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By : Clarrisani
  • From ANON - G.K on October 17, 2004
    Was it just Bryan & Tala or was it a threesome like with Rei? Good chap.
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  • From ANON - Mizuyah on October 13, 2004
    Oh yes! It's looking pretty hot. I can't wait for the actual fireworks, if fists come into it.
    Otherwise...pleas update!
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  • From ANON - Catty on October 12, 2004
    oooooo dang.. GO BRYAN!!!!! lol and yes.. Run Rei RUN!!! lol KeepKeep up the awesome work!!!!

    Catty
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  • From ANON - BZLF on October 11, 2004
    Another good Chapter.
    Please update with next Chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - G.K on October 11, 2004
    Pretty good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Catty on October 10, 2004
    VERY NICE STORY!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ took me two days to finish but i am now ^^ Please Update soon. I love Bryan and Rei... and yea Kai probably would be pissed after being pulled over lol serves him right in the this story... pity ... i like Tala and Kai lol should've had like Kai and Tal flicking them off as Bry and Rei waves and high 5'ed each other... ^____^

    KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!!!!!!

    Catty
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  • From ANON - BZLF on October 10, 2004
    Nice. Enjoyed it. 8/10. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Lady Snowblossom on October 09, 2004
    Ok, let it rip! Oh, sorry, having a moment. Right, now to get serious. Clis, if I didn't like this story, I wouldn't be bugging you about it, nor would l let you use it to bribe more chapters of 'I'm a father' out of me. And does it sound like I'm gearing Rei up for a miscarriage, such is not my intention.

    Let's see, we have twoughtughtless, oversexed jerks, one poor sick, confused and sy goy going nuts neko-jin, and a falcon, who can turn on you in a New York minute; talk about drama! Personally, I want to chemically castrate the above mentioned jerks and let them go with out it for a few weeks; let's see if they get the message.

    Actually, I'd love to see them catch Bryan and Rei in the middle of something nasty and have Bryan lay down the law to them.

    You do so well at keeping everyone in character and that is one of the things I love about your stories, a wit with interesting storylines and such.

    I could keep blathering, but I don't want to take up too much space, so I'll close with KEEP DOING WHAT YOU'RE DOING!
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  • From ANON - Monkmonk on September 29, 2004
    Wow, I really love this fic. I really hope you continue! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Mizuyah on September 29, 2004
    That is so sweet. Wow, Rei almost told them...so close.
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  • From ANON - rejiita on September 27, 2004
    sweet chappie =)
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  • From ANON - SorrowWolf on September 20, 2004
    Aaww... So sweet! Bryan and the little kitty. What a image. Great chapter! Man, Bryan is intelligent. Hehe, fight, hell yeah XP Awsome! Keep on writing!
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  • From ANON - Bleeder on September 15, 2004
    Wow! I mean, wow! You have a very smooth and captivating writing style. I love how you manage to highlight the problems in the relationship and have Rei suffering without making the fic into one more piece of pointless angst. And the thought of Rei and Bryan together is one I'd certainly never thought of--although I readily admit that it's a delicious mental image. I also admire how in character you've kept them, and that Brya isn't immediately jumping in to save Rei from his boyfriends' ravagings. It restores my faith in fanfiction writers that you've realized that only Rei can remove himself from the situation into which he so blissfully sauntered into. I look forward to the next post.

    Bleeder
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  • From ANON - Mizuyah on September 14, 2004
    Aww, come on! There's really no contest. Bryan would win hands down. You gotta admit, he's a tad smarter than Tala and see things in perspective. Not to mention he's built.
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  • From ANON - evilchild not signed in on September 14, 2004
    I have no idea who'd win but my money's on Bryan. That cat seems to like Bryan huh? Maybe that's a sign? I wonder if Chund Hu don't like Tala and Kai because he can sense the discomfort within Ray when he is around them. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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