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Reviews for Saiyan Enlightenment

By : CardDragonBall

From ANON - ma� � on March 08, 2004
Yah, another great lemon, and I am still have the Mike's to compliment it! It's good to see both of them shaushausted that they may talk about ideas, but not actually do them.

*catches hat* Oh, thank you. I could have used it this weekend, even if I didn't have these horns then. My poor nose is so sunburnt. The weather on Saturday was one of those days that was overcast, but you can still get a sunburn through the cloud cover. The camping was great. Thanks for asking.

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From ANON - Webtester01 on June 01, 2004
Finally. Goku won't hold back.
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From on June 01, 2004
Hehehehehehe ^_^ ~Is laughing at your laugh~ You are funny. Thanks for doing the exstended sex scene, i am very happy now. ^^ Now all you need to do is tell whats up with Piccolo-san. ^_^ Heh. ~Smiles at content Veggie scene~ ^^ How cute. Can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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From ANON - EleneK on June 01, 2004
Why was Piccolo blanching? There was someone else there wasn't there? Somebody that Piccolo did not want to have a conversation in front of . Am I right? I'm not to sure I liked your spoiler. Do we have to bring him back into this one. Can't he just get over it in private. Is he gonna get the crap beat out of him? Torture? Torture? No? Damn.

-El-
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From ANON - macha on May 31, 2004
See you've made Bulma evil too. I mean if I were.....Oh no, you've made me evil too! *reaches hands up to forehead* Aaaaaaah! *runs to find hathidehide deformity.*

Devoulging such things to Buis sis such a small price to pay for a new house. Oh, and I get to read the new details too. Such a great deat. Thank you, thank you, thank you! *bows to Card*
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From on May 31, 2004
I'm so glad you desided to not be that evil. ^_^ Hehe Goku is becoming so funny with his Saiyan side, he even SNIFFED Veggie!! Hahaha. And Piccolo, whats wrong with him? Is he nervose about the info that he was told or what? Now you can't not carry on from where you left off, and noone is to interupt eather. ^_^ It must go ONNNNN!!! HEHE, sorry i'm in a fumoodmood. Can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on May 31, 2004
He realized that Vegeta was too laid back at that moment to smack him upside his head properly and he exploited this weakness to sick, sick advantage. (It was the most Saiyan thing Kakarot did.)--LoL I love this! *cheers* Go Kakarot exploit away!

Detail? Bulma knew many details. She was a horrible hentai. A closet freak-- I knew she was!!!! and now I have proof!!!!

�please don�t hurt me when I tell you what I�m going to tell you� --awwwww that is so cute

�WHAT,� he said, calmly, he thought, �ABOUT US?!�--@_@!!! That does not sound calm, it sounds scary and loud! *covers ears* I knew Vegeta shouldn't have gone with the simple answer he should have just told Goku everythinghe was thinking and we wouldn't have arrived at this point...or maybe we would but at a later time. So I guess it doesnt matter....

(See? If he hadn�t had just had mind-blowing sex, he would have Kakarot tied to a tree right now, covered in honey with fire ants crawling towards him with evil intents.)--Lmao it's amazing to see what mindblowing sex can do..or stop you from doing.

Ah, Vegeta liked the Greenbean--hehe, I thought he might.

he was more than aware just what his tease of a boyfriend had done in the shower and that the smell was put there to make him insane.--LoL. evil boyfriend, torturing poor Trunks

�FINE. See if I care!� and then she packed up Bra and went shopping. Stress-induced shopping. --rofl! I have been a victim of stress induced shopping *sobs* The nightmares..the never ending horrors of what is purchased. It's enough to make one dress in the dark.

