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Reviews for Anticipation

By : Robyn
  • From ANON - VegetaDaimoh on February 12, 2006
    lol! i really hope you write more! that was a cliffhanger ending, with vegeta walking in. really, this story caught me by surprise, i normally don't read stories about videl or goku, so consider my enjoyment of the story a testament to your skills... please, write more!
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  • From ANON - lady k on February 11, 2006
    I have to say that I am greatly pleased with this story. The pacing and how you handle the characters really make this an enjoyable piece. The sex scenes are tastfully done and thankfully not over done. Hope to see more from you!
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  • From ANON - V.M. on February 05, 2006
    O_O Oops! Vegeta-chan is going to make things difficult, I just know it. He always seems to walk in at the wrong moment...is that just his timing or is it that he's just that damn sneeky? Anyway I love this chapter, flows well, smooth transition from "day of the 'spar'" to weeks later, and (you know me) Vegeta's timing was absolutely the perfect backdrop to either a helluva lot of angst or some princly blackmail...only part b will tell the tale.


    ~tacklehuggleglomps!~


    V.M. : ~happy dance~
    Videl : @_@ I am so dead!
    Vegeta : ~dances~ I got dirt on Kakarott!
    Goku : ~looks around~ Where? I don't see dirt.
    V.M., Videl, Vegeta : ~facevault~
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  • From Orchideater on January 29, 2006
    Thank you, person who told Pix to tell you to write more! *content sigh* Ahhh.... updates. Interesting philosopy on relationships and sex that Goku has. LOL I am wondering if Chichi already knows he looks for sex elsewhere (since she’s not up for it anymore and he says he still loves her like no other). I feel sorry for Gohan being cuckolded... but the GkVi sex is so hot!! Shame on me. X3 The part that really stood out for me, and the part I liked best, was in the lemon where Goku loosened his grip on her hair when he saw it was starting to hurt her. It was such a nice little touch that shows that even though the sex is rough, he’s still concerned for her well-being and enjoyment. More please?
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  • From Makota2112 on January 28, 2006
    That was simply HOT!!!

    *Drools*

    You certainly need to update this. Do it! Do it now, I say!

    I think I need to go back and re-read. You really have a way with words.

    Well done!
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  • From michellegaeta on January 25, 2006
    bad bad bad
    Well not like you think
    A sob? Poor Vegeta he must be wanting something??
    HMMMM
    Are we going to see XXX?
    Good chapt , I see now it will continue...
    thank you!
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  • From BScarz on January 25, 2006
    I've been waiting for a finfic like this. Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Xero Sky on January 24, 2006
    *shakes fist* Damn you for making me read DBZ het!

    Your Goku is *wonderful*, and his reason for cheating on his wife are pretty IC, I think.

    Also, more Vejiita is always a good thing, no matter how he might complicate things. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Maccam on January 24, 2006
    *BLOWS* HOT HOT HOT DAMN THAT WAS HOT. THANK YOU PIX'S *kisses*. please keep writing more chapters. I can't wait to read how vegeta feel or sees about this Hmmmmm. maybe he might want to get on the action ^_^

    UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Velika on January 24, 2006
    Oh, this is going to be good, Vegeta in the picture now, Please , please you gotta write this. igotta know what Vegeta's reaction is.
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  • From ANON - Little_Bitch on January 24, 2006
    O____O EEEEK!!!! Whats HE doing there??? Oh man I wonder what Vegeta is gonna do....*cough*threeway*cough* >_> Anyway, nice, hot lemon!!! Im fanning myself. ACK!!! MORE!!!!!
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  • From michellegaeta on January 03, 2006
    Forgot about this one too damn!! it is on my recommeded list!!! I search for these Not too many Gokua and Videl pairings!! This is so wicked just like
    Goku should be....Haha!! Great Job thank you for making me hot for Goku !!!
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  • From Orchideater on November 17, 2005
    Gasp! A second chapter! Why the heck does this story only have two stars? Probably the fault of a disgruntled Gohan/Videl fan. I'll fix that (now that I know how the star rating thingie works *sweatdrop*). I wasn't expecting a continuation, but I'm glad you're giving it a try and I look forward to seeing what you'll do with this tasty story. It was nice to have Videl's thoughts and emotions on what happened to her, how a forbidden part of her hoped it would happen again yet she didn't want to lose her marriage and family over it. I liked how you gave us a little picture of day-to-day Son life out in the woods, and Goku's methods of earning money were perfect for him. Another steamy hot lemon, yet strangely enough I think my favorite part was the image of shirtless sweaty Goku chopping wood *Homer Simpson-esque droooool*
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  • From ANON - Wow on November 05, 2005
    I really liked that...great couple. Unusual pairing. Write more, please!
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  • From ANON - V.M. on November 05, 2005
    Posted from LiveJournal:


    V.M.: O_O; HELL FUCKING YEAH! This was so awesome! I totally love this. ~grins~ Looks like the muse is working in my favor, chappy two of this delectable little fic outshinned chappy one. ~does the cabbagepatch~ Go Macha, it's your birthday! Go Macha! ^_^


    Love ya

    V.M.


    Macha: And the award for the best discriptive comment to a post goes to Vegeta's Mate. For almost making me spit out my coffee.

    Thank's VM. I am glad you liked it. You thought this was better than chapter 1 huh? Hmm... see, I thought chapter 1 was better, but tells you what I know. hehe

    Macha


    V.M.: ~Takes a bow and wipes tears from her eyes~ I want to thank everyone who helped me on my way to becoming the best in the descriptive comment genre... lol!

    I seem to have that effect on people...ThePrincesJewel seems to think I am a bit of a hoot when I am in the right mood...which is most of the time!

    Thanks for writing such a great edition!

    ~tacklehuggleglomps!~

    V.M.
    ~end jl post~

    P.S. I hope you don't mind me posting this here...it was too funny not to share. I love this fic and you, of course, for writing it!
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