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  • From ANON - cv on January 25, 2007
    good

  • From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2007
    This is getting SO exciting! Ah! I can't believe that Vegeta fell for such a trick...I can't believe Kakarot would do such a tricky thing! I really love this and now I have to wonder how evil Kakarot will react towards Vegeta now that he knows the prince would rather have the real Goku back. Gohan is in trouble and hopefully he and Vegeta can get Goku back! I'm expecting to see some angsty, terrifying, action-packed...stuff coming up...and I'm excited. Great stuff!

  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on January 24, 2007
    I just shivered when you guys cut Krillin mouth in half.EWWW but it was visicous at the same time! Update!

  • From ANON - KingKakarot on January 23, 2007
    I won't lie, I laughed my ass off at this. Very great and detailed, Krillins death had me cracking up! Sorry, but it did. Kakarot is so evil, its so good. Continue, by all means. The gore always amuses me and you guys always add the right amount of it. Thanks for updating! >:}

  • From ANON - DeathNote on January 22, 2007
    Very good, wow....I can't even explain but I loved the part when goku said, "Wear your blood, your death, with honor." That was just gorgeous, update.

  • From ANON - vegetachik7 on January 13, 2007
    Oh, poor Vegeta! I'm seeing some angsty situations in the future. I can't wait! Really good chapter. I like the little details about Vegeta having really bad luck, as usual. I love how perceptive he is. He knows how this whole situation could get worse and how he needs to act to let Kakarotto think he's enjoying it. I only hope that Gohan moves quickly enough to save the prince. I felt so bad for both Vegeta and Gohan when Mr. and Mrs. Briefs were thrown out the house. How awful for them to see that...and how terrifying, too. Kakarotto is nothing but a crazed killer! I like the downtrodden, hopepless feelings they have...but I also like how this chapter threw small tidbits of humor, such as Vegeta's thoughts to this whole problem and how he would "perform". Quite great. I look forward to the next chapter.

  • From ANON - Death Note on January 13, 2007
    Nice chapter Update soon

  • From ANON - vegetachik7 on January 06, 2007
    Oooo...terror-filling. Goku has definitely gone off the deep end. I'm excited to see how Vegeta will react when Kakarot decides to MAKE him his mate. And I worry for Gohan, too. I hope he's smart enough and brave enough to save himself, Vegeta, and return Goku back to normal. Great chapter...I shall be looking forward to the next one!

  • From ANON - Death Note on January 06, 2007
    Vegeta is smart.

  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on January 06, 2007
    Excellent job! It seems the story has taken in unexpected turn. I cannnot wait for the next update!

  • From ANON - vegetachik7 on January 03, 2007
    :D :) :O God, I love this story. I mean the gore and all out murders are so jaw-dropping, I find myself grinning at the awesomeness of it all. I just love this. Just reading about Goku doing all these things is so...ahhh! But, yes, it is Kakarotto and his saiyajin side has gone crazy. Great details in all chapters, and again, I love the different styles that each author brings to such an intense, bizarre, and graphic story. I can tell that you're having a great time writing it because the words and scenes just flow so smoothly. I am quite excited to see what Vegeta thinks of all this and to see if Goku will end up getting what wants..even if he must do it by force! o.O I'm looking forward to the next chapter(s). Great stuff!

  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on December 29, 2006
    SO awesome that Vegeta woke up!!! I am avidly waiting for the nextupdate soon!

  • From ANON - Death Note on December 29, 2006
    Wow, so Vegeta's going to find out everything huh? Update fast.

  • From ANON - Tanya Green on December 29, 2006
    Poor Gohan he lost everyone close to him. I hope he kills Goku, plus it's great that he is a ss3 now. I like the story but I don't like the fact he killed family members.... Well maybe Pan and ChiCHi but poor Goten. Gohan should win for once.

  • From ANON - Noel on December 21, 2006
    Saiyajinprincess
    hi there,
    itīs not goku for me.
    no. not a bit. because nothing is left from him.
    actually you took everything he really is.
    and actually i donīt get, why you didīnt create your own character for your story?
    because now itīs not even a guy whoīs familiar to kakarott.
    itīs a ...err... "freddie-killya-jason-junior-whatever-person" who needs a carbage. and urgent.
    i really donīt have a clue, why you used goku for that. if you know,tell me!wanna know! ^-^
    ^.~ i think you should use ur fantasy, to do your own thing, to write originals? (well,just a suggestion.)
    whatever. your story, not mine. :)
    and thatīs that.
    bye. ^^

    Saiyajinprincess

    We did it this way because not many people do. It is a side that has never shown on Goku. We have seen Nappa, Raditz, and Vegeta act this way but never Goku. We took it to what it would be like if he never lost his Saiyan rage. Besides more will be revealed. But we did what no one else does, we just took the outragous idea we came up with and the story stemmed.




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