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Reviews for Come Together

By : chayron
  • From ANON - schu-was-here on November 15, 2005
    Woohoo!!! This story was a blaaaaaast!!!!!!!! >o< I loved it! Especially Gokuu's, Veggie's & Ahrae's interaction - it was so damn cute. Smack! Smack back! Growl. Roll eyes. Stick tongue out. So fuuny! I laughed hard at those^^ And the lemons... damn, you know your job well^^ I think that were the most imagination-triggering moans and grunts ever put into words... or letters ;p Yeah, the story rocked. Ah... i wanted to write something else....but i forgot ^^; Aaaanyways.. Love your fics. Gonna read some more from AFF ^^
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  • From ANON - bob on June 26, 2005
    so mean, teasing me about that sequel!! I can't wait to read it, keep writing I luved this story.
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  • From Kugatsu on June 23, 2005
    Yeah, Okay. I didn't like the ending but I loved the whole entire fic so I'll forgive you...*shifty eyes* FOR NOW! MWA HA HA!

    Keanu Reeves is that jack ass from teh matrix. all he ever says is WHOA...
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 22, 2005
    That was a great ending!

    I look forwrd to the sequel.


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  • From ANON - kit-kit on June 22, 2005
    oohh nice story i can't wait for the senquel. i hope ahrae gets to stay with vegeta and goku after the baby is born and the two sayains that are in town are there the ones who was in noyran based.
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  • From ANON - BballAnimeLover89 on June 22, 2005
    Lookin forward to the sequel! Great job on this story too! UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on June 20, 2005
    nice chapter trunks is saved and well i just hope ahrae wont die.
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  • From ANON - josie on June 20, 2005
    oh my god! I mean that's all i can say. Well that and please don't keep me waiting to long for the next chapter! good work!!
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  • From ANON - BballAnimeLover89 on June 17, 2005
    Poor Trunks! *snicker* Don't u just hate those situations when u don't know what the hell is goin on but everyone else around u does?! UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - bob on June 15, 2005
    yay! it's update, i luved chapter 27 but that cliffhanger was the meanest thing!! what's gonna happen??? i wanna know but anyway i luuuved chapter 27 because it had funny moments and they found trunks but that cliffhanger was just pure evil!!!
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  • From Kugatsu on June 15, 2005
    *blinks*



    and now for my impression of Keanu Reeeves...


    Whoa...
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 15, 2005
    Excellent!

    I hope Norayan gets defeated.
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  • From ANON - bob on June 11, 2005
    i absolutely luv this story, i luv goku when he's all possessive its funny. that lemon in chapter 24 was awesome......and yea i can't wait 4 the next chapter so yea....update i can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Kugatsu on June 09, 2005
    Ach haben lieber Honig, ich nur um ein Jahr eine eine Hälfte von Deutsch an Hochschule studiert! ^W^ ich hoffe, dass ich Ihnen den falschen Eindruck nicht gegeben habe!

    Ich schreibe es und lese es besser als ich kann es sprechen, aber ich schreibe es sehr gut nicht. Ich habe dieses wie drei Stunden nach Ihrer Erwiderung zu meiner Bemerkung geschrieben. Es ist der Sommer, damit ich eine harte Zeit habe, erinnernd sich an mein Deutsch!

    and the story is very good! teehee pregnant Vegeta. I never did answer your question huh...I'm American sorry. T_T...i also hope my german isn't all messed up....
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  • From ANON - achillona 77 on June 09, 2005
    This is a great story. BUT I still SAY that there is a special connection between Ahrae and Vegeta. HMM? Momma's baby, Poppa's maybe!!!

    Keep up the good work!!!


    ~~~A~~~
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