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By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on June 08, 2004
    “She said that she didn’t think she could tell the two of us apart if we didn’t have the scars,” Goten said. --aww LoL I would be mad to if the person I was in love with couldn't tell me apart from my twin...

    “Because if Goten didn’t kill your ass, I would.” --rofl! what a good plan...looks like Trunks knows his mate. Now I wonder if Gina will pass the test. I hope so.

    “Besides,” Trunks said—with an attempt at humor—“You are painfully straight.--lmao! never heard someone call someone else painfully straight, but I have heardit tit the other way around, but regardless this mad me laugh very hard. And I love how well Trunks knows Gotens movements...how he taps and always grins, I liked that.

    “Hey,” Vegeta snapped, “I’m very good at being straight, buddy.”--LoL, of course he is!

    Trunks and kissed him briefly as his hand pushed into places it ought not be pushed while Vegeta was still on the bed. (I.e. his pants were now invaded.) --rofl!!!!! *dies laughing*

    “She knew it wasn’t you.” --aww *claps* I knew she would know the difference between the two!

    “I’ve got girl parts,” Trunks countered.--LoL...still mostly boy though ^.~

    Aww I do like that Goten and Trunks finally got to have some sex and the tail thing was so cute.

    Vegeta: Again I ask: Anyone feel gypped--LoL I DO!!! *sobs while holding bag of dusty unsqueezed lemons*

    Lil’Geta: She published the bribe lemon.--Heeelllllpppp! *is dying of laughter* he has a paper baghis his head!!!!!!!!!!! yay! I am glad you published it, it's YUMMMMMMMMYYYYYY!!!!

    oh yeah I love Tom Cruise he is very rad, but sadly I rarely got to the movies also unless impressed by a preview....actually it's not that sad b/c if the movie sucks then I saved some money! yay me!!!!! money for lemons!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ^.*
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  • From ANON - macha on June 08, 2004
    Sorry I skipped out on most of the stories yesterday. So, I thought that it was funny that the twins tried to fool their mates. I also wonder what would have happened if the mates hadn't been able to tell them apart. (drools while thinking about it.) Anyway, I have to go catch up.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 08, 2004
    I figured they would try the twin switcharoo. LOL

    Trunks kimmeimmediatly who was who.
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on June 08, 2004
    Any similarities you have are minute. Feel free to fuck like rabbits.” Then he was gone.--rofl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what a nice dad...hehe

    “Rabbits are too quick,” Gohan said--lol, yeah that seems saiyajin to me

    Prissy Gina wasn’t showing at all. Not even a little pooch. NOTHING. --aww do I detect a loud hint of jealousy...but he is so cute with a tummy!

    “Too far,” was the whine. --rofl

    when Kakarot smiled about this, moved to rest between his parted thighs and kissed his neck. --um apperently the rest of this paragraph got deleted because I can't seem to uh...FIND THE REST OF THIS LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    “Yep,” he said, “Isn’t that great?” Somehow he didn’t sound exactly like this was the most wonderful thing in the universe.--LoL aww poor thing

    Understand? The lemon was just a bribe, its not real. --I know it wasn't real...but damn it it was good! very, very good! but I will refrain from my hentai twin language ^.~

    and lol at end notes

    You didn't like the HP movie? awwww I haven't seen it, I'm still trying to go see The day after tomorrow. Sheesh takes me forever to go see a movie. Unless it is a Tom Cruise movie then I am so there!

    ^.*
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 08, 2004
    Oh my Trunks is stinking. Joy! You know I love baby making banging. It's banging with a higher purpose. Joy! :)
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 07, 2004
    Great chapter.

    BTW, that other leg of this chapter is out of view; the leg is currently buried under Goku. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Talon on June 07, 2004
    *fluttery eyes*

    *after reading one of your responses*

    Do the rest of us get to see that lemony bribe??? I promise not to think it's real if only I can read about the (NOT REAL ONLY A BRIBE) twincest...

    *flutterterfterflutter*
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 06, 2004
    Ha! Throwing drinks in people's faces. On second thought I take back the soap operah thing. The sex scenes are never this good. :)
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  • From on June 06, 2004
    Grabbed his mother by his arm and yanked him out of the bed. (Naked, unfortunately. --LoL, not rtunrtunate to me.