lmao at end notes

^.*
-MB-

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From ANON - jaygoose on May 29, 2004
Thank goodness...I finally got up to speed on this one. Bless Piccolo, he is a savior. Poor Namek. I could just see him blushing. So cute. I am glad that Geta and Kaki finally got their shit together and got with the make up sex. Very good I might add. Goten and Trunks were sweet too. I love those two. Now Ioff off to bed...my eyes are tired. :)
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From ANON - Sarkywoman on May 28, 2004
Four times and counting. Just pointing out that when you delete one of those (and probably this one and the third) make sure you delete the first one, because I misspelt bursting on that one. Which is odd, since they're the same review... o_O
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From ANON - Sarkywom � on March 08, 1920
Oh hey I reviewed twice. But now I've reviewed three times. That must be really annoying for you. Um...bye!
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From ANON - Sarkywoman on May 28, 2004
::grabs Goku and whaps him upside the head:: 'Now look you stupid saiyan, the choice is this simple!'
::drags Goku over to two doors:: 'Behind door number one - '
::Stupid friends sitting around discussing crappy things drindrinking tea. Gohan tingting into tears:: 'Your stupid friends and your idiot son. Behind door number two - '
::Opens door to reveal naked Vegeta tied to a bed and desperately horny:: 'Your Prince.'
'Now Goku, you have to choose... Goku? Um, Goku, where- oh.'
::Closes door number two discreetly. Pauses, frowns, pulls videocamera out of nowhere, opens door, deposits videocamera, closes door discreetly. Gohan is watching over shoulded bud bursts into tears again::
'But daddy, how could y-'
::gets poked in the eye by Sarkywoman's new metal claw that only cost fou four pound at the market::
'Right. My work here is done.'
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From ANON - Sarkywoman on May 28, 2004
::grabs Goku and whaps him upside the head:: loo look you stupid saiyan, the choice is this simple!'
::drags Goku over to two doors:: 'Behind door number one - '
::Stupid friends sitting around discussing crappy things and drinking tea. Gohan burtsing into tears:: 'Your stupid friends and your idiot son. Behind door number two - '
::Opens door to reveal naked Vegeta tied to a bed and desperately horny:: 'Your Prince.'
'Now Goku, you have to choose... Goku? Um, Goku, where- oh.'
::Closes door number two discreetly. Pauses, frowns, pulls videocamera out of nowhere, opens door, deposits videocamera, closes door discreetly. Gohan is watching over shoulder and bursts into tears again::
'But daddy, how could y-'
::gets poked in the eye by Sarkywoman's new metal claw that only cost her four pound at the market::
'Right. My work here is done.'
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From ANON - Hecate18 on May 28, 2004
Very short review ahead, (I have work tomorrow and 16 hours of sleep to make up for, *sighs* like thats gonna happen!)

Goku and Vegeta are ok... I think its time for a GROUP HUG!!! *looks for Vegeta*
They should have make up sex... technically they did have make up sex... but they should have more for good measure. ^.~

But Trunks and Goten had sex (or are in the process of ^-^) so its ok. Guess it was worth the wait for the two of them, Trunks didn't even blush! ^_^

Thank you for Beta'ing my chap for me, I'm gonna post it now befor'm o'm off to bed cause the only other free time I've got is Tuesday! But thank you again! ^_^
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From on May 28, 2004
Y..y...your not updating tomorow?? WHYYYYYYYY??? ~Faints~ ......~Wakes up~ Oww, oh well i guess i can wait a FEW days. ~Sighs~ Deprived of Goku/Vegeta action, whats next? Very nice chap, Trunks didnt blush nearly as much which i thought was cute and funny. He's so despirate. And Goku told Veggie about telling Piccolo. Brave. I think its right to let Goku have someone to talk to about all this i mean all his other so called 'Friends' abandoned him. Can't wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on May 27, 2004
I�m sorry, Vegeta. I shouldn�t have yelled at you and I feel really bad about it. And�I shouldn�t have left you like I did.� --*hugs Goku* That's the apology I have been waiting for. :)

�You were never one of them,� Vegeta replied.--and that within itself is very difficult. He may have never been one of them, but learning to become what he never knew he was has to be a hard thing to grasp.

�I know,� Kakarot said, and he said it with real purpose, with real understanding. He said it to affirm it, to kill off the rest of him that was human--I am impressed. Here I thought he may never feel like this.

moved forward and sat in the big idiot�s lap. --*dies*

Pointed out all the things that Goku already knew, and he had decided right there that this was more important that what a bunch of backstabbing friends thought of him.--Good, I am glad he finally decided this, finally understood that. Vegeta does care for him and he cares for Vegeta...and the jerks who oppose this do not really matter. And although there words may sting Goku...I believe Vegeta will always be there for him, to lean on..to be comforted or whatever. I just love this relationship. Very pleased that they overcame this...very proud of Goku also.

Had sat and watched Vegeta sleep and been increasingly saddened by the lack of his fingerprints on his mate�s body. But he understood. Because he�d left Vegeta all alone, and there was no way you would strut around wearing the marks of someone who abandoned you.--aww the word abandoned just makes that even more sad. And that is so cute that Goku watched him sleep and I am glad he came back. I knew he would...but I just can't help but to be happy about it. ^_^

He kissed Vegeta hard enough he took his breath away--I loved that.

Looked down at Vegeta, and smiled. Loved him. Really did.--*sobs happily* That is so beautiful

Vegeta laughed, just shortly, was watching him with sli eye eyes that glittered in amusement --that is so cute! damn you! you and your perfect lemons!!!!!!! oh I take it back I will not damn you...it is to wonderful...these lemons are flawless and I love them!

*Cackles like a mad man * MWHAHAHAHAHAHA!--you are cruel!

LoL at end notes

*Goku burst out into sobs * �I�m Sorry! I didn�t mean to hurt Vegeta!� *more sobbing *--Oh I forgive him, how can I not? When he watched Vegeta sleeping I forgave him..that melted me. So stop sobbing ya big baby! *pats Goku*

*author now pointedly ignoring the dirty comments about going down * Oh�look, no more review to respond to.--LMAO!!!!

^.*
-MB-

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