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Reviews for Deep Circle

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Webteter01 on July 10, 2005
    Poor Goku being stuck in heat.
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  • From ANON - malimillions on July 10, 2005
    Woah, Goku! My my my my my! .... *coughs at her own antics* Uh, i mean.... *ahem* If Goku -does- mess around, and does what his heat wants him to at this point, the outcome would be that he'd get pregnant if they didn't use protection, right? ...... *cough* That would be cool. Goku being uke and messing around, I mean. *coughs again*
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 10, 2005
    O.O Smelled like ice cream with a strawberry on top? I wanted to eat the guard. lol It was a good thing Kamala called him away to dinner. *nods*

    Okay, so Vegeta and Kamala gave it a shot, and had bad chemistry. It's interesting how, you can just tell with one kiss, isn't it? And then, Vegeta's not interested in Goku, but Kamala is, and Goku is more interested in Vegeta than Kamala. Oi!

    Where did those thoughts about Vegeta being a better father come in? It just seemed so random. Random, but true in a way.

    Update SOON please!!!!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 04, 2005
    I'm glad that was cleared up.

    Maybe the dragonballs from Vedeno's dimension's earth or Namek could help, assuming they could get there in the first place. :)
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 04, 2005
    Kamala's confusion about the situation was just distressing. Oh, and then he had to go and say that to Vegeta. O.O

    I am glad Kamala's confusion was finally laid to rest. And it seems as though Vegeta has done something about the situation.

    Eep, this whole hormon triangle going on between Kamala, Goku and Vegeta is just.... When Do we Get a LEMON???!! heheh, j/k, this story is good without one.

    Uh-oh, those last few sentenses didn't bode very well for Vegetasie.
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 28, 2005
    @.@ So many angles and possibilities with those three, and I still don't see where it is going.

    At the first part of the chapter, I didn't think Goku was going to be able to keep his promise to himself to 'stop,' but after Vegeta's actions, he might not find the prince as attractive any more.

    Update SOON please.
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  • From ANON - Webetester01 on June 28, 2005
    Hmmm... interesting. And they say 'Watch out for the nice ones.' Vegeta seems to fit into this catagory here.

    I look forwrd to the next chatper.

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  • From ANON - kit-kit on June 28, 2005
    great chaapter im happy that goku has been accepted into the pack though with todays agrument he may not be in it for long.
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 22, 2005
    Well, this chapter certainly was action packed!! Good job. O.O The details into Vegeta's victory over Frezia were a little disturbing, but that certainly would be something that would push him over the edge into Super Sayian.

    lol, I can just see Goku's face after that kiss. OMG.... so funny.

    Zarbon did have a point, where are they going to put all of those people, but I am glad it is going to be King Vegeta and not Prince Vegeta that has to deal with it.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 22, 2005
    Yay! The skies around Vegeta-sei are clear of the enimey for once.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on June 22, 2005
    yeah everything is going well for them.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on June 20, 2005
    great chapter i hope the IT idea work
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on June 15, 2005
    Another wonderful chapter.

    The insight into Raaven's past is moste helpful in understanding his relationship with Raditz.

    Last but not least, the last couple of statements of the chapter had me rolling with laughter. Gret job!
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 15, 2005
    Well I am glad to see things are sorting themselves out. Vegeta's not pissed at Goku any more and Bardock has welcomed Ravven to the family.

    It was an interesting additional insite you gave into Ravven's past.

    Vegeta being angsty about the 'third-class'. Hmmmm...

    I found the ritual at the end of the chapter interesting. :) I wonder what will happen while making the spirits happy. hehe
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  • From ANON - Macha on June 09, 2005
    O.O Oh my.... Vegeta and Kamala.... *sighs* Well, at least they can be close, even if Kamala is mated to Vegeta's father.


    Goku got his tail back!!!!! Whoot!

    And I do have to wonder how he plans on using IT to help out. lol, I love the fact Vegeta knows he has exactly 12 questions. The sayian certainly thinks ahead, doesn't he?

    I also liked the fact you said that Goku couldn't IT to where there weren't any familar kis. Most people leave that part out. *nods*

    Once again, excellent chapter!!!!
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