    “You need to get dressed, go find Goten and stop being an ass.rgivrgive him before he has a cow or something and we have to fucking raise it.” --LoL

    Goten looked up from the papers scattered acrhis his table. “I’m dancing a jig.”--lol, and he still responds with his special Goten comments...awww

    “It was worse,” Goten said. Looked uncomfortable.--It must have been pretty bad if even he is uncomfortable. That makes me sad for some reason. I hate to see Goten like this.

    Blah-blah-blah. That’s what Vegeta heard. It was just a lot of ‘bla-blah-blabbity-bla.’ --rofl!

    He glared at his child. But he did it lovingly.--those loving glares always seem to make everything better. ^.~

    “Sorry for being a prick,” Goten murmured.--that was a very good apology from a saiyajin! I'm proud!

    And awesome lemon, as usual!!!!!


    Ok and I posted a chap of Malicious...and I do have to say I hate it..it so cso crappy, but I am already working on the next chap which is hopefully better. Anywho you can send it too my lovely e-mail: mechanicalbutterfly_mg@hotmail.com
    Thank you so much! you are so rad! *hugs you*

    ^.*
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  • From ANON - macha on June 03, 2004
    That's all what the no sex thing was about? Goten needing to be forgiven by his momo heo he decided to punish himself with 'no sex'? He's kind of a masicast(spelling?) isn't he.

    Well, I am glad that lil' Geta figured it out, because that was a very nice lemon. And I am certain that Trunks is even happier than I am the whole mess was figured out, because he was the recepient of such a nice lemon.


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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on June 02, 2004
    To which his mate elegantly replied: “I told you that you were stingy.” Then disappeared again. --LoL

    (it had been three weeks and thus far, not only did Gohan not remember who he was, he didn’t managed to remember anything you told him.) --rofl

    “No,” Gohan said. Looked confused for a while longer, then came up with the brilliant statement: “You’re the Mommy!” --I loved Vegeta's answer and when Goten countered with this I cracked up.

    he would hopefully end up stung by wasps or bees or wander off and not find his way back for a few years.--lmao

    He loved all his children, but Goten was the one that worried him. Anything that wasn’t even a tiny bit afraid of dying worried him.--Poor Vegeta...Goten better stop worrying his mommy!

    Gina’s pregnant now too.” --O_O! Shepregpreggy again!

    “Not even a little?” was the whimpery suggestion.--LMAO!!!! A little? hehe, I would like to see them accomplish a 'little' sex.

    “Kakarot,” he said without any patience, “There is nothing little about you.”--hehe...I bet..*peeks* O_O! He is right!!!!

    Goten straightened and gave his brother the ‘idiot glare’ (which implied he was looking at a great idiot.)--lmao! I guess that is a universal look that should just be understood..^.~

    leaned back into the pillows and idlely ran his hands over his own body.--*dies* If vegeta resiresist that then he is...INSANE! No one can resist that kind of seducing.

    “So, what’s living in your ass?” he asked.--Oh gosh...do you really want me to answer that? So many lovely answers most concerning Vegeta and Goten connected...

    There was a shrug in response, and Vegeta sighed heavily. Tried to figure out just what the hell could be bothering his brother like this. --I am worried too...I wonder what could actually be bothering him.

    *is happy about stench of lemons coming from twins room* ^_^

    ^.*
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  • From ANON - macha on June 02, 2004
    Would I really be happy if for once Vegeta didn't give in to Goku? *thinks about quesiton* No, I don't think that I would, so I am happy that Goku wins.

    I was shocked when Goten said he didn't want to have sex with Trunks. I thought WTF? And then he gave his explination and I thought Phew.

    I hope that Goten's concerns get answered soon, so he can go back to making lemonade.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 02, 2004
    That's just great. Goten's gone strait. LOL (Rhyme intended.)

    Now that the twins' bond is stronger, maybe they won't be so
    limited by distance anymore.

    With all this stuff going on, what is going to happen next?

