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Reviews for Surprises

By : LynnGryphon
  • From ANON - Supi-Chan1026 on May 10, 2006
    hmmmmmm.... I think i like the writing style of the prolouge and chapter 1 better. They give more detail as to what's going on. the last two chapters kind of confused me. when did they get injured? why are they grown up? why is there a war if it ended a year ago?

    don't sweat it though i like the idea very original keep up the good work and good luck
    ----Courtney
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  • From ANON - The Yaoi Mistress on May 09, 2006
    seems pretty interesting, i hope you update soon, and if you have this story on ff.net i really apresiate, i have acount over there, so i cqan now the updates. does Quatre's clone is a girl?

    continue it.

    see you
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