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By : akatsuki
  • From ANON - hidaka_yuushi on August 24, 2004
    phew!! that's a GREAT story!!! I like yours very much... First because it's the first envyxed fic I've ever read.. Before i read yours, I never thought about pairing those two cutie... hehehe... thx 'bout give me some inspiration ^^. Secong, your way to telling a story is great... it's make me understand faster than usual... but maybe you'll like to repair your grammar...it's not like that I mind it too much, but it will make your story greater!
    'Kay... sorry if it's too long... I'm waiting for your next chappie. Bye...
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  • From ANON - HaganeNoChibi on August 16, 2004
    hehe cute! I feel sorry for envy..I hope he ends up with ed...THREEESOME! *cough* anyway..continue!
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