    Have another sequel "Twin Therapy" perhaps? *Rolls eyes and laughs.*
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on June 02, 2004
    I don't even miss the fighting. I love this fic. It's like a soap operah only its actually good. I am shocked by Goten's totall disreguard for Trunks' ass though. :)
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on June 02, 2004
    Sorry I dit ret review yesterday.
    I had a very unfun day....and some very serious weather.
    Bn a n a good note I wrote A LOT of Malicious and it should be finished by the end of week. ^.~

    Fell back asleep just as quickly as Vegeta did, but at least he wasn’t dead anymore. --jeez that was fast.

    Vegeta cleaned up his son,--awww

    “Sit down, shut the fuck up or get out of my house before I rip out your guts, wrap them around your neck and hang you with them.” Glared. --O_O! LoL, I like that a lot...hehe, gosh he is a meanie.

    and Vegeta felt as if this was some sort of defiance to what he said. He was not about to repeat himself. --LoL I would have ran home..or far afar away. He is scary when he is mad, and he is pregnant, that is dangerous. But then again since it's Pam I really don't mind as much. ^.~

    Gave him a big smile and a wag of his tail. Would have pouted but the pouting thing really was reserved for when he wanted Vegeta the other way and not this way and he didn’t what hignalgnals getting crossed. --rofl!

    Put both his hands on Vegeta’s face, slid his fingers into his hair and kissed him. --*dies*

    “Well, I do it so infrequently,” Vegeta replied.--Lmao, aww poor thing.

    Goku buried his face in a pillow until he realized this did not allow him to breath and then had to unbury his head. --rofl! *dies laughing*

    (If you can’t guess, you really need help.) --LoL

    MB: Uh…figment of your imagination? *steals popcorn*--@_@!!! rofl!!! *feels special* I rarely feel special...*sobs* so this is a joyous occasion! *throws confetti*

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    because he knew for a fact that if he ever walked in on his brother and Gina he would kill her, maim him and spend the rest of his life finding new and interesting ways to make Goten pay for what he did.--rofl!!! Isn't that just a tad extreme?! hehe...

    I don’t dream,” Vegeta said. That one was incredibly easy. They both knew that Vegeta had never dreamed. It just wasn’t something that he did.--he doesn't dream? That is so sad...well partly good too. He can't have nightmares.

    Gohan (his poor stupid son) had broken up and Gohan ended up needing stitches and having amnesia.--LMAO!!! Oh gosh..that must have been a very horrible fight. Poor Gohan...

    “Who am I again?” he asked,--lmao!

    but everytime the two of them got close to one another it seemed that Gohan’s amnesia disappeared and his instinct to take and fuck took over. --LoL, it's funny how saiyajin amnesia works...instincts never seem toget get a thing, especially sex.

    “Yes,” he said for the forty-ninth time, “I am sure that I am your father.”--LoL

    And Bardock's answer for who Gohan's mother is was just hilarious. hehe...I love that kid.

    and tried to shove himself off, but their tails were wrapped up rather tightly,--aww that is SO cute!!!!! *drools*

    “What is Daddy doing?” she asked.--rofl! poor kid having to be subjected to such glorious-ness.

    so that if you didn’t look at the fact they were wearing pants it would be very compromising indeed.--O_O! *imagines them without pants* !!!! *dies*

    “’Geta,” Goku said sadly, “Where did we go wrong?”--Nowhere! That is what they should be doing!!!!

    “So…was it good for you?”--rofl! he is a prick...hehe...but I love him.

    Just left. Just like that. Like she wasn’t sitting around waiting for him to wake up every second of the past week and three days. Like she wasn’t intolerably horny.--aww I feel bad for her. He shouldn't have left her like that. She has been going crazy the ppor thing. She needs loving!

    Goku looked murderous. “YES. DAMMIT! FOR THE LAST TIME. I AM YOUR FATHER!”--*spits Pepsi out of mouth laughing so hard* OMG Gohan is insane! Poor Goku he is looking murderous that is scary, he better stop asking that question if he wants to stay alive.

    “I missed you,” she murmured.--aww that was a great lemon! and she needed that and deserved it. Now hopefully she won't be deafening people with her yells.

    ^.*
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