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Reviews for Anticipation

By : Robyn
  • From Ice on October 21, 2009
    Wow, what a pleasant surprise in the first chapter. Goku is such a sly devil in this story...I love it! It can't possibly end at chapter 9. I hope to read more from you. :)

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  • From Myrna13 on September 29, 2009
    WOW!! I was TOTALLY dumbstrucked!! OMG I just read the first chapter and it was awesome!! I didn't realize it was Goku until she said it! Way to go, girl! I will read the other chapters now... Holy crap that was good!! See ya! =)
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  • From ANON - desu on May 03, 2008
    Oh my :D that's hot.
    Goku
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  • From KiotenDancer on December 31, 2007
    *drools* Nice.... very nice. I even liked the yaoi scene and I'm not into yaoi!
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  • From ANON - citrusbaby on November 08, 2007
    pleeeease tell me this is still going on!! this has to be one of the BEST dbz lemons i've ever read. since i don't really check this site so much, much less the dbz section, can you possibly send an email when you update? would be very much appreciated!

    looking forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Froot Loops on May 03, 2007
    Good story. It'd be cool if you expanded on the Bulma/Vegeta thing. That seemed interesting.
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  • From michellegaeta on May 02, 2007
    holy sh-t! SOrry about that...That is an ultimate thing for me!!!! my god she didnt! Damn I have a whole new vision of Gohan.... omg!
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  • From ANON - Drake on February 16, 2007
    This was such a pile of Bullshit. Gohan could of at least raped that slut, broken a few bones, rip her hair out, while fisting her or something. Slut deserves it.
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  • From ANON - Sonsofia on October 26, 2006
    Lovely. Goku is hot! Videl is so lucky. Was she really that shocked? I don't think so, how could she not know? Well, I didn't know so I suppose I can see. You really caught me off guard. I thought it was Gohan too but Goku... Wow. This was beautiful. She's addicted, end of story! Will Gohan ever be as good as his father? Goku was always better than him at everything even macking his girl! Ha!
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  • From ANON - Videl161 on October 22, 2006
    Is this the end? I love this story!
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  • From michellegaeta on September 22, 2006
    fucking awsome... loved the side story in the GR
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  • From ANON - ? on September 22, 2006
    Oh my dear kami! Goku?!!! That was ingenious!!! Man that was hot.
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  • From Orchideater on September 22, 2006
    Woah! Aggressive and possessive Gohan is always an interesting spin on his usually placid personality. I could really feel the danger in the air about him when he was re-staking his claim on Videl. Yeah, it is sad though that he couldn't be passionate about their sex without the jealousy goading him. It was nice to see him and Videl chumming around and having fun as lovers-- it seems like they have a good chance of patching things up and working it out.
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  • From ANON - Beth on September 20, 2006
    I certainly was surprised by the inital twist! I dutifully kept reading and I must say it is going great! I really like how you keep it at a lust only affair. You can read the naughty parts ::fans herself:: while not getting your heart broken. Not that there isn't drama related to it (and that is being handled quite well) but it's not so consuming that you can't pay attention to the good parts! Please, please! Keep up with the writing! I get together with a group of friends and we share stories that we've either read (with proper credit given) or written ourselves. I've shared a few that I've seen here, and this will definately be added to that list! We shall be biting our nails waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From maccam on September 19, 2006
    Holy shit* damn that was hot, i love the way gohan behaved here. i was hoping that there would be a threesome with videl goku and gohan, but as i read this it won't happen. great chapter!!
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