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By : chayron
  • From ANON - Michiru Loves Haruka on November 29, 2005
    Very good written, that was a very interresting sight of Vegeta's past.. Goku can be such a ninny sometimes *rolling eyes* some things are better let unknown wouldn't you say? hm...

    I didn't expect this Zarbon I really enjoyed it *chuckles*

    aawwww..... The ending of this chapter was sweet though, well done.

    I'll be looking out for more of this story, so succes with writting the rest.

    Later^^
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  • From ANON - ~anz~ on November 29, 2005
    well at least now we know WHY he has panic attacks...

    Good for Zarbon...I would've killed the snivelling thinks he's all that bastard too. Humiliate then annihilate... now that's the ticket...

    as for the large hips and nice tailed Saiyan: ah, well... the best laid plans...
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 28, 2005
    nice chapter i like finding out more about vegeta
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on November 28, 2005
    Cool chapter. Now we understand where Vegeta is coming from.

    :D


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  • From ANON - Serpent on November 27, 2005
    Cute story so far, i can't wait for more. Love it love it love it!! more pelase!
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  • From ANON - Michiru Loves Haruka on November 25, 2005
    WOWIE! I can't wait to read more this is AWESOME..
    Darn I was really holding my breath while reading, thank goodness nothing bad happened to Vegita and their baby *sighs relieved*

    PLZ update soon.
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  • From Kugatsu on November 25, 2005
    there was a big chunk in teh middle that threw me off and really just seemed expository for no reason at all. Over allthough, I'm so happy to see an update.

    I still love the story.
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  • From Camaro on November 22, 2005
    :) That's right Smile.. So why don't you just unglue your lips from TheChiChiSlaughterHouse's ass and go ahead and kiss mine. Besides, in MY opinion uke Vegeta is a complete slap in the face to the actual character Vegeta in the series. Nothing more than a sniveling, pitiable moron that scampers around like a domesticated house pet, wagging his figurative tale to appease his flawless "master" Goku.

    Is anyone else here seeing a contrast in characters?

    Now, I'm all for originality but can't we at least leave a tiny bit of dignity to the original Vegeta? I find it highly offensive that TCCSH calls seme Vegeta a fad when I've written him that way and made a fucking masterpiece out of it. I don't think it really has that much to do with uke/seme so much as the author writing them that way (though I still will say, I've never met an author I thought wrote uke Vegeta even mildly well).

    I dunno.... maybe it just has something to do with MINORS on an ADULT site preferring him that way. Ignore it Chayron (if you choose to) and keep doing what you're doing. Still impresses me how fast you update these things!

    Camaro
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on November 13, 2005
    nice chapter i thought it was very relaxed and easygoing
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  • From ANON - SAFFRONCHAN on October 19, 2005
    VERY GOOD STORY BUT IS THE BABY A BOY OR A GIRL I THINK IT WOULD BE A VERY GOOD PLOT TWIST IF IT WAS A GIRL I LIKED THE STORY WRIGHT ON
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  • From ANON - Smile on October 02, 2005
    Well since you yourself said that the review button is here for a reasonI have a fewquetions. Now I'm sure you didn't mean to offend chichislaughterhouse or anything but to Criticize someone and to give them advice are two different things. You put your own personal feelings into your review because you view Ukes as something different. I know that not all ukes are portrayed as hopeless wimps but to be a uke you must have a seme and wheter you like it or not being a uke is not commonly known for being the stronger of the two in a relationship. To say that the very act of portraying a uke as such would take away from the character is like saying that everyone must write without ooc's. Some poeple like to write differently and in your stories while vegeta may not be a bride he is the one being a uke and his seme protects him. I'm not saying this to be mean but to hope that you see that to yell at someone for what they choose to write is wrong. If you like "mature" writers I suggest you not read any other stories because we all start out as amateurs and we all have our own ideas. Don't be so harsh and then fake an apology that still sends across your disgust. It only makes you look immature.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on October 02, 2005
    Ooh good one.

    Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on October 01, 2005
    nice
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  • From ANON - bob on September 11, 2005
    wow that chapter had a lot of ups and downs and one of these days i'll get around to reading deep circle but i've been a little busy lately. great chpater update soon!
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  • From Kugatsu on August 29, 2005
    Awww trunks and his daddy! So sweeet!
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