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By : Clarrisani
  • From ANON - chibi drigger on March 31, 2005
    aww...it's so sad...and Rei is a FUCKING DUMBASS!!! -sighs exasporatedly-..I know Tala and Kai were harsh on him!!...But...Bryan is SOOOO diffrent!! -sighs-..Stupid neko-jinn. -shakes head-..Ah well..He'll learn...hopefully. And if not him im going for the hot hunk of russian flesh in desperate need of love! -nods puncing chest- Weeeeellll..great chapter and cant wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - keisan on March 30, 2005
    True that. Rei seems to be taking the blame for everything unto himself, poor Rei.
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  • From ANON - Lullaby Lily on March 26, 2005
    Yay! An update! A short one... very short... But an update nonetheless!
    Poor Ray... Actually; he *does* know very well he's in love... He's just trying to think past it...
    Not allowing yourself to *every* fall in love... eh... Don't make promises we *know* you won't keep... Well... which we *hope* you won't keep.
    And he's feeling guilty...Hate to make it worse; but it kind of *was* partly his fault... Both of them; they should have known better than to dare Tala and Kai like that. Not that I blame them, goodness no, I blame one very evil redhead and one very aggressive bluehaired blader....
    I really hope you're going to update *very* soon!!! I can't wait! There's still so many questions in my mind... So pretty please, brighten my day; I have to study this week, so this will be the *best* relaxation in the evening...
    ~Lily~
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  • From ANON - Dr.Von Doom on March 23, 2005
    Doom:well i'm back.

    Dartz:how did it go?

    Doom:how did what go?

    Reinok:dartz told me you were going to kill kai and tala.

    Doom:...fuck! how did they do that?i was but when entered their house they invited me to eat with them before i even say anything and next thing you we're all friend and everything and...crap! they're good.

    Reinok:well anyways,this is the first time i've read this and it's very good,poor ray

    Dartz:poor ray?poor bryan he's hospitalized.

    Grim:...damn kai.....damn tala.....


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  • From ANON - Mika on March 23, 2005
    Yay you updated! I hope Ray gets over his denial, it won't help anybody! (except the readers) ^-^!
    Mika
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  • From ANON - kari_remon on March 23, 2005
    Way too short of a chapter -needed chapter, Rei keeps getting better and better at 'knowing' his feelings isn't he? - but still it's too short - I just can't get tired of Rei and (anyone!) fluffiness...

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  • From ANON - keisan on March 18, 2005
    Uh oh. At this point, Kai seems to be disappearing a bit...I mean Tala seems like the main protagonist here. Not that Kai didn't have his fair share of being 'the bad guy' but Tala's just off the wall insane and obsessed. Sorry I think I'm trying excuse Kai in this even though he's equally bad, because he's like one of my favourite characters...but I can see how Tala's just...plain psychotic whereas Kai's a little more than devious.

    Anyway, excellent fic. Love the angstyness and romance is the nicest touch. Keep it up, hopefully Kai and Tala get what's coming to them. And poor Bryan! Rei too...though observing him in this story he's got quite the sense of intuition. Awesome.
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  • From ANON - Hunteress on March 18, 2005
    Please Continue!!! This is really good!!!
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  • From ANON - Lullaby Lily on March 15, 2005
    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Pretty please with a cherry on top?
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  • From ANON - Chibi Drigger on March 14, 2005
    O_O...Holly shit...I read the thing from chapter one because I lost track of this months and months ago..In like....June or somthing.....And let me say...You sertainly ARE known for yar angst. ....Last couple chapters -specially the last- my heart was right up in my throat!!!! MORE SOON!!!!! Great chapters!!!!!!

    C|@0!!

    -Cd
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  • From ANON - kari_remon on March 05, 2005
    Ahh, no rescue? No saving the day? Pitty, would be fun. Alright, so, why? Are they trying to lure Rei out? Or were they just pissed off? Questions, questions, next chapter will hopefuly bring some answers!
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  • From ANON - Hikaru-chan-4ever on March 04, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! Poor bryan! *cries* IT"LL BE ALLRIGHT BRY! REI IS HERE! Please continue! It's soo great! I'm like.. on the edge of my seat!
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on March 04, 2005
    Man, Bryan's really getting it! Poor thing. Hope he gets well soon. Hope Kai and Tala don't cause anymore problems. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lullaby Lily on March 04, 2005
    (reviewing chapter 34)
    :'(!!!!!!! Aaaargh! Poor poor poor Bryan!!!!!!! Please let him be okay!!! Poor boy! And... evil Tala! I knew they weren't going for sex this time, I knew they were going straight for the kill..Tala used the crowbar, right?. And they almost succeeded (ALMOST... right?????!).... Aaargh... it's frustrating!
    Poor Ray! Isn't he going into hysterics or something? I know I would, in his situation!
    But... what Ian said... was Kai really assisting?? Jeez... if he was... I don't know... he just didn't seem as violent as Tala was...
    They're crazy. Definitely. Crazy. ANYTHING to get their toy back, right? And in their eyes, the only thing that stood in the way... was Bryan.
    Boy, if I were Ray; I would be feeling *guilty*...
    Why do I have this feeling that the next step in their 'logic' thinking is going to be; 'If we can't have Ray, no one will.'
    If Ray still doesn't come back to them... He's going to be the next victim; right?
    Boy, things really get out of control here...
    UPDATE REALLY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!
    ~Lily~
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  • From ANON - Lullaby Lily on March 03, 2005
    (reviewing chapter 25)
    This is one of my favourite chapters; I actually bookmarked your story, on this chapter ^^.
    Tala's sooo scary... Just reading his threats makes my stomach do flip flops. He's dangerous... Definitely!!! Especially, since I reread chapter 33, I noticed the crowbar thing. I must have missed it the first time I read it; probably because 'crowbar' wasn't part of my vocabulary (I had to look it up). But now I know what it is; I'm kind of worried (*understatement*)...
    Tala just seems to have such a twisted mind... He could *really* use some psychiatrist help!
    I also liked the fact Bryan's hands were trembling at the end of the chapters; some authors seem to forget that their characters are still humans, and humans have human reactions when confronted with situations like these. It's a cute Bryan!
    Btw; please update this SOOOOOON!!!
    ~Lily~
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