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By : Suisheu
  • From ANON - cara9001 on July 27, 2014
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - vegetachik7 on July 18, 2006
    Hey, I really like this story! Haha! Yes, I must say I really enjoyed reading the internal conflict within Vegeta. You really get to see what's going on inside his head and how confused he must be with his emotions. Good Goku/Vegeta relationship and great use of details of descriptions. I love both characters in this story and I hope that things work out. Great stuff!
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on July 14, 2005
    Oh, poor Goku. Such a wonderfully sad emotional chapter without being overdone. I love how you showed how he felt rather than told us. And the little details like the annoying curtain were perfect. Keep up the spectacular work. (And don't worry, that wasn't the end of Quest - I even went back and added a note to that effect just for you. *g*)
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 14, 2005
    Poor Goku. I look forward to your next update.

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  • From Kugatsu on July 14, 2005
    A call from Bulma...eh.

    I suppose next chapter they'll be too late to see him off or Goku will go with him?

    And there will be...space smut?


    Please space smut...


    LOL! Just kidding. I do like fics with a plot. Just ask PixelGoddess...
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  • From ANON - dfs on July 13, 2005
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 08, 2005
    Well done!

    I can see why it was such a challenge to write this chapter.
    The way you portray Vegeta's internal conflict is almost tangeable.

    I wonder what will happen when/after they part ways, assuming that happens.
    Goku's thoughts on the current events are also very moving. He cares so much for his friend/lover.

    I look forard to the next chapter. Take your time. When I first started out I tried to get my chapters out quickly,
    and they were riddled with mistakes. Your writing is very encouraging to me and I look forward to reading any more
    stories you write.
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  • From ANON - Pixelgoddess on July 07, 2005
    Ah - you are a success! You've gotten your first idiot review. *g*

    I find myself totally bewildered here - but that is a good thing. I feel bad for both Goku and Vegeta. I wonder what Vegeta is so afraid of happening that he would run away? He has never struck me as someone to run from a problem. Goku seems to understand Vegeta better than the prince understands himself.
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  • From Kugatsu on July 07, 2005
    This is hurting me! Damn it Vegeta you're so stubborn!
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  • From ANON - tenji888 on July 07, 2005
    if you were writing your own story with your own characters you would be less subject to ridicule. if you're queer you're queer.

    LOVE SHOOK MY HEART is great compendium of utterly lesbian fiction. vegeta and goku are not gay...theyaren'teven real. you make yourself look much the fool.


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  • From ANON - Macha on July 05, 2005
    Holy Moly... what do you have going on here? So discriptive, and yet I am left wondering what the heck is going on as much as Vegeta is.

    WHAT?! Time to leave Earth? AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaahhhh....

    Excellent story, PLEASE continue.
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  • From ANON - Hitchhiker on July 05, 2005
    Love it! really intrigued by the two contradictory voices in vegeta's head tho...maybe the poor guy is finally starting to lose it... anyway, please keep it up! and PLEASE don't let goku let him leave! You can't let th evil voice win!
    xx
    HH
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 05, 2005
    Very colorful descriptions! I like this fic. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - bob on July 05, 2005
    ahh!! vegeta's leaving?! what's gonna happen??? and don't say you're not a great writer you are, you're very descriptive and almost poetic ain ur descriptions but yea please contineu i want to see what happens!!!
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  • From Kugatsu on July 04, 2005
    WOW! Chichi and Pixel are here...*can't wait for thier next fics*

    I can't wait for your next chapter as well! This was good and I really want to know what happens! I can see how these two toher authors influence you...it's good to have IDOLS!!!!
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