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Reviews for A Little Light of Love

By : squallstorm
  • From ANON - gollumsfriend on August 05, 2015
    ....since you asked, the last chapter felt quite anticlimactic to me. The story was also difficult to enjoy at times due to the large number of grammatical errors and constantly having to see stuff like this every paragraph:style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma'>Roy style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:Tahoma'>
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  • From ANON - Doodle_Penguin on December 04, 2009
    ...hhhhmmmmmm I Love this storie. I really do. I spent the last three days reading it between work hours. The ending kinda caught me by surprise though. It just kinda jumped out of no where. But i still love it. Thank you for this creation.
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  • From ANON - Reese on September 30, 2008
    I really enjoyed this story. I felt the ending needs a little work though. I'd like to see what happens after this. How Ed and Roy first get together. It's kind of glossed over here.
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  • From yeagerbomb on September 04, 2008
    25:
    *pauses in an attempt to gather thoughts, then says the hell with it, and gets on with the review*
    i really loved this story. the whole ride was amazing. it's been so long since i read any of this. i missed when the last chapter went up!! O.O thus, my just now reading it because i saw it and it said 'complete' and didn't think i'd finished it. and i hadn't. i think i ended up reading 24, like, three times. when it went up, at least once between then and now, and then before i read 25 tonight. anyway, this was a great story. i don't remember all the details of the story, because i've been reading it since last winter, but i remember enough of it to know how genuinely great it was. maybe some grammar errors, but there is no reason for me to nit-pick. the plot and the emotions were so intense. i was truely drawn in. i loved roy and his characterization. i particularly liked his differences from mustang, and the way the two plotlines were brought together in the begining. everything was just spectacular.
    i am so happy we finally had a lemon! and the fact that it was the only one in the story made it that much more appreciated and special. when the section with the lemon in it started, the line was something about the mountain air, i was thinking, "it's gonna be all 'brokeback mountain', ain't it??" and it kinda was. yays.
    thank you so much for posting this story, it was very good and made me very happy. i suppose i could stop rambling now, since i seem to have run out of things to say and need to go to bed. again, great fic.~
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  • From ANON - MustangsHavoc on July 12, 2008
    It was just perfect. It fit so well with the rest of the story. They still had to struggle in the way but were finding thier own happiness.

    I am thrilled and sad that this story is over. It had been amazing to follow! But you did us all a fovor by ending it here, wide open, giving our imaginations plenty of room to dream!

    Thank you for sharing this with us.
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  • From Afrieal on July 12, 2008
    Both of us enjoyed it a lot and are sad it's over you've done a wonderful job. We hope you continue to write more and more.

    Affie and Rysha
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  • From SarahTaylor on July 12, 2008
    I can't believe it's over, I'm still mad at you for killing Izzy but this ending makes up for it.
    I love this story and you finished it beautifully.
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  • From spoon10488 on June 01, 2008
    Awesome story can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From Kiheki on May 22, 2008
    I have so far read up to...well..Chapter 13....and I am really enjoying this story. ( I read A LOT!!) My many thanks for writing such a captivating piece so far.
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  • From yeagerbomb on May 21, 2008
    damn the universe. arg. i want more!! this story is really good, and i'm always looking forward to more! please update soon!! i love ed and roy, and i KNEW ed would compare al and roy for not giving answers. they're both jerks. jerks. anyway, great chapter, and i can't wait for more!~
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on May 13, 2008
    Ah-ha! Now we're getting to the part of the story I've been wanting to see! Personally, I'm glad the action's backed off a bit now. There's been too much going on for Roy and Ed to even begin thinking about being together. Now both they and Al and Noa have time to figure things out! :) I feel really bad for Roy. He knows he's gay and in his heart of hearts wants Ed but society has beaten him down so much that he thinks he can't live and love like he wants to. so sad. Maybe he'll figure something out on the trip back to the States. Is Roy going to leave the military? Is Ed going to go with Roy to visit the reservation? Is Roy's grandfather still alive? I wonder what he would think of Ed...

    Ever since I saw the movie, I've wondered about when Ed and Al stopped looking for the bomb. It had to have happened. My thinking was like Al's; they are just two people who can only accomplish just so much and two against the whole world is asking a bit too much. There had to come a point when they realized just how hopeless and impossible a task it was and given up the fight. I wondered if Ed ever regretted coming back to this world to try and reclaim the bomb. I mean, he and Al gave up everything they had ever known to get the bomb back and, once that became an impossibility, it had to hurt like hell to realize that everything they'd done, everything they'd sacrificed, had been for naught! (Also, I imagined that when then bombs were dropped on Nagasaki and Hiroshima that that just had to kill their souls. I know they felt responsible for all of it, classic Elric angst. But that's getting a bit ahead of things...) I guess the big question now becomes what do Ed and Al do with their lives now that the search for the bomb is no longer the driving force in their lives? How do you give up your goals and carry on? How do you just live? (In Ed's case, I hope it's with Roy! :D)
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From alleycat88 on May 11, 2008
    YAY! An update! Excellent one too! Full of angsty goodness and lots of emotion!
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 09, 2008
    I'm at a loss for words, and trust me, that don't happen often!!
    When I saw that this story had been updated it took me a minute to remember that it was one of the ones I read. Once I had remembered, I thought of Izzy and then had to re-read the end of the last chapter to catch back up.
    Thank you for updating, I admit I wasn't looking for it, largely due to the amount of FMA yaoi I've been reading XD I've kinda forgotten some of the stories I've read. Please don't wait so long to update, I really like this story and I loved the interaction between Al and Ed at the end of the chapter. And the interaction between Roy and Ed, that was good too. Ah hell, it was all good. (*has been awake going on 20odd hours now, forgive me if I'm rambling*).
    Basically, the gist of the review is, update soon please!!!
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  • From yeagerbomb on April 25, 2008
    chapter 23:

    ENCOURAGING!!! anyway, i don't remember how i was reviewing, so i decided to label the chapter number. this is a great story (though i did have to reread 22 to remember wtf was going on...)! i really love it. my sister told me it was updated because i stopped checking on fma altogether (i got back into naruto). but i'm glad she told me, because i REEEEEEEEEAAAAAALLLLLY wanna know what happens in this!! so please update as soon as possible. the death-scene was cool. i can't believe mustang got hit by a car!! that's so lame. anyway, i love you and the story, so be sure to keep writing!!~
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  • From ANON - Twisted_Reaper on April 19, 2008
    I give you a million tons of encouragement!! Please write more!!! I love the story!!
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