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By : chayron
  • From ANON - kit-kit on August 23, 2006
    wow i never thought andrew and 17 were the same and raaveen wasn't mad.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on August 23, 2006
    Wonderful! I hope everything gets sorted out soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Irol on August 23, 2006
    i love you! this is great, i've been missing this fic, i love it!
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  • From ANON - dragon on August 23, 2006
    I like this story and all but when is it going to get back to being about Goku and Vegeta.
    I can see why you are writing about Kamala and Gohan to thy up loses ends but enough is enough this story is supposed to be about Goku and Vegeta a not Kamala and Gohan. Love the story but please get back to who the story is supposed to be about.

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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on August 10, 2006
    Ah! news things to watch!

    Yeah, I like this fic, the whole time that I expense reading the formers prequels is worthy, a lot. The way, the words, everything is perfect.

    You know you're right!!!

    n_n

    Keep doing!!
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  • From ANON - kareen <3 on August 09, 2006
    hey i love this story...i had to stop reading it for a while bc i had no internet for a while. the last time i read it was when goku and vegeta were having some problems or whatever and vegeta stayed at capsule corp. for a while. so when i got my internet back like yesterday i came straight here and was like holy hell...look at all the new chapters. hmm so i have a problem. and maybe, i don't know, maybe u already aswered this question but how do u pronounce KARELA's name?, because i'm pronouncing it like 100 different ways.

    lol whatever i'm dumb like that. so um i really like how it's about goku and vegeta's pregnancy, yet you have other couples in here too. i like that alot. makes it a real story instead of just another group of chapters on a fanfiction site.

    and that andrew guy..he reminds me of a certain android. android 17? hmm??..

    oh. oh. oh and PLEASE do not have anyone dying in this story i beg of you. that would really make my life hell. lol. i was already so so so sad when u killed ahrae. (thats how u spell it rite?) and now they can't bring herback. o but nvm they can! cloneing rite?

    wow i am talking way too much. oo and don't end it rite at the birth of the baby. make it like so it's like 2 years later or something. lol whatever don't listen to me. it's ot my endding to write. my badd

    hmm ok well i guess i should go now. i'm talking much to much.


    your story's are kick ass.

    so um peace out?
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on August 08, 2006
    wow raveen got a friend
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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on July 30, 2006
    Hello there!!!!!!!!

    O_O

    A lemon!!!... yummy... je je je

    At least the things are going to change a bit now, but ...

    What are you planning to do to my Veggie? He can't suffer anymore! T_T Don't be evil..

    I was wondering if Vegeta will be agreed to fed his baby like Raaven XD

    Anyway, don't listen me! I'm noisy and crazy, you keep writing...

    You know you're right!! n_n
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on July 29, 2006
    and to think vegeta had the nerve to say that gohan and kamala wasn't having sex im starting to think the prince of all sayians is losing his touch. of course i think gohan and kamala could of found a better place to have sex then inside raveen house in a chair. im sure raveen is going to be mad when he sees that broken chair.
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  • From ANON - Lavinia on July 28, 2006
    you know... Kamala means horrible in Finish...
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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on July 25, 2006
    Hiya!!!!!


    n_n


    Gorgeous like always, jejeje well, Trunks show a face that I din't expect to see to soon but at leat Goten is alive... I don't know what to say because this chapter was one of my favorites...

    Keep writing, you know you're right
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  • From ANON - bree on July 22, 2006
    yes! update, at least im not reading at 5 in the morning this time eh? this is a great fic, can't wait for the rest.
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  • From ANON - curious 36 on July 22, 2006
    i love your stories especially this one. Please continue to write more in the coming future. i would love to see ravaan with someone maybe raditz in the future. trunks and goten relationship blossum and mature and alo gohan and kamala. i am love to see goku and vegata act with a growing family and scene with them and little vegata.i just love reading your update sometimes more than once. you are a wonderful writer with a great imagine to.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on July 22, 2006
    ok i think were getting somewhere with kamala and gohan
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  • From ANON - bree on July 19, 2006
    this is an amazing story. all three of them, i've read them all in just the past couple days. stayed up till 5 last ngiht. im so ready to read the next chapter of this one!
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