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By : chayron
  • From ANON - CrimsonSin on October 10, 2006
    I hate cliffhangers and it the second to the last chapter to I’m on edge Vegeta can't die I would be so pist if that happened. PLASE UP DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on September 18, 2006
    wow i loved the that the baby was born i hope vegeta doesn't die
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  • From ANON - Irol on September 18, 2006
    wow, thats crazy. poor goku he was so worried abut vegeta he left the baby at home. vegeta won't be happy about that when he wakes up i imagine...this was great as always.
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  • From ANON - Kitana Chou on September 18, 2006
    WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    What happens next!!!!!

    You can't just...... *dies*
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  • From ANON - The w00t Girl on September 18, 2006
    Aw, poor Goku and Vegeta, won't life ever throw them a bone XD maybe not a bone but make things a bit easier for them. Thought it is good and glad to see that you've updated it. :D
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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on September 17, 2006
    Jesus Christ!!!! This was a mountain of emotions. You certainly know how to make me jumpo off my seat with this things...

    Vegeta is going to be ok, right?

    Right?

    X_X
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  • From ANON - Dragon on September 17, 2006
    I love this chapter I am happy that Vageta had the baby but I am sad to see the story end. I can not what to read the next chapter I just have to know what happen to Vageta I just like Goku for them to go though so much together and have the possibility that Vegeta might die is too much. SO PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SssssOOOONNNNN.
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  • From ANON - Kareen on September 17, 2006
    omg omg omg fuck fuck fuck fuck. u better not kill vegeta..omg..ppl will HATE you..holy crap...do not let him die..omg i'm lke crying and freaking out and screaming all at once. sht shit shit shit shit. o man please x 7568356 don't let vegeta die. whats her name just came back( i can't spell it) omfg don't let him die..this would be the worst story if he did( k well not ACTUALY the worst) but i would like die..don't. let.vegeta. die
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  • From ANON - Lavinia on September 17, 2006
    You son of a bitch! How could you end a chapter in such a point??!! You realise I'll die waiting for your next update??!! How could you, you mean mean.... AUTHOR! No cliffies! their horrible...
    please pleaseeee update soon... or you'll be responsible of my death.... *falls crying on the floor*
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  • From ANON - curious 36 on September 16, 2006
    I LOVE CHAPTER 30 I AM ON THE EDGE OF MY CHAIR FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I LOVE YOUR YOUR WRITING STYLE. PLAESE CONTINUE TO WRITTNG MORE ABOUT THE SAYIANS WE ALL KNOW AND LOVE TOO READ ABOUT. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - bob on September 06, 2006
    Lol, I don't know what but I thought the ending was so funny. All of them are just .... crazy but that's why I love it!!!!
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  • From ANON - Remy on September 02, 2006
    Good story; I love watching how your writing evolves ^-^
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  • From ANON - curious 36 on August 24, 2006
    i was worried because i did not see you post for a while. i totally enjoy this story. i can't believe it is seventeen!!!!!! i would love to had read vegeta reaction to kamala news. i love the direction the story is going. also what appendage is vegeta talking about ? to my thinking only his nipples should be getting large because of mammary glands or did he form breasts? i am sure if goku is enjoying both very much. plus how will kamala and gohan fight to mate when kamala is pregnant? i can't wait to read more. you are a excellent writer with great imagination.
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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on August 24, 2006
    Okay, this were a lot of information, emotion an another "otions"

    I have to say that I'm happy to read about a new baby, and the image of Vegeta looking himself in the mirror with that precious balloon, je je

    Andrew the Seventeen!!!!!!! O_O

    Well, you have a mountain of imagination...
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  • From ANON - kareen on August 23, 2006
    heyy. well u did it again. another sweet chapter . yeah . u did explain how to pronounce his name really good. i had it rite the first time so it was all good. this was a great chapter. i liked the part where goku was like i'm not having my grandchild grow up without a father and then gohan was about to say somethig about goten . i was like burn! lol i was scared tho. i thot they were gonna leave and i was like omg. please no .lol aww and i felt so bad for vegeta. he's insecure about his body. poor baby. lol

    well i'm talking much too much again. but yeah i really love this story. i check everyday to see if it's updated. and if it's not i go on myspace to occupy my time. lol .

    anywho .ttyl
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