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Reviews for Returning To You

By : FireandIce
  • From ANON - KaixYukina on June 08, 2005
    I love your story!! Even though I not into yaoi, Kai and Tala are cute together! I just love Kai and Tala! I hope they'll be happy together. Love the Lemons. Nothing makes a good story than to have good sex in it. Hope to read more Kai/Tala fics!
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  • From ANON - Chibi Drigger on April 23, 2005
    Well I absolutly loved it!!!!!!! -grins- I thought it was SOOOOO CUTE!! -grins and hugs tightly- I loved your lemons..Hehe. Like one in every chapter!! XDD Well loved it and usually I'd say update soon...but this fic is done so...GREAT FIC!! Haha! THanks for writing such a good peoce of reading material! BYYEEE!! -grins- Ciao! -Cd
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  • From ANON - LillyLazer666 on March 30, 2005
    AWW!!! Cute ending...weird story but still...KAWAII! and also...FINALLY another author who does KaiXYuri pairings...and here was me thinking I was the only one.........
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  • From ANON - kiotana on March 29, 2005
    of course your welcome!!!!thx for the great story and tell me when you make another!!!plz!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Black Angel on March 29, 2005
    i love this story is there any chance that we'll get a sequel from it? oh yeah how brilliant of my on the last chapter i finally but up a review, damn oh well i really hope you put up a sequel for the story kai and tala are so kawii(sry bout spellin issues) well hope you e-mail or im me i have the same sn for yahoo, aol, and msn(linkin89park89)
    Adios
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  • From ANON - GabZ on March 28, 2005
    *O* you thank me I'm Happy
    NOOOOO is the end of the story WAAA A A A A A AA A A A A
    ToT
    Loved it, was wanderful, lovely....... *O*
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  • From ANON - kari_remon on March 28, 2005
    Hello there! This is, overall, a nice fic, but it's no wonder, since it's a bit poor when it comes to an actual plotline, but I suppouse all the very well done lemons pay up to it. That should work for the ooc too, Tala and Kai couldn't be all that sweet and kind all of a sudden. Where's the coldness I've grown to love in those two? Well, time is said to work miracles... Since they changed that much, you could lose some time shaping your characters a bit more no?
    Your editing is quite good though some words that don't seem fitting or are not well used now and then pop up, but grammar seems fine and you space your story well too.
    Overall, I think it's a good story (ooc, but it's to late to notice it anyways...) and you should continue it. Stories are meant to let one express their imagination, reguardless of many people reading it or not.
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  • From ANON - kryptonite on March 28, 2005
    it's SO cuteeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    !^_^!
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  • From ANON - kiotana on March 28, 2005
    review 1:i love this fic
    review 2:hurry i can't wait!
    review 3:update soon cause i love kai!
    review 4:this is super!i love you...don't look at me like that...
    review 5:these are your 5 reviews now UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PZL*on the floor taking a fit*
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  • From ANON - Hikaru_chan_4ever on March 28, 2005
    I COUNT AS ONE! PLZ REVIEW! *hugs* PWEASE!
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  • From ANON - KinkyMe on March 28, 2005
    Hello!! Wow!! Their together together!! I knew they would. What is up with Spencer and Brian?? Are they together?? Very hot scenes by the way. Please update it. One more chapter?? That's sad. I love this story. Oh well. It's a great one.
    Too da loo,
    KinkyMe
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  • From ANON - kiotana on March 28, 2005
    CURSES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!I KINDA KNOW BUT I STILL WANT TO KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - GabZ on March 28, 2005
    FINALLY
    TELL HIM KAI
    you have to ToT
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  • From ANON - kiotana on March 27, 2005
    this is so getting good!!!!!!keep writing!!!!!!!!....typing
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  • From ANON - GabZ on March 27, 2005
    Kon is not match for Kai!!
    XD

    KaiTala RULEZ
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