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By : ZaliaChimera
  • From Koigokoro on August 20, 2009
    very well written. Not actually 'fluff' in my mind, but definitely not a tragedy. I would like to see it continue. Find out those consequences, both good and bad, that Roy was talking of. I think it could make an interesting first chapter.

    Best of luck.
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  • From MustangsHavoc on June 13, 2007
    That was so sweet! Passonate slow and caring! I love it! It made me all mushy inside litterally and figurativly!
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  • From ANON - CallistaSky on September 22, 2005
    Aw, that was sweet. ;] I really liked this story; thanks for writing it.
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  • From ANON - clarechan on August 17, 2005
    *cluthces chest over heart* Oh my....that was some steamy writing! It was so ... realistic. The little details, like the eyelashes against the neck when Roy kisses Ed. All of that makes this one of the best one-shots that I've read. Beautiful!
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  • From EmbersEye on August 15, 2005
    That was really quite adorable, but I think it needs at least one follow-up chapter to be truly complete. ;)
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  • From ANON - Ri on August 15, 2005
    It was so sad in the begining but it was hot in the end. Great job!!!!
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  • From ANON - nB on August 14, 2005
    Very nice, if you ask me!!!
    ( > .^)

    Character depiction was apt (especially Roy Mustang, and the way Ed effects him), the FLUFF was just enough to make you fee;l warm. Not the oft seen SWEET-enough-to-jellify-hell-three-times-over Fluff.

    I really liked "Offerings."
    Hope you'll put up your next fic soon, 'cos I'm definitely going to read it!!!XD

    *wink* nB
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  • From Chiruken on August 14, 2005
    Sweet and poignant. I wasn't sure what to expect, exactly, just from the summary, so I was pleasantly surprised to find a sweetly romantic fluff-ball inside. ^_^ Had to read it three times before I finally reviews. **laughs** Even now, I know I haven't managed to convey exactly how much I enjoyed reading this fic.

    ^_^x

    Chiruken
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  • From Irukichan on August 14, 2005
    This story is great ^_^ I really like the emotional background to it and the fact that it's not just pure PWP. Also, it's great that Roy just doesn't jump and take advantage of him. I enjoyed the descriptive writing style of this and really loved the smut scene. You did an excellent job! Hope to see more Ed/Roy fanfictions from you ^_~
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