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By : MissB
  • From ANON - wild seven on August 17, 2007
    Oh, wait, I... have read it? o.O Sorry then, I really couldn't remember reading it.
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  • From ANON - wild seven on August 17, 2007
    Yeah, hi. I'm an author on this site, I'm just not logged in at the moment, and I noticed that I saved your story to my favorites, but never got around to reading it. So I read it, and couldn't really find fault in it. ^^ Nice work. I've stopped writing FMA for a while, but there's at least one smut fic I wrote with Ed and Winry. ::shrugs:: Anyway, ja ne! :) (:
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  • From Roguex1979 on July 08, 2007
    I really like this story. I've read it about 5 times. Winry is a good friend and I'm glad she got through to him.
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  • From on October 09, 2006
    Wow.... that was really very moving. I really liked it, truly. Poor Ed... ::sad::.
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  • From ANON - Yosuke on December 30, 2005
    Man, that was probably one of the best stories I have ever read, I loved the way you wrote it, that was just absolutly amazing, I was blown away. I don't submit to AFF, but I do write fanfictions and I can only hope to get to the level you are. Thank you for writing such an awsome story.
    -Yosuke
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2005
    oh god i loved the way he was so foceful.

    please make more.god i wish i could do winry!
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  • From ANON - Lilia on November 24, 2005
    Oh...wow. That was powerful. You handled the characters really well, their motives and reactions were very belieavable. Great work, and I'm happy it ended on a positive note. :)
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  • From ANON - vtsfy on October 09, 2005
    I agree, it's hard to consider this a rape fic, because there was no actual rape happening. It was just role-play. Convincing role-play, but RP nonetheless. I think it was very sweet, what Winry did for Ed. I'm not sure many people would do that. *shrugs*

    I'm going to write some smut, eventually... I've tried my hand at it before, and I MAJORLY sucked. So I'm a little scared to try it again. lol

    Oh, and as a side-note for your little "challenge"... I read somewhere-- Cosmo, I think-- that it's been done in a Victoria's Secret dressing room. I'm 100% sure FMA doesn't have a Vic.'s, but anyway. It can be any lengerie store.
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  • From ANON - Tallwhitemocha on September 18, 2005
    This was a damn good story. I was impressed with how you handled the psycological aspect of the story. Ed's need to re-capture a sense of control, winry's accomodation of this, and ed's subsequent mending all seemed rather believable to me. Kudo's in handling a tough subject so well:)

    P.S.
    I have a little something for your challenge about the craziest, most public, or most taboo place someone has had sex. A homeless person's shopping cart.
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  • From ANON - Dreamscapes on August 13, 2005
    Very good, I'm impressed with your style and how you are able to take a sensitive topic and give it a positive message. I'm referring to your way of revenge in Edward towards Envy upon locating him. Very good. :)
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  • From ANON - just telllin on July 12, 2005
    heres some places ... on the roof ... in the library or any other store after closing ... or in a public rest room ... oh yea and in the bath room of youre house while you whole familys in the house
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  • From ANON - Kelly on July 06, 2005
    I usually read yaoi, but I really enjoyed this! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Aloe on July 03, 2005
    Well done & realistic.
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  • From DixieRiley on July 01, 2005
    I truly do love your way of conducting Ed/Win. =) This is wonderful, and while I would add in my own... well, I get distracted whenever I write smut, LoL. I bring you the gift of strange sex though:

    There's a powerbox behind my house, lined right up with my fence and sort of placed in an alcove, there. How many teenagers have sat upon that box, hidden by a very large tree, and tossed off their virginity? I COULD NOT BEGIN to recount the many times during the summer I heard the young cries of ecstasy... "Ow," "Oh my god, what IS that?" "Where the hell are you trying to put your fingers!?" "I'm gonna fall!" etc. Sadly, they will no longer be covered as of next week - new fence.

    Hasta - this is a very... Actually, I just wrote a nice little thing about Hastas here, and I've decided that I might, very well, try it out, myself. The writing, that is, not the Hasta-sex. Scratch Hastas!

    Damnit. I've seen some *funny* things, and some *strange* locations, but I can't recall them, now that they're being requested! =( Oh, well. I'm sure you'll get some crazy responses.

    =*
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  • From ANON - Nymphetamine Girl on June 29, 2005
    Yay! Finally finished! What a nice ending to a very nice story. Thanks so much for writing this wonderful read! You're right, this place needs A LOT more EdxWinry smut. And it would also help if they were all as good as this one! ;) Sorry, I couldn't think of any wild places to have sex that are at least semi-realistic. I'm thinking a train, but I think that's been done before. Well, whatever you come out with next I'll be sure to read it! Can't wait and thanks again for this sad, and yet sweet, story! :)
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