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Reviews for Young Man's Heart

By : Rogue
  • From ANON - Guest on April 30, 2015
    I love this. Too bad it's not finished. I know you probably won't ever see this, but man oh man, would I love to see this continued.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on January 04, 2009
    I started reading this story 3 years ago and it is still not finished. How much longer am I going to have to wait until this story is completed?!?!?!?!?!? I've been waiting 3 years!!!! I've been waiting because its that ****ing good!!!! Please, Please, Please finish writing it........
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on September 19, 2008
    Damn, this is just... damn.

    I haven't read a story that has gotten me this involved with the characters since I can remember. I'd love to see an update sometime in the future. I'm eager to see what everything leads up to for the finale. Please keeping typing. This story is amazing.
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  • From ANON - M on July 06, 2008
    It's not terribly written or anything, but why do so many DBZ writers completely ignore the fact that none of the fighters in DBZ can be hurt by bullets? Why?! It doesn't matter if they are only half-Saiyan, or that their guard is down. In Dragonball Krillin continuously got shot almost point-blank on the face by Lunch. Canonically, anyone who is at least as strong as 13-year-old Krillin back in DBZ (a FULL HUMAN who couldn't have taken down Tien or Master Roshi, let alone Raditz) can reflect bullets, even if they are not "on guard". This goes for car-crashes, too. Dragonball Z characters will NEVER, EVER be killed by a car, airplane, or any other crash. They will not be stabbed by a drunk classmate, either.

    If Gohan was going to be suicidal, couldn't you have made him slack off during a spar or something instead?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 25, 2008
    Oh wow I remember this story, I read it when I first came here, can't believe it's updated, only I forgot most of it, so I'll have to read all over again and I'll leave a proper review ^.^
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  • From Robyn on February 23, 2008
    I still get excited when I see this story updated!!!

    And this, although a wild twisty ride, was not disappointing. So many dark areas being covered and explored.

    There is a little part of me that wonders who will finally grow the balls to step in and say 'enough' if Gohan doesn't do it himself though.


    Well done!
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  • From Guice on February 23, 2008
    I was just thinking about this story and poof, it's updated. I'm truly in love with this fic, it's so real, all the thoughts and emotions are perfect. I can't wait for the next chapter... and I hope it doesn't take another 3 months :P

    Guice
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  • From ANON - . on October 14, 2007
    you should indicate the pairing(s) in the summary
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  • From ANON - vega on September 16, 2007
    Chpt 5- I am really enjoying this story so far. You are a wonderful writer and you have obviously put a lot of thought into your work. This is definitely a different take on Gohan's persona, and your description of his depression along with his beginning addiction to the meds he is taking is very realistic. I really enjoyed the part where he told off that football player. Go Gohan! I just hope he can work out the rest of his problems.
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  • From ANON - rdk on September 01, 2007
    I'm glad to see this updated. I remember finding this over at Mediaminer and now I rediscover this here. Now that I'm caught up, I would like to say I am enjoying this story. I've always felt Gohan was ripe for a little angst and I believe you have given it to him. It's been interesting to see how a little self-doubt is slowly turning into self-loathing. With his feelings of inadequacy being compounded by the chemicals, things are not looking bright for him. I will be very interested to see where you take this. At any rate, you story is worth the wait.
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  • From Robyn on September 01, 2007
    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! UPDATE! Ah, I have been wondering about this story. *happy sigh* Ouch to the broken nose caused by a book. Those doctors certianly were very concerned about Gohan's shoulder...well, who wouldn't be.

    :) Waking up to warm Derek...I did like that casual moment.

    The visit to his parents' house seems to be going rather well. I am sort of surprise, but in a good way.

    Eagerly awaiting more of this one!
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  • From Kagenoshi on July 31, 2007
    I love the way you have incorporated the reality of Drug Addiction from the user's prospective. And it is very accurate because most people with addictions, whether it be of alcohol or pain meds, feel the people that use with them can understand them better than thier own families or friends but don't realize that their friends are also leading them down a destructive path by enabling thier addiction. Kudos to you! I guess I should say that Bulma and Videl aren't getting though to Gohan...maybe it's Goku or Vegeta's turn to step in...I also smell an intervention coming. By the way, I'm actually torn whether I want Gohan to get with Kris, I mean the coupling is cool, but also destructive...but I'll leave the creativity to you. Keep up the good work!!
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  • From Ruffner on June 26, 2007
    i was wondering if this story is still on going or not? it's been forever since the last update and i was gettin worried! I love this story and don't wanna see it end.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on June 21, 2007
    Cool. I read this story a looong time ago. It stopped at chapter 10 and stayed there for the longest time. Really excited to see more. The angst and depresion is really cool. Hope to see more, been waiting a long time...
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  • From Robyn on February 24, 2007
    So he ditched another session with the shrink...Bulma's not going to take that well.

    And although I am sad the confrontation with Videl led to a broken nose, I am glad he finally got the message to her that he wasn't interested in her any more.
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