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Reviews for Moonlight Sessions

By : MissB
  • From ANON - Raneynr Lerrqu on September 05, 2006
    I loved the idea, flows really well. I enjoyed it and look forward to move of your work.
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  • From Shadowfan20 on October 23, 2005
    Very cute! I loved it, keep up the good work:)
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  • From thebigW on September 18, 2005
    "fluid, legato movements"... that's fantastic stuff. This is almost poetry, the way you write. Winry's knowing, almost professional ministrations during the second encounter almost belied the fact that it was her first time, but that's o.k., maybe she's a natural. This was so good. I just wish there was more back-story that led up to her ultimate decision.

    As far as contraceptives, I think that a disclaimer at the front or the end is enough. Most readers are mature enough to not need a reminder, and kids should not be on this site anyway.

    If you want to be too cool, have Ed use alchemy to create a condom just before...

    W.
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  • From drake220 on August 11, 2005
    god, i LOVE this story. it's so great every time i read it!!
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  • From ANON - Alex C. on July 30, 2005
    I loved this story. It damn well is the best I have ever read. I love you. I really do. PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Erica on July 15, 2005
    OH MY GOD. This is the most wonderful PWP I've ever read. Seriously. Thank you. Oh, and extra points for thinking of condoms. Hahah. You're my PWP hero.
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  • From ANON - quirkyslayer (not signed in) on July 11, 2005
    This was fecking awesome! I've been looking for something like this! Girl, you made my afternoon with this story. Kudos to you and I look forward to more Ed/Winry from you. ^^
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  • From ANON - dinkscythe on July 02, 2005
    ah, waffy, resolute first-times... think you pulled it off rather well! ^_^ yay for winryxedxwinry
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  • From ANON - Bratty on June 28, 2005
    Were it biologically possible, I would have your babies RIGHT NOW. Just. God. Thank you. So much. Finally. Good EdxWin smut. Oh. My. I think I'll cry ;o;
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  • From ANON - Fuuzaki on June 27, 2005
    hey.. well... i'm greatly enjoying this. and on the protection issue. i think that done right without the "damn i hate these things, but i can't get her pregnant" thoughts on the male's part, it is not distracting. sometimes it's ok to leave it out, especially with couples that are so obviously perfect ^_^
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  • From ANON - Dreamie on June 25, 2005
    This is just a wonderful read. Thank you for sharing their special moment with us!
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  • From ANON - reene on June 24, 2005
    Wow- what a lemon. Best Winry X Ed lemon I've ever read. I love how you pulled off the condom use; it wasn't degrading or un-romantic in any way, shape or form. Cheers * Nice way to promote condom use* ^.^ Nuff said about that. I loved the WAFF stuff, it was a great change of pace and a real breath of fresh air. I hope you write some more WinXEd fics.
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  • From drake220 on June 24, 2005
    more!?!?!?! is your name 'Angel of Smut'????? I think so! hot hot hot heat!! loved the scene- sexy, realistic and do you know, you're the first author that actually says how damn hard it is not to move once a guy is in. I imagine it takes a lot out of a fellow. good for ed! i'll be on the lookout for your stuff!
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  • From ANON - Beautiful Blood on June 24, 2005
    Ha ha ha! Brilliant! The only thing I have to say is, why can't I be Winry?!?! *laughs* Shall you make one of Roy and Riza??? That would be marvelous and...well. Great!
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  • From ANON - P.C. on June 24, 2005
    Aw maaaaaannnn! What's the deal with the condoms! I still think that since this is a fanFICTION that you didn't have to put that in....It was still a great chapter, though^_^
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