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By : industrialmidnight
  • From Tempz99 on January 20, 2007
    :O good. please continue. make chaps even longer.
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  • From ANON - Velika on September 21, 2006
    Now lets get Goku inthis and make it a threesome. heh it's up to you
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  • From ANON - lalala on January 10, 2006
    Wow cool, very hot chapter, update soon.
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  • From ANON - oznerol on January 09, 2006
    wait i just thought of something wouldnt goten be a grown man at this point in time . oh well update
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  • From ANON - oznerol on January 08, 2006
    YOU ACTUALLY UPDATED THIS FIC!! im shocked, shocked i tell you this thing is so old. well update soon Peace out
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  • From BrucesGirl on January 08, 2006
    Wow. Where should I start? This first caught my eye because of the pairing. I'm not a big ChiChi fan, but this just...wow. Puts her in an incredibly different light.

    You write stream-of-conscious which is an extremely hard style to master, and I commend you for it.

    This is absolutely beautiful, and it will be going on my favorites. Please, don't abandon this fiction. It's just amazing.
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  • From Orchideater on January 08, 2006
    Gahh, you write such hot, HARD lemons-- they're awesome! Good to see you're back and posting again. I like the little details in this one: Chichi calling him oujisama and Vegeta calling her by name (seems they're forming a deeper attachment), and especially the little hiccup of Chichi's. Yeah, it used to be that I couldn't stand Chichi either, but she's grown on me as well. Go figure. Bring on the next chappie! I'm dying to see Goku's reaction! I have to see if he'll beat Vegeta to a pulp or join them, or maybe some combination of both. X)
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  • From ANON - Vegeta's Mate on January 07, 2006
    All I can say is...HOT, WILD, AND PASSIONATE! Holy hell! That was great! Loved it...must make you write more!


    LOVE and OH, HELLS YEAHS!

    V.M.
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  • From michellegaeta on January 07, 2006
    ummmm well that was hot..i need more!!! Great job,
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  • From ANON - Maria on January 07, 2006
    OMG

    I have to agree that was brutal. My kind of sex :)
    it's about time you started to write again,but the wait was worth it. Update soon ok!!!!! needs more. ys and i can't wait for goku to come back after that ;P
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  • From ANON - Macha on January 07, 2006
    Well, that was a rather brutal lemon. I really don't think Chichi had any idea was she was in for. *gulps*

    I am very interested to see what happens when Goku enters the mix.

    There was only one thing I didn't care for in this chapter. It went from past tense to present tense. I don't know if you did this on purpose or not, but it threw me off.

    Looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - Kaki on October 03, 2005
    ::pokes head out from under "The Beast Inside"::

    Well, how did I miss this one??

    This is awesome and *odd*, but it works. Kakarot returning could make things "interesting". *If* he's upset, I know he and Vegeta will work out their anger/possessiveness through battle (even if Kakarot returns Vegeta's lust he could still be upset about Vegeta shagging ChiChi), but how will he react towards ChiChi? Will he be mad at her? Disappointed? Hurt? Excited?
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  • From ANON - aoshi4misao on July 28, 2005
    I have never read a fic before that was only Vegeta/ChiChi, but if all of them were as good as yours, then I most definetly would. I've always thought that Vegeta and ChiChi could make it work. I want to read more. I can't wait to find out what else happens. You are doing a very nice job on this fic so far. I love the need between the two of them. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - malimillions on July 10, 2005
    Woah. Um.... *scratches the back of her head* Are you gunna continue this? I hope so! #^^#
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  • From ANON - Velika on June 27, 2005
    Hey, this is good, I was wondering ifthere would be another Vegeta/Chi chi lemon, so when are you goingto make this on a lemon? hehe^_^
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