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Reviews for Moonlight Sessions

By : MissB
  • From ANON - Chiruken on June 14, 2005
    In the real world, protection is the all encompassing important thing when it comes to sex. This should be reflected in fanfiction as well...kinda like encouraging others who read to follow with the practice, ne? However...one must also keep in mind the time frame. For instance...were condoms and birth control even in existence during the time line that Full Metal Alchemist takes place? o.O Realism is also important in fanfiction, I think. All in all...I think the characters should reflect a certain amount of maturity...they must know that there are consequences to their actions (actually, I'm fairly positive that Ed and Al already know about such things due to the mistakes they've made in the past, though that wouldn't be the same kind of consequences in reference to unprotected sex). Also...due to what happened to Roze, I would think that Ed would know even more of what could happen if caution wasn't exerted...so, unless Ed and Winry are serious about their relationship, I honestly don't think he'd get involved physically, just in case she were to get pregnant...not unless he intended to make their relationship permanent. I don't think he would be the kind of person to merely use her for physical gratification unless he was seriously contemplating a future with her. He just doesn't seem like the type to use and leave, consequences be damned, y'know? Winry must also know about the possibility of getting pregnant, since you mentioned in your fic that Auntie Pinako had The Talk with her. The time line (say around 1920's) people really didn't know too much about things like STDs, right? So, the characters can't really be expected to worry about such things. There were a few that they knew of, but I don't think they fully understood the repercussions. There were also rudimentary condoms back then...I believe made from a sheep's intestine, but I could be wrong about that. All I know is that the condoms of that time frame aren't what we know today. As for birth control, I think they may have relied on a rhythm system, or herbal remedies...but I think the herbal remedies were more along the lines of "correcting" the mistake once it occurred. **grimaces** One "herb" that was used frequently in the past to induce miscarriage (essentially abortion) was Mistletoe, though I'm uncertain how it was used or ingested. From what little I know, mistletoe is poisonous. **shrugs**

    I don't know of any of what I said helps, but yeah. There is it...my rambling. ^_^ At any rate, I found the story to be an interesting read and hope to see more in the future.

    Take care!

    ^_^x

    Chiruken
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  • From ANON - Nymphetamine Girl on June 13, 2005
    YAY! Thanks for updating! Another awesome chapter. Hehehe... naughty Winry. And Ed, too. Anywho, about your question... good one. Protection is important in real life, but in a fiction setting, its really up to the writer. The question really is: What do you think Ed and Winry would do? Would they have a 'spurr of moment' type sex in which no protection is involved or would it be more... planned, I guess is the word for it. Either way is fine to me as long as it keeps the two of them IC and is believeable. ;) Write more soon! :)
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  • From on June 13, 2005
    Beautiful chapter! I like how you write the sensitive nature between the characters. As for your question on birth control. It really depends on how it's written. If it's written in a delicate manner, its not a turn off. Or- we can just assume Winry is on the pill lol.
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  • From drake220 on June 12, 2005
    ::begins to cry:: I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
    i need some more edxwin smut and this was a glorious example of edward and winry smuttiness!! smut in its prime i would say!!!BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was sexy and delicious and such a tease. PLEASE continue!! pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nymphetamine Girl on June 11, 2005
    WOOOOT! Finally, more EdxWinry smut. I desire it so. I look forward to more of this!! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - reene on June 11, 2005
    That was definitely a thrilling chapter. Nice job, this is so going on my recommendation list!
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  • From Mikeal on June 11, 2005
    Please...more!! More!
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