient as Vegeta.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 07, 2004
    :-) Hope your mood gets better.

    Another great chapter.
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